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It feels a little rushed.

Love how you make Mutou a deeper character. All Hisao did was make him sound like a socially awkward fool who hated his job.

Sperance wrote:You... You're enjoyin this, aren't you? Making us suffer like this. You're evil.

This. This so much. I was eagerly awaiting this continuation.

Great second part. A little sappy (not really a bad thing), but I like this alternate. I also really like how you lead up to the third part with that ending.

Great set of short stories. I know this topic is kind of old, but I was just skimming for fanfics I haven't read yet.

Love that ending

It feels weird having Rin contact Hanako and in general for Rin to actively seek her out.

I do enjoy the story though. Will you include any other game characters?

Yup, definitely read everything in black.

Is there some kind of compendium of all your Katawa Shoujo fanfics including the <100 word shorts? I feel like marathoning through them.

Interested to see how this turns out. WRITE MOAR PLEASE Wow, thanks guys. i didn't think anyone would want to read anymore. I'll start to plot out a second part, and put some more into it. Just one question... was the ending obvious? I wasn't going for a sixth sense thing there but i'm curious. My ...

Mahorfeus wrote:Which Scrubs episode was it anyway?

The premise does sound vaguely familiar, but it fit so well with all this that I must have thrown it out the window.

Ben's final episode.

Now comes the part where you keep going.

Keep going please. I like this alternate.

It's been three weeks, going on four and I finished every good ending branch once, replayed two and have every intention of doing the other three. I don't have the heart to do the neutral or bad endings. If you think you've gotten enough entertainment from this game, I say stop now. Going further wi...

*Punts a puppy after reading the last few lines*

Wow....loved the twist.