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Here is another short update, from Reika's point of view this time! The next actual chapter is still being worked on and I want to make sure it goes well, so I decided to add this in the meantime. I think readers know the drill, please read, criticize and enjoy! I would like to also ask for advice ...

I was a little confused as to what exactly was happening in "What You've Done", but I found it a good read nonetheless. Jigoro is always an interesting character to explore and I like how you portrayed him. "Men Of Snow" got me a little teary-eyed, and I always love a good Misha story. The only ...

Short shorts is right. I like the concept of pieces this short, just big enough to relay a thought or squeeze in a story, but small and compressed enough to be meaningful throughout every sentence, every word even. It also appeals to my love for bite sized things that take little of my time. I've ...

The repetition and not mentioning Tanabata was tomorrow was just a little laziness from me unfortunately, and the dialogue being split up between texting and talking was something I juggled around a bit, writing text message conversations is weird for me. I'll definitely touch this up a bit later ...

Pretty quality writing for 15 minutes of work, and that last line is gonna stay in my head for longer than I would like. Keep up the good work!

I've been just a little sick, so my apologies for a new update taking forever, and this one is smaller than the usuals, which hopefully doesn't mess with the flow of it or anything too much. I wanted to really tackle the festival in this chapter but I wasn't up to it, so instead I wrote a little ...

YourFavAnon wrote:This was just meant to be awkward, funny and sexy all in one.

Mission accomplished, good sir. You managed to write something decently sexy that also made me legitimately guffaw, and that's an impressive feat.

I was a bit worried that the dream scene was somewhat out of place at first. Some of my Steam friends disagreed, though, so it stayed in after going through a couple revisions. Well, isn't it supposed to be a little out of place? Not in a bad way, but in a way that demonstrates that it's a dream ...

I liked the dream scene, and the dialogue was really enjoyable, especially at the end. If I was a more thoughtful person I might be able to find areas for improvement, but really, this is pretty solid so far. Looking forward to more.

An update! This chapter got on my nerves for some reason, just how I wrote it I guess, something felt off. I was hoping to show more of the character's, well, characteristics, but more fleshing out will come in time I guess. Hopefully this gears me up for a good next chapter, as you'll probably be ...

I'm enjoying this so far. The dialogue between Hisao and Miki was well done and felt right, and I like how you're doing Miki. Keep up the good work!

This has made Girl a very interesting character, and it doesn't matter too much whether the chapter is short or long, as long as you're satisfied that it's quality work. Keep it up Doomish, I'm looking forward to more! That is one hell of a justification! Bravo. ...I still want there to be more art ...

Thanks for the comments guys! And Scissorlips, in baseball, different postures and stances work for different people, my idea was that she was suggesting more than correcting, trying to help him find what works. And with her use of profanity, I knew in my head that he wouldn't be perturbed by it's ...

Another update, this one was much easier to write, and my hope with this one is that I didn't get too technical that I scare readers. Other than that I'm relatively satisfied with the direction of the story, so read, criticize and enjoy! Chapter 6: Hot Start When Reika told me that she was living ...

A new update! This chapter was one I was looking forward to, but for some reason during the whole writing process it left a bad taste in my mouth, and I had trouble getting it written. I feel my dialogue needs work, and I need to remember that just because something isn't relevant to the advancement ...