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Re: Starting Let's Play. Would like some constructive critic

Posted: Thu Aug 07, 2014 8:24 pm
by Oscar Wildecat
Forever_ambivalent wrote: I forced myself to watch a minute of it.
I later got a headache
Just god no. It was godawful. It killed instafeels for me.
Never again.
Yeah. I should have put some sort of warning on that one. Sorry about that.

That said, I believe it's required viewing for anyone considering doing a KS Let's Play. :twisted:

Re: Starting Let's Play. Would like some constructive critic

Posted: Thu Aug 07, 2014 8:43 pm
by Oddball
Five seconds. I lasted five seconds.

Re: Starting Let's Play. Would like some constructive critic

Posted: Thu Aug 07, 2014 8:57 pm
by ogorhan
Oddball wrote:Five seconds. I lasted five seconds.
I just heard welcome welcome and closed it, so like 2 seconds :lol:

Re: Starting Let's Play. Would like some constructive critic

Posted: Thu Aug 07, 2014 9:54 pm
by brythain
Actually, I wouldn't mind if the cast of ST:TNG or even of XMDoFP did a voiced version of KS. But constructive criticism here:

On second thoughts, I'm not convinced LP works for KS.

Re: Starting Let's Play. Would like some constructive critic

Posted: Fri Aug 08, 2014 12:37 am
by SpunkySix
I'm sorry, but I can't. And yes, I believe that counts as constructive with something like this, as others have said.

Re: Starting Let's Play. Would like some constructive critic

Posted: Fri Aug 08, 2014 3:05 am
by Mirage_GSM
Oscar Wildecat wrote:
d2r wrote:Agreed. Nobody should do a Let's Play of KS.

Except Gilbert Gottfried. :lol:
Kinda like [url =XXX]Kenji doing KS Instafeels[/url]?
I think that one might be violating the license. It clearly ripped off game assets.

Re: Starting Let's Play. Would like some constructive critic

Posted: Fri Aug 08, 2014 4:25 am
by Megumeru
I don't think doing a LP on KS is a...good idea?

First, the medium isn't particularly popular. Second, the voice when you read may mess what others believe the voices of the characters are meant to be (I for one translate everything in my mind and give them Japanese VO. Why? Because I can :p)

Lastly, the routes available and what you pick only cater to a small number of audience and may cause the other majority/minority to judge you prematurely because of that--over-reaction also may reflect negatively.

Re: Starting Let's Play. Would like some constructive critic

Posted: Fri Aug 08, 2014 5:35 am
by Zarys
SHUT UP AN TAKES HANAKO !
Seriously, I want to hear how you will interpret her voice and text. :lol:

Re: Starting Let's Play. Would like some constructive critic

Posted: Fri Aug 08, 2014 6:30 am
by bhtooefr
Mirage_GSM wrote:I think that one might be violating the license. It clearly ripped off game assets.
If NeumanProductions is in the US, then it probably doesn't matter, due to the fair use exemptions to copyright law for parodies and for commentary and criticism.

Re: Starting Let's Play. Would like some constructive critic

Posted: Fri Aug 08, 2014 8:46 am
by Alpharius
InsaneFeels wrote:Hey guys!

A few friends and I are in the process of a Let's Play of Katawa Shoujo. The main person reading has studied voice acting and improv, so hopefully the end product is well read. Along with some funny side commentary, I'm hoping the series become very fun to watch.

I'm aware that there have probably been many posts like these over the years, so instead of simply asking to watch, I'd like some input.

What is the strongest element of the playthrough? What is the weakest? What would you recommend we add/remove to improve the experience?

Here's a link to the first episode:



I personally think episodes 9-11 provides the best first impression of the series, so if you don't want to make a huge commitment, I'd recommend those. I'll provide the link to episode 9 below:



If you took the time to look at this, thank you very much for your time. Here's hoping for a nice discussion.
Marvelous done, keep it up and don't listen these fuckers.

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Re: Starting Let's Play. Would like some constructive critic

Posted: Fri Aug 08, 2014 8:53 am
by Alpharius
Mirage_GSM wrote:Well, I'll try to make this the most constructive I can: Don't make a Let's Play of Katawa Shoujo!

And because I want to be constructive I'll tell you why:

There's aboslutely no reason to do such a thing. A Let's Play is a nice thing to
a) have a look at a game to decide whether it is worth your money or
b) when you have decided a game is not worth your money but you want to have a look at it anyway.

Katawa Shoujo doesn't cost any money! Heck the bandwidth for downloading it is only a fraction of all the youtube videos of a Let's Play.

And when you download it and read it yourself you get the benefit of not having to listen to that irritating and juvenile voiceover. Honestly you and your friend(s?) joking and giggling while Hisao is having his heart attack is killing every bit of immersion and atmosphere 4LS worked so hard to put in there. I don't even want to know what you did to romantic scenes or - heaven forbid - the H-scenes.

And why are you reading the text out loud to your watchers in the first place? Assume they can't read? It's right there on the screen in front of them. I can sort of understand why some Let's Players do this in some games when the script is too small to read on the video, but that's clearly not an issue here.

Finally, if someone installs the VN and reads it himself, they can continue at their own pace and don't have to wait for you to get the voice right or finish doing jokes that don't have anything to do with the VN. It was easily legible without even toggling full screen.

So every aspect of watching KS as a Let's Play is an inferior experience to reading it yourself.
You, and all your kind are lowly lickspittles, weaklings, pathetic fools.
You are not a critic, you just own a keyboard.

Re: Starting Let's Play. Would like some constructive critic

Posted: Fri Aug 08, 2014 8:56 am
by Zarys
Heh ! I have said nothing against this let's play, I just encourage him choose to Hanako. (best girl of the game) :D
And your reaction is a bit exaggerated, anyway

Re: Starting Let's Play. Would like some constructive critic

Posted: Fri Aug 08, 2014 8:57 am
by Alpharius
Zarys wrote:Heh ! I have said nothing against this let's play, I just encourage him choose to Hanako. (best girl of the game) :D
And your reaction is a bit exaggerated, anyway

You are bald and foolish!

Re: Starting Let's Play. Would like some constructive critic

Posted: Fri Aug 08, 2014 9:02 am
by Zarys
Alpharius wrote:
Zarys wrote:Heh ! I have said nothing against this let's play, I just encourage him choose to Hanako. (best girl of the game) :D
And your reaction is a bit exaggerated, anyway

You are bald and foolish!
Only strengthening my identification with Hanako!

Re: Starting Let's Play. Would like some constructive critic

Posted: Fri Aug 08, 2014 9:39 am
by SpunkySix
Alpharius wrote:You, and all your kind are lowly lickspittles, weaklings, pathetic fools.
You are not a critic, you just own a keyboard.
Seriously? He's right, in all honesty. TC can make a KS LP for fun and some people might enjoy it, but it will never stand up to actually reading the VN. It just won't. That isn't mean, it's true, and it is constructive as far as I'm concerned.