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Just a drawing of Hanako that I did. Critiques are welcome!

The arms seem a bit skinny and short, but apart from that, fantastic job!
I'm liking the attention-to-detail in her clothing and eye, and the shading is great
I'd say you've got a great deal of potential, here I'd love to see what you can do!
Also might I suggest making your pictures a bit smaller in MSpaint or something, before posting them here?

Munchenhausen wrote:The arms seem a bit skinny and short, but apart from that, fantastic job!
I'm liking the attention-to-detail in her clothing and eye, and the shading is great
I'd say you've got a great deal of potential, here I'd love to see what you can do!
Also might I suggest making your pictures a bit smaller in MSpaint or something, before posting them here?

Thanks! And yeah, I realized that it was probably a little big...
The arms gave me a lot of trouble but, in the end, I'm pretty happy with the result.

I like it, good job ^^

Nicely done, the arms have already been mentioned but that aside your proportions are really quite good, and the shading is fantastic for using just a pencil. We really need more artists around this place, keep drawing!

Pretty good, but you really need to reduce the size of your picture by at least half, probably more.

Cute, but like people said, it's hard to see because of the size.

Now you've shrank it, I can actually take it in
It's a nice job, mate!

Ah, it DOES look much nicer shrunk.

Very cute. I really like it.

I like it.

Hanako is my favorite, she is just a great character.

Wow! Really awesome, you're very talented. I would love to see more, your attention to detail is amazing!

I might be more than a little jealous of your drawing skills..