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Mirage_GSM wrote:Disagree with Broghurt.
Thanks for posting it in manageable chunks. Some of us don't have enough free time to spend a whole day reading.

I'm with Mirage here. I think the pace you've set is fine.

It also strikes me as odd that Rika appears to have disappeared entirely. I last saw her when the three of them were in the cafeteria together, and Rika left on account of Hisao and Saki's cloying lovey-dovey-ness. Why make them out to be friends (or, at least, mutually agreeable acquaintances) if ...

Doomish wrote:That is in fact what I am implying, Katawa Shoujo Forums user Brogurt

I didn't get it immediately. I thought it was funny.

(also, good story.)

Hmm... I wonder if you'll think it's mean or nice for me to say that I almost wish you'd forget about Miya and just write more Rin. Miya is an interesting character for sure, but you write Rin better than just about anyone who isn't Aura and the world needs more of that. For this story I think the ...

I'm just trying to figure out why they're talking about communist plots in Hebrew, of all things. What's wrong with good ol' Russian eh?

That probably the proper response to Rika in any context, honestly... assuming one isn't already harboring some deep self-destrctive issues and feels more or less like they have nothing to lose. With the right setup I find this Hisao entirely believable. I don't think we've seen that setup, though ...

Rika is fat C'mon, man, you're not even trying. Doomish: I think the premise suffers on account of Rikabro's path; your Rika lines up pretty much perfectly with his, and as such she's not as novel as she might be otherwise. Also, Hisao's relatability plummets when he goes along with her request: th...

Define "normal". Rika isn't one of the main routes, so we know very little about her, it is entirely possible that some characters have those kinds of fetishes. I knew someone who did, and at the risk of sounding like a suicidal, bat-shit crazy guy, pain does have a sort of release to it....

(Also, I am unsure what you mean by 'phase', would you kindly elaborate?) Presumably the "I'm going to have the characters do bloody, stupid, and/or extreme things instead of having them interact like, y'know, normal people" bit. The cast of KS does have their share of issues, but part of...

advicefrog wrote:Thank me later

Assuming you're not banned.

He'll get to it when he gets to it. Until then find some other way to amuse yourself.

Because people have been using it as troll fuel ever since it was posted posted on /vg/ That's not surprising, given your tendency to threadcrap whenever your favorite pairing isn't endorsed. When you then go on to write a story villifying Hanako and turning Hisao into doormat^2 you gotta figure so...

Brogurt wrote:Emi wouldn't just be embarassed, she'd be flat lol out outclassed by her mom so badly that she'd have to triple her sluttiness to keep up.

But on the upside Emi's not losing the war against gravity, so she has that going for her.

Oddball wrote:Nobody ever does embarrassing insulting fanart of my stories.

That's because your stories are pretty good, and we aren't inclined to mock them.

Brogurt wrote:either you're all fucking insane, or i am

Wait, is there even a question as to which it is? I mean, duh.

(Seriously, you're the one who keeps writing about Hanako even though you clearly hate her. I don't know why you do this, but it leaves no question as to the state of your sanity.)

On an un related note, I couldn't figure out any reasons why Meiko, Akira, and Yuuko would have to share the same shower so that scene was dropped. :wink: Akira's easy, given how often she visits. The others . . . I got nothin'. Meiko would be awkward anyway given Emi. (and I've never understood th...