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Just a quick note, in Japan, handshakes are generally not a customary way of greeting others - in fact, it's pretty much only used in business dealings with Americans or other people from the West. It's much more common to bow - the deeper you bow, the more respect you show for the person you're gr...

Act 1 Chapter 1 Scene 1: Arrival I wonder if it's possible to die from boredom. Probably not, but just looking out the window of a car watching a bunch of trees go by does make me wonder. It wasn't so bad for the first hour or so of the drive to my new school, but soon it turned into nothing but tre...

Well it's nice to know that I'm not the only newbie who's starting a fic at the moment. I look forward to this fic.

Ranger296 wrote:Btw, you should capitalize all your "i's" and "i'm's" like I & I'm.

Yeah, I'm more used to using Microsoft office so when I'm not using it I usually forget to capitalize my I's and I'm's

by the way i have begun to write chapter two should be done either by tonight or tomorrow

Mirage_GSM wrote:

LorSquirrel wrote:On a off note have you done any fics yourself? i recognize your username but i cant remember if i saw it in a reply to a fic or if your the who actaully made it.

All my KS fics are linked to in my signature.
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Oops! Sorry i didn't notice.

Character biographies are the lazy way of going. Please don't do that. Mirage has written some stuff on here but not for a while. His Katawa Kijo was recently unearthed and brought up to the top page. Oh, right that where i saw his (or hers) user name before thanks. I still havn't gotten around to ...

Would you guys like me to edit the first post to be more descriptive, or would you rather i post something along the line of small character biographies? or should i just start writing the second chapter?

Wel for starters it would be nice to have some kind of idea what is going on here. Your pov character isn't a student, so I guess he's either a teacher or he's dropping of one of his daughters. Or maybe just visiting his younger sister if the age difference is enough, she might be a student or she ...

i'm gonna wait for some feed back before i continue writing, because i'm certain that there are thing i need improvement that have slipped past me.

i.....i like.

Okay, I have decided to scrap a lot of what I was re-writing and restart from square one again. (Yeah I know no one besides me really cares about the story anymore.) As a result lot of characters have had their names changed, a group of OC's that I had planned to be part of the main cast were remove...

i have to agree with mirage, reading it like this kinda dry.

this route has actually given me a couple of ideas for the fic i'm writing (although my god awful grammar will probably spell its doom)

loving this route so far i always wanted to see this game from Iwanako's point of view