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Thank you Mirage :) Latest chapter has been edited. Although there are a few things here I want to discuss: "Sorry Susumu, I just remebered I'm meant to meet up with Kyoko for dinner tonight." This one's not that bad but a bit funny: this sounds like she's fated to meet up with Kyoko for d...

As requested, here is some more artwork.


Hiromi Fukuhara on the left, Chiyoko Iwasaki and Fumio Nakajima on the right.

Chapter Six- Thankless job ============================================================= My Uncle once told me in a drunken stupor, to never waste even a second when you're with a girl. I think he said this because I remember him telling me that my Father was always useless with women. Then again, ...

You picked something new that was always correct in the first chapters: "Their is going to be something delivered here... ...their is a disturbing lack of music coming from this room There - in both cases. "Picked up something new" Haha! I can't be perfect... >.> Two minor things abo...

Anyways, I wonder if Iwasaki has a crush on him or if she's just manipulating him using her feminine wiles(sp?).

Maybe? One never knows with women

The correct form here would be " have " or even the shortened form " 've " It sounds similar when you talk out loud, but in writing it's just wrong. So for the first sentence "...they would've caught..." In the second sentence there is also word order. The correct sent...

Chapter Four- Disabled with Benefits ============================================================= Crap. I better get up. These two look about ready to call an ambulance, I lift myself up slightly with my elbow. Try as I might, I can't get up. Well, I guess I'm gonna need some help, I call out to t...

What's Taka's condition? Either I keep missing it or it hasn't been said yet.

No one has mentioned it yet in the story, but a hint is in the third chapter

Just a little update, Chapter Four is on it's way but for now here's a little side work.

I like to draw my characters before I write them, I feel it's easier to visualize the scenes when I know what they look like so here's the first two:


Kichirou on the left, and Takashi on the Right.

Chapter Three- A Dragon in Formal Wear ============================================================= No one seems to notice the man that steps into the classroom, I already feel sorry for them. That naivety will be the death of them. I guess Mr. Okada is going to be our head for this year. He's sti...

In that case it should be after the first year not after the first term. Third term goes until end of March and the new school year begins in April. Oh yeah you're right. Thanks for that Mirage :) This took longer than I wanted but here it is, Chapter two. Now if you'll excuse me, I'm gonna take pa...

Thank you for the replies! Now, *Until There are even three "intil"s in the text. :-) I cannot believe I did that. I feel extremely embarrassed now :P My only other nitpick would be that you refer to him hopping across the graveyard and then note that he has his crutch with him. Is he usin...

*What you are reading here is the older for version of Puppet Show. It was a simpler time when I posted this, young and fresh I was. And dumb . . . So very, very, dumb. If anything, learn from this unfinished tripe. Learn how not to react to criticism, how not to completely drain your angst into so...