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by LorSquirrel
Sun Mar 10, 2013 12:48 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hanako/Hisao post-Yamaku (Updated 1/2/14)
Replies: 217
Views: 89780

Re: Hanako/Hisao Mini-Fics

Oh, by the way i think this is a very good fic and it's nice to see Hanako come out of her shell a little... but i what took me out of it was the VN choice box in the second part. i'm pretty sure most other people have said this before but the choice boxes are just disruptive and takes you out of t...
by LorSquirrel
Sun Mar 10, 2013 12:00 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hanako/Hisao post-Yamaku (Updated 1/2/14)
Replies: 217
Views: 89780

Re: Hanako/Hisao Mini-Fics

Oh, by the way i think this is a very good fic and it's nice to see Hanako come out of her shell a little... but i what took me out of it was the VN choice box in the second part. i'm pretty sure most other people have said this before but the choice boxes are just disruptive and takes you out of th...
by LorSquirrel
Sat Mar 09, 2013 11:52 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hanako/Hisao post-Yamaku (Updated 1/2/14)
Replies: 217
Views: 89780

Re: Hanako/Hisao Mini-Fics

^ YES! someone make it happen!
by LorSquirrel
Sat Mar 09, 2013 11:47 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hanako/Hisao post-Yamaku (Updated 1/2/14)
Replies: 217
Views: 89780

Re: Hanako/Hisao Mini-Fic

pandaphil wrote:Thats what I figured as well. Hmm, I don't have a problem changing it if anyone has a a more appropriate phrase?

nah don't worry about it i was just being nit-picky (not something i should be doing considering how much you could probably nitpick the hell out of my fic so far.)
by LorSquirrel
Sat Mar 09, 2013 11:44 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hanako/Hisao post-Yamaku (Updated 1/2/14)
Replies: 217
Views: 89780

Re: Hanako/Hisao Mini-Fic

Thats what I figured as well. Hmm, I don't have a problem changing it if anyone has a a more appropriate phrase? Goodbye? Till we meet again? Catch ya' later? Tootles...? Catch ya' on the flip side? (Okay, this one is completely out of Lilly's character :lol:) okay someone needs to make a fic where...
by LorSquirrel
Sat Mar 09, 2013 11:32 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hanako/Hisao post-Yamaku (Updated 1/2/14)
Replies: 217
Views: 89780

Re: Hanako/Hisao Mini-Fic

Lilly's defensive look returned. "And what if you nudge too hard? What then? You've never seen one of her panic attacks. They-they're horrible to see." I thought Lilly was blind. How can she see Hanako's panic attacks? Figure of speech? Remember Lilly says "see you around" quite...
by LorSquirrel
Sat Mar 09, 2013 11:15 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hanako/Hisao post-Yamaku (Updated 1/2/14)
Replies: 217
Views: 89780

Re: Hanako/Hisao Mini-Fic

pandaphil wrote: Lilly's defensive look returned. "And what if you nudge too hard? What then? You've never seen one of her panic attacks. They-they're horrible to see."

I thought Lilly was blind. How can she see Hanako's panic attacks?
by LorSquirrel
Sat Mar 09, 2013 10:27 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A Painful Past (OC). Scene 2 is up.
Replies: 75
Views: 25751

New Update 3/9/13

Before i start with the update i would like to apologize for posting so many un-important updates and just for my constant completely un-needed posts for small things that don't affect the story. (although i do't apologize for the fun facts or The Everyday Adventures of Yukiko and Koneko because the...
by LorSquirrel
Fri Mar 08, 2013 8:37 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A Painful Past (OC). Scene 2 is up.
Replies: 75
Views: 25751

Re: A Painful Past (OC) On hold until 3/9/13

by the way. i've started writing scene 4..... i would tell you guys the name of the scene but i'm having trouble coming up a title for it. because i changed it a lot from what it was originally so it'll take awhile for an actual title
by LorSquirrel
Fri Mar 08, 2013 8:31 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: OC: Mirrors and Windows. Chapter 12 Updated
Replies: 46
Views: 13960

Re: OC: Mirrors and Windows. Chapter 3

I think everyone is looking forward to it nova
by LorSquirrel
Fri Mar 08, 2013 10:50 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A Painful Past (OC). Scene 2 is up.
Replies: 75
Views: 25751

Fun Facts #2

Fun Facts: The Everyday Adventure of Yukiko and Koneko #1 This was originally supposed to take place on Yukiko and Koneko's drive back to the city. they were supposed to get out at a rest stop and end up getting lost in the forest when they chase after a rabbit. this was dropped do to it feeling ki...
by LorSquirrel
Fri Mar 08, 2013 10:16 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: OC: Mirrors and Windows. Chapter 12 Updated
Replies: 46
Views: 13960

Re: OC: Mirrors and Windows. Chapter 3

Technically, there is only one way to pronounce vowels: あ (a) is always pronounced as in h a rm. い (i) is always pronounced as in h i t. う (u) is always pronounced as in y ou . え (e) is always pronounced as in h e ll. お (o) is always pronounced as in h o t. On their own vowels are always short. To ...
by LorSquirrel
Fri Mar 08, 2013 9:58 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A Painful Past (OC). Scene 2 is up.
Replies: 75
Views: 25751

The Everyday Adventures of Yukiko and Koneko #1 (edit)

Table of Contents The Everyday Adventures of Yukiko and Koneko #1 “Hey, wake up sleepy head.” No I don’t want to wake up this early on Sunday Koneko. Sundays are the only days that dad is home all day, and I like to be awake so I can spend time with him, not half asleep because I woke up early. I b...
by LorSquirrel
Fri Mar 08, 2013 7:18 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A Painful Past (OC). Scene 2 is up.
Replies: 75
Views: 25751

Re: A Painful Past (OC) On hold until 3/9/13

*looks back at other pages* oh. *sheepish grin*