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- Mon Dec 09, 2013 5:29 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Christmas with the Hakamichis: A Shizune Christmas Special
- Replies: 17
- Views: 12476
Re: Christmas with the Hakamichis: A Shizune Christmas Speci
She reaches up and gives me a quick kiss on the cheek, wrapping her arm around me as we follow Misha... This doesn't seem to be the same relationship I remember from the VN :-) It’s our first Christmas together, ... but the one that catches my eye is our graduation photo. If it's their first Christ...
- Mon Dec 09, 2013 3:38 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Christmas with the Hakamichis: A Shizune Christmas Special
- Replies: 17
- Views: 12476
Christmas with the Hakamichis: A Shizune Christmas Special
So I've been working on this on the side, whenever I encounter a small obstacle with 'Blossom', and have decided to release the first part early for you guys. I hope you enjoy this, it's different to what I usually write, so I've implemented a few basic ideas I've been toying with recently. As usual...
- Sun Dec 08, 2013 4:20 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Precipitation- A Molly Pseudo Route . Update 8/12/13
- Replies: 51
- Views: 21843
Re: Precipitation- A Molly Pseudo Route . Update 8/12/13
Working on a list of edits. Consider avoiding British-isms like that, especially if they aren't used in the VN itself. (Hanako's route, and IIRC Lilly's as well, had some Australian phrasing creep in, but generally they stuck to words that meant the same thing in all dialects of English.) This. Des...
- Sat Dec 07, 2013 7:38 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: The Morning After
- Replies: 16
- Views: 7314
Re: The Morning After
Maybe it's just because I don't have any experience with shy girls, but Hanako seems a little out of character here. Walking around with her scars on show, even when alone, doesn't strike me as something she would do, but there's always the difference in character interpretation to prove me wrong. W...
- Sat Dec 07, 2013 8:09 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Blossom - A Miki pseudo-route [Development Halted]
- Replies: 191
- Views: 99128
Re: Blossom - A Miki pseudo-route [Update 30/11/2013]
“Yes, I do. I’m guessing you want to know why. Shizune is an old friend... It's odd to hear the middle sentence in casual conversation. “Alright, lets go.” Should be "let's" Of course. Deaf. I like this. He starts riding it around the shed, knocking over a stack of cones in the process. I...
- Wed Dec 04, 2013 12:29 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Tips for fanfiction writers (that means YOU)
- Replies: 169
- Views: 1925287
Re: Tips for fanfiction writers (that means YOU)
The only advice I really have to give is plan EVERYTHING very extensively. Don't settle for a vague idea of the character, even if it's somebody who doesn't appear often. I've made that mistake in the past, and now I'm constructing a complete character profile for every character I will be using in ...
- Sat Nov 30, 2013 8:46 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Blossom - A Miki pseudo-route [Development Halted]
- Replies: 191
- Views: 99128
Re: Blossom - Chapter One: Space-time Out [Part Two]
Giving me a smile and wave after we step through the main entrance, Shizune heads into the nearest stairwell and up to, I assume, the Student Council room. She might be heading up, but not the Student Council room. That's on the first floor (Risk vs. Reward). Really? I always assumed it was on the ...
- Sat Nov 30, 2013 8:14 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Blossom - A Miki pseudo-route [Development Halted]
- Replies: 191
- Views: 99128
Re: Blossom - A Miki pseudo-route [Update 30/11/2013]
They keep them there because I couldn't think of another place to put themMirage_GSM wrote:A bit... Why would they keep paperwork in an equipment shed anyway?
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- Sat Nov 30, 2013 3:27 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Blossom - A Miki pseudo-route [Development Halted]
- Replies: 191
- Views: 99128
Re: Blossom - Chapter One: Space-time Out [Part Two]
This one is a bit longer, but that's to be expected now that I'm avoiding time skips. Quite a few characters used here, and the introduction of somebody I've been meaning to use. Enjoy :lol: -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------...
- Wed Nov 27, 2013 12:39 pm
- Forum: Fan Works
- Topic: Limits of Fanfiction - What is appropriate?
- Replies: 140
- Views: 60846
Re: Limits of Fanfiction - What is appropriate?
The only "limit" I believe fan fiction has is location. Set your story in Yamaku and it can be a KS fan fiction, you don't even need to include any canon characters; Hisao doesn't need to have a heart attack and transfer. Take a look at the library for example, there are multiple non-roman...
- Tue Nov 26, 2013 6:37 pm
- Forum: Public Discussion
- Topic: I just finished Rin's route.
- Replies: 26
- Views: 9791
Re: I just finished Rin's route.
I'm not exactly a huge fan of Shizune, but I think her route makes the best ending. It's the only one that includes scenes about saying goodbye to Yamaku and the friends you've made there. I'd have to agree there. Lilly's path doesn't "finish" everything at all, her path focuses almost en...
- Tue Nov 26, 2013 2:55 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: "Fits of Many Varieties" New Chapter 12/9
- Replies: 68
- Views: 26720
Re: "Fits of Many Varieties" a Naomi Inoue Pseudo-Route
I like this, a pun-ny title and, if I'm correct, the first Naomi route on the forums.
- Sun Nov 24, 2013 9:47 am
- Forum: Fan Works
- Topic: Numb's Event Board [New 11/04/2014]
- Replies: 2
- Views: 4078
Numb's Event Board [New 11/04/2014]
Recently, I've been livestreaming some of the development of Blossom in an attempt to learn more about you guys; the community. After being given the idea on the KS reddit, I've decided to return the favour and let you guys learn more about me, my writing style and process and just anything you're c...
- Sat Nov 23, 2013 7:48 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Blossom - A Miki pseudo-route [Development Halted]
- Replies: 191
- Views: 99128
Re: Blossom - A Miki pseudo-route [Update 19/11/2013]
I looooooooooooove it. Spent my day catching up on this Fic. Nice start to Act 2, Suzu is rather funny in this fic. Not as deep and gloomy as in Scissorlip's portrayal. Keep dem updates roooooooollin'. Suzu is actually my favourite character to write so far. Note that only five characters are curre...
- Tue Nov 19, 2013 5:17 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Blossom - A Miki pseudo-route [Development Halted]
- Replies: 191
- Views: 99128
Re: Blossom - A Miki pseudo-route [Update 19/11/2013]
Mutou enters to a collective sigh, one in which he shares. Yeah, sometimes I write something weird like this, but I think it reads fine for now. I can't really come up with a better alternative right now :lol: I’ll have to wait until lunch to ask her, provided she’s awake by then. Fixed I liked the...