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Here is one pattern I've seen. A suggestion for longer pieces featuring Rin: One thing I felt made Rin work well in the original game is the sense that the "crazy" things she says early on take on deeper personal meanings as the story progresses. In a second playthrough, you are able to understand ...

Now if you look at Rin in Act1 or in Emi's route, she seems ... well, not more well adjusted, but more functional. She may be a bit odd, but she's fully capable of interacting and understating others, even if she doesn't quite get their meaning sometimes. That's an interesting point. It might ...

Replying, since the thread was linked to in the Book Club thread. Thought it deserved a bump. Super enjoyable short piece. Really nailed Rin's dialogue and even added some new dimensions to her, like an understanding of how others perceive her, mocking Hisao, and what they could look like as a day ...

"Intend" was a poor word choice. Sorry about that. I guess what I meant was that I want to see what is in your imagination. The ellipses strikes me like a curtain that I can't see behind. Even if there's nothing important there, it's still hidden away. Again, this is a pet peeve regarding one use of ...

I guess this is a grammatical style aside? I see what you mean, brythain. As I say, it's a personal pet peeve. The ellipses is acceptable for a casual setting like this, but it's something that I try to push, since no style guide (I know of, at least, I'm all up for being blown away), lists that as ...

I am super glad this kind of thread exists. I feel like the sort of feedback I (usually) give is too clinical for a story's main thread, where I would much rather do nothing than cheer on the author, because I know how hard taking the time to make a story is. The book club idea is great. I can let ...