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Late at night in the hostel, after tucking Hinata into bed and plucking a bead of rice she somehow got into her hair, I lie awake staring into darkness for hours, dreaming with my open eyes, listening to the lullaby of fear and concern for Eita, buzzing imperceptibly at the back of my head. I don't ...

Weeks later, in the amphitheatre of the prestigious Tokyo art school, after being familiarised with the stage and arrangements, Eita discusses his new play with the Tokyo art teacher, a smartly-dressed woman with a quaint golden necklace curiously contrasting her attire. She's the one who took an in...

Days later, after classes, I find myself the only one left in the student coffee room, sitting in the warm calming sunlight. ...'student council room' that is, the modified British-style alarm clock and coffee maker machine over there, gleaming proudly beside the window, actually belongs to Shizuo. ...

“Everyone has a favourite memory...” “A lot of us choose to hold on forever to a moment, afraid to forget the happiness they once felt. “Some of us are inclined to move on, only reflecting thoughtfully on moments that mattered. “While a few of us, are forever entranced by the moment their lives chan...

Presumably, one of the teachers didn't forget about the kid's exceptional academics, because as soon as the kid walked out the hospital, he somehow got an acceptance letter into Yamaku. 'Yamaku Academy'. A highly regarded institution; a special school; a place for disabled children to learn and adap...

internet connection problems. Not my fault. Must post faster. Will pray harder. Special Thanks to BlackWaltzTheThird for his good proofreading of version 2. Veersion 2-1 comes directly after. =============== Katawa Shounen One More Act: Graduation (part 1) (Version 2-1) I am hesitant, nervous, and m...

This is a "Beta" Version. It's meant for clever people only. The same way how the original above is meant for creative people only. </stupid joke> </snide> For the Emperor's New Groove, skip this and scroll down after it to Version 2-1. I'm putting this "Version 1" here just for ...

An interesting new final chapter of the "prologue", Oddball, right after this classes will start and the "fun will begin", I definitely look forward to that. If I may, I have a less-than-professional opinion you maybe might find useful somehow; The feel of 'quirkiness' that I got...

okay i'm going to go out on a limb here and say what most people haven't said. your writing needs work. a lot of it. what you write often doesn't make sense and doesn't even follow the logical form of prose. sentences like "What Are You Doing Here?!", my finger is pointing at the Student ...

I'm sorry, but it's way way too big to fit, it would simply take more than it rewards to cut it down to small tiny posts of a bunch of one-liners and significant empty space. http://lorddarknus.blogspot.com/2013/05/k-shounen-warning-possibly-objectionable.html I'm sorry. EDIT on 2013-08-15 (AUG 15):...

You definitely have your own style here, which is both a good thing and a bad thing. It flows well and has a certain softness and poetry to it which makes it stand out, but on the other hand, that also tends to make all your characters feel the same. I can't really connect to any of them as charact...

P.S. : Is any of my stuff even worth proofreading? There are so few replies overall... I'm sorry. Your stories are by no means bad, but I guess they're just not my thing. And my writing style is so completely different from yours that I wouldn't know what kind of advice I could give you... Oh.. sor...

errr, I should probably explain myself; IRON MAN 3; Ellen Brandt = Hanako + Rin (mostly because of her nice haircut) (and that nice watch that somehow reminded me about a stupid 'waist-watch' joke I did) Extremis soldiers = Yamaku students (but Evilllll!) And Tony Stark = Hisao, yeah, that's a given...

You're a Great Guy! Please, you flatter me. Really? But you're the only who posted so far, and even given me advice and help! You are at least a Good Guy! P.S. : Is any of my stuff even worth proofreading? There are so few replies overall... It's always worth proofreading. Don't be discouraged by a...

So last Sunday; basically, I was like this:



The whole day.



Why? Because

IRON MAN 3

'nuff said...