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by LorSquirrel
Sun Mar 03, 2013 8:46 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A Painful Past (OC). Scene 2 is up.
Replies: 75
Views: 25753

Re: A Painful Past (OC) updated (3/3/13)

Just a quick note, in Japan, handshakes are generally not a customary way of greeting others - in fact, it's pretty much only used in business dealings with Americans or other people from the West. It's much more common to bow - the deeper you bow, the more respect you show for the person you're gr...
by LorSquirrel
Sun Mar 03, 2013 4:34 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A Painful Past (OC). Scene 2 is up.
Replies: 75
Views: 25753

First three original scenes (With Yukiko and Koneko mini ser

Act 1 Chapter 1 Scene 1: Arrival I wonder if it's possible to die from boredom. Probably not, but just looking out the window of a car watching a bunch of trees go by does make me wonder. It wasn't so bad for the first hour or so of the drive to my new school, but soon it turned into nothing but tre...
by LorSquirrel
Sat Mar 02, 2013 9:33 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Poker Night(Short Story)
Replies: 13
Views: 6204

Re: Poker Night(Short Story)

Well it's nice to know that I'm not the only newbie who's starting a fic at the moment. I look forward to this fic.
by LorSquirrel
Sat Mar 02, 2013 9:26 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A Painful Past (OC). Scene 2 is up.
Replies: 75
Views: 25753

Re: A Painful Past (OC) (i'm working on a better title) CH 1

Ranger296 wrote:Btw, you should capitalize all your "i's" and "i'm's" like I & I'm.
Yeah, I'm more used to using Microsoft office so when I'm not using it I usually forget to capitalize my I's and I'm's
by LorSquirrel
Sat Mar 02, 2013 8:08 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A Painful Past (OC). Scene 2 is up.
Replies: 75
Views: 25753

Re: A Painful Past (OC) (i'm working on a better title) CH 1

by the way i have begun to write chapter two should be done either by tonight or tomorrow
by LorSquirrel
Sat Mar 02, 2013 7:22 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A Painful Past (OC). Scene 2 is up.
Replies: 75
Views: 25753

Re: A Painful Past (OC) (i'm working on a better title) CH 1

Mirage_GSM wrote:
LorSquirrel wrote:On a off note have you done any fics yourself? i recognize your username but i cant remember if i saw it in a reply to a fic or if your the who actaully made it.
All my KS fics are linked to in my signature.
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by LorSquirrel
Sat Mar 02, 2013 5:30 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A Painful Past (OC). Scene 2 is up.
Replies: 75
Views: 25753

Re: A Painful Past (OC) (i'm working on a better title) CH 1

Character biographies are the lazy way of going. Please don't do that. Mirage has written some stuff on here but not for a while. His Katawa Kijo was recently unearthed and brought up to the top page. Oh, right that where i saw his (or hers) user name before thanks. I still havn't gotten around to ...
by LorSquirrel
Sat Mar 02, 2013 10:15 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A Painful Past (OC). Scene 2 is up.
Replies: 75
Views: 25753

Re: A Painful Past (OC) (i'm working on a better title) CH 1

Would you guys like me to edit the first post to be more descriptive, or would you rather i post something along the line of small character biographies? or should i just start writing the second chapter?
by LorSquirrel
Sat Mar 02, 2013 8:26 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A Painful Past (OC). Scene 2 is up.
Replies: 75
Views: 25753

Re: A Painful Past (OC) (i'm working on a better title) CH 1

Wel for starters it would be nice to have some kind of idea what is going on here. Your pov character isn't a student, so I guess he's either a teacher or he's dropping of one of his daughters. Or maybe just visiting his younger sister if the age difference is enough, she might be a student or she ...
by LorSquirrel
Sat Mar 02, 2013 2:58 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A Painful Past (OC). Scene 2 is up.
Replies: 75
Views: 25753

Re: A Painful Past (OC) (i'm working on a better title) CH 1

i'm gonna wait for some feed back before i continue writing, because i'm certain that there are thing i need improvement that have slipped past me.
by LorSquirrel
Fri Mar 01, 2013 10:33 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Exceeder (Miki X Emi) {Updated 4/1}
Replies: 124
Views: 55688

Re: Exceeder (Miki X Emi) {Updated 3/1}

i.....i like.
by LorSquirrel
Thu Feb 28, 2013 11:30 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A Painful Past (OC). Scene 2 is up.
Replies: 75
Views: 25753

A Painful Past (OC). Scene 2 is up.

Okay, I have decided to scrap a lot of what I was re-writing and restart from square one again. (Yeah I know no one besides me really cares about the story anymore.) As a result lot of characters have had their names changed, a group of OC's that I had planned to be part of the main cast were remove...
by LorSquirrel
Thu Feb 28, 2013 10:39 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Exceeder (Miki X Emi) {Updated 4/1}
Replies: 124
Views: 55688

Re: Exceeder (Miki X Emi)

i have to agree with mirage, reading it like this kinda dry.
by LorSquirrel
Wed Feb 20, 2013 1:12 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Iwanako: Mean Time to Breakdown {updated 2015-4-1}
Replies: 864
Views: 433151

Re: Mean Time to Breakdown — (Iwanako, Divergence) (u 2/14/2

this route has actually given me a couple of ideas for the fic i'm writing (although my god awful grammar will probably spell its doom)
by LorSquirrel
Sun Feb 17, 2013 6:52 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Iwanako: Mean Time to Breakdown {updated 2015-4-1}
Replies: 864
Views: 433151

Re: Mean Time to Breakdown — (Iwanako, Divergence) (u 2/14/2

loving this route so far i always wanted to see this game from Iwanako's point of view