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The tone and pace of the writing is perfect.

<had Kick Out The Jams (Live); Rage against the machine playing as i read this.>

EEEEExcellent

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The way I distinguish good writing is not that you read it; but you experience it.

Hindsight is always 20-20, but looking back, it's still a bit fuzzy.

Did anyone else have Megadeth voice & music playing in their head when they read that line? hehe

Tom Noble wrote: Oh, and the FOG.

I can't help but think of the foggy realm of the TV from Persona 4...

Dammit! Now i've got Pursuing my true self playing in my head

My first thought was along the lines of
"she is a he"
(Hisao gonna get raped)

But hey, that was equally disturbing

hm.... unexpected; but awesome nonetheless

This... is pure awesome.
Hungrily awaiting the next installment!

G3n0c1de wrote: Viower Excretion Advisd

And naturally, from that we can assume that anyone who does not act cautiously, abiding by the warning and excreting, is full of shit.

(Or perhaps it is a case of, WARNING: WRITER'S EXCRETION IMMINENT... i guess we'll never really know)

Oh my bad, i thought this was a cooking thread.

Though i'm sure there's quite a few out there who'd consider Hanako edible...

Gentlemen, you have inspired my current background.



30 seconds with MS paint is all you need when the inspiration is right in front of you

Also, very nice work Laughing man, i'm fighting the urge to start writing stories again...

anon wrote:lol I would also do Hanako in under 10 minutes

Otherwise she'll burn?