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by gibzx
Sun Jun 17, 2018 9:39 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Empty Nest for the Holidays — A tremendously late 8S story for Scratchminus
Replies: 6
Views: 4206

Empty Nest for the Holidays — A tremendously late 8S story for Scratchminus

Empty Nest for the Holidays Emi is invited on a Christmas trip by Hisao’s family. She tells her mom, Meiko, who excitedly encourages Emi to go with them. However, after Emi is gone, Meiko realizes that this means she’ll have to figure out how to spend her first Christmas alone. Oh shit, what's this? ...
by gibzx
Thu Jun 08, 2017 10:56 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Infinite Promises - A Lilly Epilogue [updated 6/8]
Replies: 51
Views: 31114

Infinite Promises - Chapter 2: Losing Touch (PART 3)

Act 1: Conjecture Losing Touch - part 3 I lay down on the living room sofa and let the cool breeze from the window caress my body. Today’s weather has been treating us well, despite it being summertime. tmp tmp tmp I hear Hisao’s footsteps come down the carpeted stairs with excitement. “Feeling tire ...
by gibzx
Sun Jun 04, 2017 9:13 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Infinite Promises - A Lilly Epilogue [updated 6/8]
Replies: 51
Views: 31114

Infinite Promises - Chapter 2: Losing Touch (PART 2)

Part 2/3 is here! I hope you like it, I had fun writing this ones. I'll see you guys in two days when the final part is released. hope you enjoy the read! :D ...
by gibzx
Sun Jun 04, 2017 1:51 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Infinite Promises - A Lilly Epilogue [updated 6/8]
Replies: 51
Views: 31114

Re: Infinite Promises - A Lilly Epilogue [updated 6/2]

Ahh!! This is the first time in a fic I've actually loved Hisao's parents, this is great! It's weird to see Lilly faltering, even if it is just in her dream. KS and many fics continue with the 'perfect and proper' shtick. This is a good change up from that. Also, so much art holy crap!! A cover ...
by gibzx
Fri Jun 02, 2017 12:00 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Infinite Promises - A Lilly Epilogue [updated 6/8]
Replies: 51
Views: 31114

Infinite Promises - Chapter 2: Losing Touch (PART 1)

It’s been awhile huh? I promised to release chapter two by the end of March and here we are starting June. I actually had most of it written by March, but I grew to dislike the plot I was going with, so I scrapped nearly 10k words and restarted over and over until finally I found my mojo again. My s ...
by gibzx
Fri May 19, 2017 11:54 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (Completed)
Replies: 1250
Views: 1227449

Re: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (Updated 5/18)

Loved the new chapter, amazing work as always Euro. It was great to take a peek at Saki's past in the previous chapter, and it's awesome we get a more in-depth look for this one too. I wasn't expecting you to update this month, a surprise, to be sure, but a greatly welcome one. Saki's plot is super ...
by gibzx
Thu Feb 16, 2017 8:16 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Infinite Promises - A Lilly Epilogue [updated 6/8]
Replies: 51
Views: 31114

Re: Infinite Promises - A Lilly Route Epilogue [updated 2/11

I've read a lot of Lilly/Hisao epilogues and fanfics, but I think this one is rather unique, I'm really liking it. Also your portrayal of Hisao's parents seems much different than what I'm used to, it's a nice change of pace. I'm really glad you liked it! :D Hisao's parents are only given about ...
by gibzx
Sun Feb 12, 2017 10:19 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Infinite Promises - A Lilly Epilogue [updated 6/8]
Replies: 51
Views: 31114

Re: Infinite Promises - A Lilly Route Epilogue [updated 2/11

That's why I always recommend writing two or three chapters ahead of what you post... Yeah definitely learnt my lesson. I wanted to try different update schedules, so I attempted to release 1-1 on a one part weekly basis not thinking that doing so wouldn't allow me extra time to refine my writing ...
by gibzx
Sat Feb 11, 2017 11:34 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Infinite Promises - A Lilly Epilogue [updated 6/8]
Replies: 51
Views: 31114

Re: Infinite Promises - A Lilly Route Epilogue [updated 2/11

Hey guys! I decided to rewrite the first two parts of the chapter as I felt they weren't up to standard. As always, feedback would be greatly appreciated. I recommend you check them out as nearly 95% of it was changed, including some aspects of the story as well as more exposition.
by gibzx
Tue Feb 07, 2017 8:41 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Infinite Promises - A Lilly Epilogue [updated 6/8]
Replies: 51
Views: 31114

Re: Infinite Promises - A Lilly Route Epilogue [updated 2/7]

As always, thanks a lot for helping me improve my writing, Mirage! Really appreciate it! My new goal is to release the next chapter with no errors for you to find. That would be one hell of an achievement :P . See you next time! Good luck with that. Mirage is the king of all Grammar Nazis. :twisted ...
by gibzx
Tue Feb 07, 2017 8:25 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Infinite Promises - A Lilly Epilogue [updated 6/8]
Replies: 51
Views: 31114

Re: Infinite Promises - A Lilly Route Epilogue [updated 2/7]

Corrected for past perfect. And there I was, tracking the ball as it soared through the air, my eyes widening as it got closer and closer to the place I dreaded most and struck the principal's window, instantly shattering it. Usually your dialogue sounds quite natural, but have you ever heard anyone ...
by gibzx
Tue Feb 07, 2017 11:42 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Infinite Promises - A Lilly Epilogue [updated 6/8]
Replies: 51
Views: 31114

Infinite Promises - Chapter 1: Magical Getaway(PART 6)

This is the last part for Act 1, Chapter 1. Everything totals a little over 17k words. Awesome! We also reached 650 views, which is super dope, I’m happy to produce more content for y’all. I know I promised to release part 4 by 1/27, but I decided to instead finish the entire first chapter and rel ...
by gibzx
Tue Feb 07, 2017 11:30 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Infinite Promises - A Lilly Epilogue [updated 6/8]
Replies: 51
Views: 31114

Infinite Promises - Chapter 1: Magical Getaway(PART 5)

Act 1: Conjecture Magical Getaway - part 5 “Toothbrushes?” “Check” “six changes of clothes, including pajamas?” “Check” “School books?” Lilly continues listing our packing inventory while I half-heartedly confirm everything is there. I told Lilly that taking three pairs of clothes would be enough, w ...
by gibzx
Tue Feb 07, 2017 11:28 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Infinite Promises - A Lilly Epilogue [updated 6/8]
Replies: 51
Views: 31114

Infinite Promises - Chapter 1: Magical Getaway(PART 4)

Hey guys! I know that I promised that I would update the story by 1/27, but I wasn’t happy with the story so I ended up scrapping a lot of pages and rewriting them, I found myself staring at a white screen for days. But I finally wrote something I’m satisfied with. So without further ado, here they ...
by gibzx
Tue Jan 24, 2017 10:21 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Infinite Promises - A Lilly Epilogue [updated 6/8]
Replies: 51
Views: 31114

Infinite Promises - Chapter 1: Magical Getaway(PART 3)

Hey guys! A new update has arrived! I got inspired by Thanatos02's Akira Pseudo-route to have a small segment before every new update where I write down my thoughts on my previous chapters. As you may know, I have corrected the grammatical and sentence structure mistakes I made in my previous ...