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As my first speed paint video, I made a drawing of Lilly Satou. Any critique would be greatly appreciated

Link to the video: http://youtu.be/rQIxs8aYVuE

Don't know if you were going for a cartoony style but it does give that feel. Values are kinda flat and could benefit from being more varied/interesting, at least in the face and hair. While her scars are probably different in the VN (less severe) i have a hunch that is the kind of stuff that falls ...

Looks nice and cartoony. I have noticed two things:Her head is a little too thick and her scars aren't that severe, so maybe lighten them a little?

Thanks for the reply! Mhm you're right. I wanted to angle her chin up a bit, but it ended up stretching her face instead.
In this drawing I wanted ...

Hanako sleeping in the library after a long book

http://i644.photobucket.com/albums/uu162/Keppay/HanakoIkezawa-1.jpg

I'd love any critiques. I used a new shading technique for her hair, so it kinda looks strange. This is also my first time posting on this forum! Hanako path is my favorite after ...