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by Sev'risk'avina
Fri Dec 28, 2012 2:40 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: KS-EVANGELION (2012)
Replies: 20
Views: 10774

Re: KS-EVANGELION (2012)

Yeah, I think Silent Cook really doesn't like crossovers either (read it somewhere on the forum). Nor does he appreciate huge posts that might "glitch" the forum software (like the one I unfortunately made above ..oh boy). Two things I seem to unintentionally do a lot of actually.

http://i.qkme ...
by Sev'risk'avina
Sun Dec 23, 2012 7:55 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A pseudo-pseudo Suzu route (completed)
Replies: 916
Views: 763860

Re: A pseudo-pseudo Suzu route (updated 12/15)

Though it surprised me that she went to Shizune instead of curling up in despair in her room.

Now that got me thinking. I would probably say that she felt the need to be around someone (or more than one) but felt that her friends would be too much for her to handle. They would know she wasn't A ...
by Sev'risk'avina
Sun Dec 23, 2012 7:38 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 04/30/16 ~ recommitted to completion.
Replies: 854
Views: 511934

Re: Tomorrow's Doom - Aiko Kurai (OC) Updated 12/08

Chapter 20 - Sunny Haze (part 2)

Mthe majority head to bed right after dinner, except for Kenta, Tadao and myself. Hisao makes an effort to stay up and watch a movie with us, but when he falls asleep in his chair, I tell him to go to bed.

That one stuck out in my mind, because the only word I ...
by Sev'risk'avina
Fri Dec 21, 2012 9:28 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Fusion Jam - a collection of crossover oneshots (12/21)
Replies: 7
Views: 4365

Re: Fusion Jam - a collection of crossover oneshots (12/21)

All I have seen of Avatar is the trailer for the live action movie. Looked neat. I just imagined the 'bending' to be similar to any other kind of magic, like Dungeons and Dragons or something, only tied to a specific element as mentioned. If you're not into fantasy stories with magic and stuff then ...
by Sev'risk'avina
Fri Dec 21, 2012 9:16 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 04/30/16 ~ recommitted to completion.
Replies: 854
Views: 511934

Re: Tomorrow's Doom - Aiko Kurai (OC) Updated 12/08

The thing that happened with my PSU, by the way, was that the fan(s) died. They were making all kinds of noise for a week or two, then just shut off the other night. I knew it was coming, but what can you do, really?

Ah, yeah. I don't believe I've had one die on me like that, but I tend to go ...
by Sev'risk'avina
Fri Dec 21, 2012 2:03 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 04/30/16 ~ recommitted to completion.
Replies: 854
Views: 511934

Re: Tomorrow's Doom - Aiko Kurai (OC) Updated 12/08

I suspect history will remember this Mayan Calendar hysteria as another 'Y2K' scare.

You fool! You've doomed us all!

Good to hear the PC trouble isn't too serious. I take it your not a big computer person though. I think I have three or four working PSU's lying about not being used at the moment ...
by Sev'risk'avina
Wed Dec 19, 2012 2:52 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Akira Pseudo-Route [Complete!]
Replies: 916
Views: 755957

Re: Akira Pseudo-Route [Updated as of 12/16]

even if I'll look like a giant hypocrite by not fixing some of the other much more glaring discrepancies.

Revision is up to you entirely, so I think that calling yourself a hypocrite over what you choose to revise is not being fair to yourself. You could revise just punctuation and grammar errors ...
by Sev'risk'avina
Mon Dec 17, 2012 7:23 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A pseudo-pseudo Suzu route (completed)
Replies: 916
Views: 763860

Re: A pseudo-pseudo Suzu route (updated 12/15)

http://i.imgur.com/c1WWV.png

That picture is great .

As for the ending, I think I read something the creator of Homestuck said about how a continuous story changes based on how it's read. That is, if it is read from beginning to end as the content is released, or in large chunks. And if I recall ...
by Sev'risk'avina
Mon Dec 10, 2012 10:59 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Akira Pseudo-Route [Complete!]
Replies: 916
Views: 755957

Re: Akira Pseudo-Route [Updated as of 12/7]

I also like that some of your older Akira stuff is being... well, re-purposed?
A couple of other people have pointed that out as well. Back when I wrote that Akira fapfic, it was a 'just for fun' thing that didn't really pay any mind to the canon or, really, anything sensible in general. Case-in ...
by Sev'risk'avina
Sun Dec 09, 2012 4:53 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Akira Pseudo-Route [Complete!]
Replies: 916
Views: 755957

Re: Akira Pseudo-Route [Updated as of 12/7]

I am definitely enjoying the story so far, but unfortunately the only other comment I have is...
Is that good or bad? Sorry, it's the first thing that came to mind. I can see how one might interpret as out of character, at any rate.

Oh no its literally "I lack the words to convey my feelings ...
by Sev'risk'avina
Sat Dec 08, 2012 4:35 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Akira Pseudo-Route [Complete!]
Replies: 916
Views: 755957

Re: Akira Pseudo-Route [Updated as of 12/1]

I am definitely enjoying the story so far, but unfortunately the only other comment I have is...

A checkered bikini?! Mother of g-

Wait, no, that’s not what I should be questioning.

A private beach?! Mother of god, just how wealthy is her family?

http://solspot.com/files/2011/05/mother-of ...
by Sev'risk'avina
Sat Dec 08, 2012 3:32 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Haunting: A Love Story *UPDATED 02/26/2015*
Replies: 124
Views: 81528

Re: The Haunting: A Love Story *UPDATED*

It's seems to me that there are almost two Hiaso's in this story; the one that likes Shizune and the one that likes Lilly. I get almost a left brain right brain relationship between the two. Still one entity, but completely different processes. Hrmm, maybe he did go a little nuts.

And this is ...
by Sev'risk'avina
Thu Dec 06, 2012 12:00 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Reunion (Shizune Bad End one-shot)
Replies: 15
Views: 14035

Re: Reunion (Shizune Bad End one-shot)

Well since some one else necro'd this thread already I have exactly zero shame in continuing to do so!

Having only read the edited version (according to the comments ex post facto) I was able to follow the story. The ending took a reread to cement the facts presented, specifically the time ...
by Sev'risk'avina
Sun Nov 25, 2012 3:59 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A pseudo-pseudo Suzu route (completed)
Replies: 916
Views: 763860

Re: A pseudo-pseudo Suzu route (updated 11/25)

H'okay, so, the timing of this is perfect for me. I'll start with my response to the newest post (eeeee!) then do a little catch up.

I'm very happy Kenji and Shizune (Mutou too I guess) are popping back up in the story, makes it feel like this is a part (a pseudo-part if you will) of the VN. Since ...
by Sev'risk'avina
Fri Nov 09, 2012 1:41 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A pseudo-pseudo Suzu route (completed)
Replies: 916
Views: 763860

Re: A pseudo-pseudo Suzu route (birthday extra added 11/4)

Welp, I'm not the first one to do this so... I guess that's what I get for dropping in on a thread 44 pages long, let alone KS itself last month. Subscribed pretty much just to get my two cents out.

Firstly, I have not finished all of the routes. I've done Shizune (good and bad) and Hanako (good ...