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I suppose the "pretty long" thing can go both ways. If people see a wall of text they could well be put off, but then again if you were known to be an alright author then I think people would read it anyway. I think that if you're looking to improve then perhaps this may not be the way to do it ...

Totally breaking the running theme here, but I Am Boss and I can do that... To the guys that are putting choices in your scripts... is that because you are stuck and can't decide for yourself, or that you want to draw in the audience a little, or... what? Normally I would think it was one person ...

Wow. I'm not too used to posting my writings, so I was a little nervous. Thanks for the kind feedback... :) I bet after Hisao's first 'incident', Iwanako was given the nickname 'The Heartbreaker'. I like that idea and it would explain why Iwanako is determined to get Hisao back. I really didn't ...

I got a bit carried away and posted an awfully long post in the feedback forum (sorry again), and amongst it was a wish-list of what I'd like to see. I doubt any of it will actually happen, so I decided to write my own scenes/story paths and post them here. 'Put up or shut up', right? ;) I tried to ...

Thanks Aura.

I'm sorry my feedback went on so long, especially for my first post to the forums. I kind got carried away, but I hope it wasn't all bad.

As for the "what I'd do" things in my feedback, I will probably just write a few scenes and post them in the Fan Fiction section.

First of all, congratulations. Act 1 is a fine beginning to Katawa Shoujo. I downloaded Act 1 this weekend (I wonder if it is a more recent build), and spent most of the weekend playing it and exploring all the story paths. I thought it was well written/produced/executed. Kudos to you all. :) This ...