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- Fri Jan 04, 2013 4:37 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: -
- Replies: 107
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Re: Misstep [Hanako] [EXPLICIT CONTENT] [1/3]
The story is set an undetermined amount of time after the good end. We'll learn more about Hanako's relationship with Hisao and how it started to go downhill a bit in the next few chapters.
- Fri Jan 04, 2013 4:03 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: -
- Replies: 107
- Views: 43118
- Fri Jan 04, 2013 5:15 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: -
- Replies: 107
- Views: 43118
Re: Misstep [Hanako] [EXPLICIT CONTENT] [1/3]
I felt like changing the plot's progression to be a little bit slower-paced. Instead of jumping right in, I had Len Mao stick to his word from Chapter 2 and start Hanako off small. It's changed on Pastebin now too.JTC545 wrote:Any specific reason for the chapter 3 rewrite? (I read the original on pastebin)
- Thu Jan 03, 2013 11:57 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: -
- Replies: 107
- Views: 43118
- Tue Jan 01, 2013 6:36 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: -
- Replies: 107
- Views: 43118
Re: Misstep [Hanako] [EXPLICIT CONTENT] [12/31]
A well written story and an interesting plot, I wonder what hisao would think if hanako dissaperd after a fight. We're probably going to find out! :wink: Thank you all for your comments so far, no matter how uncertain they may be. I'm looking forward to this as much as the rest of you, after all.
- Mon Dec 31, 2012 10:04 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: -
- Replies: 107
- Views: 43118
- Mon Dec 31, 2012 10:03 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: -
- Replies: 107
- Views: 43118
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Forget it.
- Mon Dec 31, 2012 5:22 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: A pseudo-pseudo Suzu route (completed)
- Replies: 916
- Views: 735861
Re: A pseudo-pseudo Suzu route (updated 12/31)
Yesssss, I have been waiting for this, and I see you edited my art into the last chapter. Hooray! This is the bed thing!
(do not ask about "I am the bed". the answer is "japanese mario kart voice clips".)
(do not ask about "I am the bed". the answer is "japanese mario kart voice clips".)
- Mon Dec 17, 2012 9:12 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: A pseudo-pseudo Suzu route (completed)
- Replies: 916
- Views: 735861
Re: A pseudo-pseudo Suzu route (updated 12/15)
I spoke to Scissorlips about this in private so he's already heard me say this, but one of the hardest parts of writing a route in text format is having multiple endings, because unless you explicity state "this is the end of this branch" there are sure to be people who don't pick up on it...
- Mon Dec 17, 2012 7:41 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: A pseudo-pseudo Suzu route (completed)
- Replies: 916
- Views: 735861
Re: A pseudo-pseudo Suzu route (updated 12/15)
To elaborate: Scissorlips wrote: Previous I First To super-elaborate: please give the previous two/three chapters one more read-through. Er, I don't get it. I think maybe one or both of us are misinterpreting the other's words. When I said about the milli-scene and the next chapter, I was referring...
- Sun Dec 16, 2012 12:51 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: -
- Replies: 67
- Views: 23400
Re: Doomish's Misha One-Shot Collection! [EXPLICIT~!] [12/15
It is a work of art. You so money, DanjaDoom. <3DanjaDoom wrote: You played my hand
- Sat Dec 15, 2012 12:48 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: -
- Replies: 67
- Views: 23400
- Sat Dec 15, 2012 10:13 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: A pseudo-pseudo Suzu route (completed)
- Replies: 916
- Views: 735861
Re: A pseudo-pseudo Suzu route (updated 12/15)
He meant the part about skinning said grapes, not eating them. I guess skinning grapes is a thing people do! I did not know that.
- Sat Dec 15, 2012 8:10 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: The Pusher
- Replies: 7
- Views: 4901
Re: The Pusher
I really really enjoyed this story. I don't have much else to say other than that but it was certainly a refresher to read through!
- Fri Dec 14, 2012 8:55 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: death's life
- Replies: 7
- Views: 3421
Re: death's life
A word of advice: Capital letters in appropriate spots. You should probably use them!