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by LordDarknus
Sun Feb 16, 2014 2:51 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: What a wonderful world
Replies: 2
Views: 2253

What a wonderful world

“What a wonderful world...” she exclaims with cheer into the wind, combing her fingers through the tussled strands of her dark golden hair. It's a warm breeze that brings the sunshine into our hearts, and carries the soothing whispers of fresh flowers all around us, smiling with the light of the sun...
by LordDarknus
Sat Jan 25, 2014 2:06 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Life Expectancy
Replies: 10
Views: 5245

Re: Life Expectancy

Thank you for your posts, Mournful3ch0, monkeywitha6pack, Craftyatom and KeiichiO. Oh wow. Up until the sirens I was feeling the feel train. Then I just got confused. Did Iwanako just commit seppuku or something? What was her reasoning? Why does she have Hisao's phone number? How does she come to th...
by LordDarknus
Sat Jan 25, 2014 1:59 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Life Expectancy
Replies: 10
Views: 5245

Re: Life Expectancy

Someone passes by the window, drawing Rin's gaze for a moment. “Did someone bring the yearbook?” Suddenly Rin asks. “Wha-?” Emi asks through a mouthful. “I.., I did.” I answer, drawing Emi's surprised eyes. – I reach into my bag beside me and.. hesitatingly, take out the poor weathered and deteriora...
by LordDarknus
Sat Jan 25, 2014 1:58 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Life Expectancy
Replies: 10
Views: 5245

Re: Life Expectancy

Slowly turning the cold metal fork over my food, my numb thoughts start spinning the thread of doubt; 'maybe this is all a bad idea..' But I'm already here, alone.. waiting, at a table in the midst of lonely shadows.. reserved in the Shanghai teahouse. – A cosy, familiar enough place, apparently fam...
by LordDarknus
Wed Jan 22, 2014 12:28 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Golden Rainbow
Replies: 12
Views: 6352

Re: The Golden Rainbow

I really liked it. Thank you. As for the whole "dime novel" thing. I thought it actually set the mood. It gave it the feel of a melancholy recollections told years later. Yeah, I guess that was what I thought was more interesting. And I'm sorry, Mirage_GSM. The bits with Akira seemed to t...
by LordDarknus
Wed Jan 22, 2014 12:06 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Life Expectancy
Replies: 10
Views: 5245

Life Expectancy

“H-Hisao?...” Her soft calling sweetens my smile for her, as I turn to find her behind me, warmly waiting for me in the snow... in the shadows of a frozen forest. “Iwanako..” I whisper... My heavy eyes open – The winter dream fades. I have no choice of view, but the view of my small crappy room, and...
by LordDarknus
Sat Nov 02, 2013 12:18 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Little Lamp
Replies: 5
Views: 2986

Little Lamp

“Little Lamp” I don't know why I want to see her, my indecision has me going round in circles beside my bed, straining my nerves as I ponder deep in thought, keeping my arms crossed while idly cupping my chin, insistent on coming up with these reasons why I should just go to bed. I nag myself down w...
by LordDarknus
Thu Oct 31, 2013 11:03 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: BlackWaltz's One-stop Oneshot Shop (New: 30th Apr 2014)
Replies: 144
Views: 202832

Re: BlackWaltz's One-stop Oneshot Shop (New: 2nd Sep)

My, my, I'm flattered you think so highly of my writing. I admire that you had the dedication to read it all, especially since you imply that you did so all at once. Yeah, though it still took me a really long while. I'm kind of slow. your writings have a bit of an American flavour Location: Melbou...
by LordDarknus
Thu Oct 31, 2013 1:32 am
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Halloween at Yamaku
Replies: 47
Views: 22072

Re: Halloween at Yamaku

If we're talking costumes ... Nomiya will dress as a sterotypical Frenchmen. ... or possible Caesar. I'm not sure which. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=R8lzmbAn8_Y Motou will dress as a character from an old TV show that nobody will recognize. (Alternate idea, he tries to be more hip and dresses as...
by LordDarknus
Thu Oct 31, 2013 1:05 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: BlackWaltz's One-stop Oneshot Shop (New: 30th Apr 2014)
Replies: 144
Views: 202832

Re: BlackWaltz's One-stop Oneshot Shop (New: 2nd Sep)

I like it, all of it. Which was quite a lot to read. As an opinion (and not criticism), I have noted that your writings have a bit of an American flavour to them, but it is executed in a style that works with the original content anyway, which would probably be indicative of remarkably great talent ...
by LordDarknus
Sun Oct 27, 2013 5:45 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: DRILLER
Replies: 4
Views: 2561

DRILLER

Covering over the buzzing and rattling of the Vespa scooter's engine, the constant loud rush of refreshing night air envelops and chills us, taking away whatever warmth my school uniform could have kept, and making Misha hug me ever tighter as she shivers. “Ahhh..!” I cry out blushing and silly when...
by LordDarknus
Mon Oct 21, 2013 5:11 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Golden Rainbow
Replies: 12
Views: 6352

oh god why!

What is irony? The inability to perceive intentional cliche? As per Raita's perfunctory description? Or indeed, in keeping with the spirit (but not the letter) of the VN itself? I assume you had Lilly talk like she's from a dime novel intentionally? I have no idea why, though. It makes her sound in...
by LordDarknus
Fri Oct 18, 2013 4:06 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Freaks and Friends
Replies: 171
Views: 82406

Re: Freaks and Friends

http://0-media-cdn.foolz.us/ffuuka/board/vg/image/1342/63/1342632611360.jpg http://archive.foolz.us/vg/thread/10256491/ It's obvious I never have much to contribute to the vibrant KS community at large. http://i3.kym-cdn.com/photos/images/original/000/233/756/a36.jpg But I think your story so far is...
by LordDarknus
Fri Oct 18, 2013 3:43 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Golden Rainbow
Replies: 12
Views: 6352

Re: The Golden Rainbow

Umm, wow. That was a very good little story, Why, Thank You. but i have to ask how did iwanako knew the dog's name? I assume she can't speak to dogs. Your assumption is unfounded and completely lacking in tact. She's a psychic spy, capable of inter-species Jedi Mind Tricks. I assume you had Lilly t...
by LordDarknus
Sat Oct 12, 2013 7:31 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Golden Rainbow
Replies: 12
Views: 6352

The Golden Rainbow

The Golden Rainbow “His name was Niji...” Lilly breaks the uneasy silence between us... From the window, ethereal billowing curtains of silken light softly enshroud her, beautifully caressing her golden hair... Gentle flowing shadows.. grey with the heaviness of clouds, comes whispering to me, hinti...