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by LorSquirrel
Sat May 04, 2013 8:36 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A Painful Past (OC). Scene 2 is up.
Replies: 75
Views: 26158

Re: A Painful Past (OC). Scene 1 is up.

Some stuff: - For an aphasic, Lelouch sure talks a lot... - Really? Not even asking what kind of club it is? - I don't think they're in the literacy club - if they are in high school, we can safely assume they are already literate. :-) - There are different types of aphasia, and the VN never specif...
by LorSquirrel
Fri May 03, 2013 5:26 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hyacinth [18+] (Lilly Neutral End) UPDATE 4/22
Replies: 82
Views: 37928

Re: Hyacinth [18+] (Lilly Neutral End) UPDATE 4/22

Thanks guys I'm going to give it a good old go. Try it yourself, Lord knows I suck at writing. Btw anyone have any suggestions to improve on the base idea. PS to see my writing style, fanfiction pen name kymala. Personally I think I suck but hey, maybe this will be good That's no reason to not try!...
by LorSquirrel
Fri May 03, 2013 3:25 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A Painful Past (OC). Scene 2 is up.
Replies: 75
Views: 26158

Re: A Painful Past (OC). Scene 1: The Cafeteria Scene.

Dear lord in heaven, this took forever to write, but at least it's finally done. Anyway, as usual leave a comment. And yes, I am aware of the irony present in the text messages between Kyoko and Nagataka. Also, jello... that is all. Scene 1: The Cafeteria Scene part 1 I think I’m sleeping. Not dream...
by LorSquirrel
Wed May 01, 2013 11:03 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Akira Pseudo-Route [Complete!]
Replies: 916
Views: 738243

Re: Akira Pseudo-Route [Updated as of 4/23]

whats the first?
by LorSquirrel
Mon Apr 29, 2013 4:15 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A Ritsu Route (Updated 12/26)
Replies: 104
Views: 63084

Re: A Ritsu Route

Interesting
by LorSquirrel
Sun Apr 28, 2013 11:57 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Thoughts on the H-scenes?
Replies: 1289
Views: 323959

Re: Thoughts on the H-scenes?

Xanatos wrote:Well, they add sex, context (a censor depicting fried prawn does not adequately explain why Emi's ass hurts after they go to the shed...Or does it? Wahahaha~!), and characterization. :P
Hm... I guess you're right...
by LorSquirrel
Sun Apr 28, 2013 11:47 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Thoughts on the H-scenes?
Replies: 1289
Views: 323959

Re: Thoughts on the H-scenes?

This thread is to awesome. Anyway, I think the routes (with the possible exception of Hanako's) really didn't need the H-scenes for the story to progress. Don't get me wrong, I don't think they were poorly done or distasteful, I just feel like they were unnecessary to the actual stories of the girl...
by LorSquirrel
Sun Apr 28, 2013 11:15 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Thoughts on the H-scenes?
Replies: 1289
Views: 323959

Re: Thoughts on the H-scenes?

This thread is to awesome. Anyway, I think the routes (with the possible exception of Hanako's) really didn't need the H-scenes for the story to progress. Don't get me wrong, I don't think they were poorly done or distasteful, I just feel like they were unnecessary to the actual stories of the girl...
by LorSquirrel
Sun Apr 28, 2013 10:57 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Thoughts on the H-scenes?
Replies: 1289
Views: 323959

Re: Thoughts on the H-scenes?

This thread is to awesome. Anyway, I think the routes (with the possible exception of Hanako's) really didn't need the H-scenes for the story to progress. Don't get me wrong, I don't think they were poorly done or distasteful, I just feel like they were unnecessary to the actual stories of the girls...
by LorSquirrel
Sat Apr 27, 2013 9:49 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Flower and Snow
Replies: 22
Views: 13986

Re: Flower and Snow

I like it so far, keep writing.
by LorSquirrel
Sat Apr 27, 2013 12:53 am
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: If Hanako's scars looked like this...
Replies: 301
Views: 102456

Re: If Hanako's scars looked like this...

Xanatos wrote:
pandaphil wrote:appealing.
Do you think she peels after a sunburn?

Hello. I'm a very bad man.
Congratulation you just reached five thousand posts! * Festive music* Here have an internet cookie.
by LorSquirrel
Fri Apr 26, 2013 11:39 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: What is your story canon?
Replies: 117
Views: 32757

Re: What is your story canon?

Image

Proof that Rin is a deadly warrior! (Thanks KeiichiO for having this awesome profile pic)
by LorSquirrel
Fri Apr 26, 2013 10:11 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: What is your story canon?
Replies: 117
Views: 32757

Re: What is your story canon?

Its always the ones you don't expect...
by LorSquirrel
Fri Apr 26, 2013 9:50 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: What is your story canon?
Replies: 117
Views: 32757

Re: What is your story canon?

Honestly, whats the point in killing off Rin? Not like it would really effect the overall story that much. Although Emi might be a little sad. My fic needed a murder victim. It could've been anyone (almost) but Rin got the job. Mostly because I cannot see an armless person as a suspect. :lol: I don...
by LorSquirrel
Fri Apr 26, 2013 3:23 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: What is your story canon?
Replies: 117
Views: 32757

Re: What is your story canon?

You can't just kill Rin. You have to kill everyone like in that yandere Hanako fanfic where she bakes Hisao into cupcakes and then has the other girls eat them and then she stabs Shizune. Actually, I don't think Rin was in that one. Who wrote what!? I don't know if it's on the forums, but I found i...