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Woo update! The suspense is killing me, man. I'm sure Hisao would never cheat on Aiko. Right? Right? D:

BlackWaltzTheThird wrote:

Helbereth wrote:Shizune's mother and mine were sisters

As I recall, it was Shizune's mother and Lilly's father that were siblings.

I thought their fathers were siblings. I'm not quite sure either. :L

All the yes. Now I just need to memorize this and we'll all be good

But...but... nobody was shot... I thought I would find out what happened between Hisao and Kenji in Tokyo ;n; I'd be disappointed but the great story makes up for it!

Excellent chapter! c: I just wanted to point out one thing I noticed.. I don't know what Mom's deal is, but he's definitely petty enough to do something like that. “I haven't even bothered calling him ever since. Give him time to boil it off, I'm sure he's just a little pissed off that someone r ...

What is the update schedule, anyway? I thought it was wednesdays, for some reason, if there is a schedule at all

I love this series, it's probably my favorite KS writing! (as implied by my signature, lol)

It's decent, although the writing style was kind of jarring. It didn't really ~flow~, it was more like "This happened. Then this happened. Now i feel this way. And then suddenly". You should try to "connect" the sentences more, maybe add some new vocab to it as well. Other than that small nuisance ...

I couldn't help but grin like a smug bastard during the movie scene with Emi XD
Man, Katsuo has to be pretty damn lucky.

I love the story, especially the fact that there's a cool, relatable, and not-insane bro for Hisao. Can't wait for the next parts!

That's a nice song, but you should mention that it's a hotel california cover at the top or in the title. I hadn't realized it until I finished reading the entire thing, then I had to re-read it in tune :P It wasn't rape she wanted it, but they just can't face the facts, I actually laughed out loud ...

I enjoyed this story quite a bit, it's great! You're certainly good at writing, that's for sure.

Also, to jump on the bandwagon, that goatee (Although it wasn't as impressive as The Kilt .-.)

(someone recommended a Nakai/Setou dinner party, which sounds like a fine Thanksgiving Special to me :)) Wooooooooooooooo! oh wait, thanksgiving. Darn, that's far. D: This was an awesome ending for the series. I'm really glad you wrote this, as looking forward to the updates was always something I ...

Very interesting prologue, although the formatting is a bit weird and monotonous. Since you're using 1st person, to make it easier for the reader, I'd suggest using something akin to script format or prose (Sorry, I don't know much about writing), and separating the character's thoughts from the ...

Kenji sighed, “After three Secret Societies, a werewolf, an alien, and the Mafiya, do you really think we’re worried over a couple of two-bit mobsters with no power?” Mafia, right? Unless it's the name of a group, which i'm sure it's not. right?!?! D: Don't worry! I still read every single update, s ...

griffon8 wrote:Yes, all the chapter titles are Disney songs.

No..no that can't be right...

*checks the chapter titles*

...how did I miss that.

:wink: I hope that makes us even. At least in another universe. Oh feel free to keep posting your story this is not an act of war move along. I demand satisfaction! We shall fight upon the dueling field at dawn with flint-lock pistols and a bottle of lemon flavored lubricant. COMBUSTIBLE lemon ...

Ranger296 wrote:I'm disappointed that I enjoyed this so much.

This practically sums up a ton of people's feelings (including mine :C), lmao