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- Sat Jun 07, 2014 3:42 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Steel [We're on the third chapter now!]
- Replies: 34
- Views: 13989
Re: Steel [We're on the third chapter now!]
Hey hey! I'm back after speaking French. though to be fair I was never gone because I was using a differ... I mean, I was a lurker. Yes... A lurker... A lurker who put up with Creepypasta's editing format for a grand total of 2 minutes to write his story... So what was the lesson or even basic ...
- Fri May 30, 2014 4:55 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: The Manila Tales –A Summer-ish Series Conclusion Update
- Replies: 159
- Views: 69353
Re: The Manila Tales –A Summer-ish Series
After reading this, ( I haven't read the rest of your works) I feel like I'm not suppose to be reading this yet and I picked up some kind of sequel... I think. It's that kind of thing where you go to the libary, see a cool book, check it out and start reading it. Then around page 150 you get the ...
- Fri May 30, 2014 2:32 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Bugger It, Oneshot Thread (Morse Update 10/4/16)
- Replies: 161
- Views: 84356
Re: Bugger It, I'll Make This A Oneshot Thread (Updated 12/5
Ne pouvait pas faire valoir qu'une langue est de forme d'art possède son propre ? Toutes les langues ont beaucoup de choses que l'on peut exprimer pas la même façon, donc en limitant les langues vous êtes également limiter le route les gens peuvent s'exprimer.
- Wed May 28, 2014 5:31 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Steel [We're on the third chapter now!]
- Replies: 34
- Views: 13989
Re: Steel [We're on the third chapter now!]
Drug Abuse, what???
- Wed May 28, 2014 1:40 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Steel [We're on the third chapter now!]
- Replies: 34
- Views: 13989
Re: Steel [We're on the third chapter now!]
Ahhh man... now I have to take out the Mahou Shoujo scence... now I'm all kinds of depressed... no... I'll leave it in... it doesn't make sense even if you know what he's saying. *Accomplished Fan Fiction Writer*
- Wed May 28, 2014 3:08 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Steel [We're on the third chapter now!]
- Replies: 34
- Views: 13989
Re: Steel [We're on the third chapter now!]
hey quick question, are you guys catching all these refernces? Like, because after I just stared at my Dora the Expoloer refernce for seconds... minutes... hours, I'm starting to question if anyone actually understands what's happening in the story. Let me know if I should tone them down
- Tue May 27, 2014 8:25 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Steel [We're on the third chapter now!]
- Replies: 34
- Views: 13989
Re: Steel [We're on the third chapter now!]
Close enoughMirage_GSM wrote:You're talking about "Acts" rather than chapters.But I know the typical traditon of a visual novel is to dedicate 4 chapters to each girl...
- Tue May 27, 2014 1:40 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Bugger It, Oneshot Thread (Morse Update 10/4/16)
- Replies: 161
- Views: 84356
Re: Bugger It, I'll Make This A Oneshot Thread (Updated 12/5
Monsieur, j'ai à dire... vous avez le Français pire que j'aie jamais vu... JAMAIS... Je me suis retrouvé au moins de la moitié des choses que vous avez écrit à la recherche de google. Je reçois des Français n'est pas votre affaire, j'ai eu que quelques histoires il y a quand Potato a dit Je vais nage ...
- Tue May 27, 2014 1:15 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Steel [We're on the third chapter now!]
- Replies: 34
- Views: 13989
Re: Steel [We're on the third chapter now!]
It should be noted when I say "Chapter" I mean "scene" chapter just sounds cooler to me. But I know the typical traditon of a visual novel is to dedicate 4 chapters to each girl... but these aren't chapters these are "I wrote all this shit down and now I'm finding segways that make sense" So yay for ...
- Tue May 27, 2014 12:55 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: A Little More Like Yamaku
- Replies: 12
- Views: 5104
Re: A Little More Like Yamaku
This was actually pretty cool... as a conpect... I'm not sure if you ever seen someone get even get their hand cut off... but holy shit is there a lot of blood. getting two arms would be indefinitly fatal, there would too much blood loss in the first second... like even if were you hooked to a blood ...
- Mon May 26, 2014 4:25 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Steel [We're on the third chapter now!]
- Replies: 34
- Views: 13989
Re: Steel (We're on the third chapter now!)
His name is Tom, he's a rock...
- Mon May 26, 2014 2:37 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Steel [We're on the third chapter now!]
- Replies: 34
- Views: 13989
Re: Steel (Second Chapter of Emiko route) (Most currientist)
Food... I want food... I roll around my bed, why? What does rolling do to help my situation? I don't know... I'm hungry, hunger makes people do strange things. I look at my food stash, hoping there's something good there, but there's nothing there. That can't be possible, no it can't be. No I got ...
- Thu Apr 24, 2014 8:44 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Steel [We're on the third chapter now!]
- Replies: 34
- Views: 13989
Re: Steel
For those wondering, I do techinally have the next part ready, but I want to finsh the part after that so I can make sure if I slammed with extra homwork or whatever, I can make sure I have a part for the next month, at least. I don't have a schedule other than, "write a part in a month and post it ...
- Sun Apr 20, 2014 1:59 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Steel [We're on the third chapter now!]
- Replies: 34
- Views: 13989
Re: Steel
Yeah... I'm a horrible editor and so is Word and also pretty much everything else on the internet that I can find. For refernce, I will reread my stories many times, and I fix MANY spelling errors, (oh my god so many,) and just in general any broken dialouge like sudden spikes in emotion for no ...
- Sun Apr 20, 2014 12:02 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Steel [We're on the third chapter now!]
- Replies: 34
- Views: 13989
Re: Steel
Thank you for support dude! Though now I feel really pressured write everyone well, even though I planned most of this crap out, you know, like how you're suppose to. But I hope it at least does a somewhat decent job of story telling.. ing.