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It doesn't really matter. If a story is good people will read it no matter where you put it (just so long as they know about it). I have a story for this fandom on a website that many people have told me they absolutely hate. It still gets thousands of unique visitors a month. So meh. Do whatever ...

Catching up with this. Still decently written, with a lot of really nice detail. There are a few more things that make me wonder if perhaps you could use a proofreader, but given that it's on another site I'm too lazy to c'n'p them over here due to their relatively minor nature. I'm not sure what ...

HoneyBakedHam wrote:

jjm152 wrote:Chapter 6 is up.

Hisao catches up with Mutou, Lilly and Akira bicker and look for Hanako. This one has an explosive ending.

You're cold, unlike that ending.

Nothing makes me giddier than a schoolgirl than ending a chapter on a cliffhanger.

Oh boy. That.... uhhhh..... Yeah, that's.... I wonder what the odds of being involved in two catastrophic fires in a lifetime are? Let alone surviving two... Well, considering it's quite obvious the story isn't close to being over I'd say the odds are pretty much close to 100%. That doesn't mean of ...

I found myself enjoying this up until it started to diverge too much from the main trio of Taro, Ritsu and Akio (which evidently is also Mutou's first name too according to the wiki, who knew?!) Although it's definitely unorthodox, I found myself regretting how you dropped the potential love ...

Chapter 6 is up.

Hisao catches up with Mutou, Lilly and Akira bicker and look for Hanako. This one has an explosive ending.

Jeez, I thought this was dead by this point. Glad to have been proven wrong, this stuff's great! :D I've gotta say, I still really like this. Sure, it may require that I push myself through some of the "ouch" moments I'm the kind of person who finds it hard to read those kind of misfortunes , but I ...

Sorry for the long break between updates, I'm sure you guys know how it is. It was really hard for me to write this chapter for some reason, which is strange since it's still following the plot outline I originally wrote.

Chapter 5

Newest Chapter is up.

More developments between Hisao and Lilly and a dramatic reunion in a train station for three friends.

:evil: *Jumps into car and drive at full speed to mexico* See ya! Anyway. Another tip I would give is perhaps write out a rough skeleton of the story, or perhaps even write out an entire act before you post the chapter. With the first one it gives you a clear idea of what you want to do and can ...

LorSquirrel wrote:He wasn't saying that were promoting one as superior. He was just responding to what you said about first person narratives.

Perhaps I got lost reading between the lines. I took his statement as being defensive of the first person narrative, when on my part no offense was meant.

It happens. XD

One thing I've noticed, particularly popular with people who haven't written much, is an over reliance on first person narrative for their works. I think that's a matter of taste. As you've pointed out, both first and third person narrative have their strengths, and writers of classic works across ...

Ah. Okay. I think I was reading the previous post wrong. I'm thinking about doing something like that with my current running fanfiction and since the OC is blind I think I could easily swing something like that. Thank you for the example btw. That's another classic example - someone acting off, or ...

Yes. The unreliable narration. I apologize I should have been clearer. There are quite a few examples out there on Google I think, so I'll leave the searching for exact passages up to you. However, I will propose a thought experiment. Imagine trying to write something from the first person ...

One thing I've noticed, particularly popular with people who haven't written much, is an over reliance on first person narrative for their works. I think as a general rule of thumb, while first person narrative is great for providing an intimate connection with a character, that also works against ...