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Thank the lord for Akira, I would've been very upset with Hanako if she just decided to completely ignore Hisao, like it seemed was going to happen.

Another wonderful chapter! Seriously, good job. I love how casual Akira is, even when around her boyfriend.
Also, they're adorable together.

These are pretty decent. I can't stop laughing at the Hanako's Prince one.

Well I know what story I'll be making sure to keep up on! This is a great story, save for some petty syntax errors. Don't worry though, those aren't very impeding of the clarity.

Goddamn! This really puts the "drama" in "high school drama".

Blank Mage wrote:Sooooo.... update?

One would have thought so, but 6 days seems to speak otherwise.

KeiichiO wrote:Looks more like a muffin than a cupcake.

Muffins are pretty delicious too. I'd be chill with getting one for my birthday

That was... unexpected to say the least. I did enjoy that a good amount however. Gave me something to smile at.

This is the first time in a while I've actually laughed. It feels good man, thanks.

No matter how well written this story may be, that ending completely ruined it for me. It's completely on my end, but dear god I hated that last bit. It was well done, and kudos to you, but I need happy endings, or at least not endings of people throwing away relationships because of something like ...

I have to say, that was a good chapter. You do a good job creating a character that very easily makes you want to slit his throat.
Also, I've meant to say this before, but the way you format your chapters is really well done, great work.

Good job with this chapter, I'm not the best creative writing critic so that's all I'll say. I really enjoy this character, he seems like a chill dude.

Wait, you stream the writing of this? Awesome! Where do you do it, and what do you go by?

NotSoClassy wrote:Oh I can't wait for Emi and Rin MEC trooper team.

And Lilly should be a Sniper

And make sure to give Lilly Hyper-Reactive Pupils.

bhtooefr wrote:You changed your character's name, but missed it there.

... Yeah I never claimed to be smart.
excuse me while I fix this