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...Hehe. Hey there. I'm Up. (Yes, just "Up".) I'm honestly a little shy to make an account but I really want to share some KS-related written art of mine.

I'm not saying it's too complex, lavish, or even very good, but... take a look anyway. Maybe I'll write more if people like it.

Thoughts from Hanako Ikezawa ~ A Burning Passion

Scarlet flakes across my back
Dryness upon a dainty face
A memory of the flame's attack
Right on my treasured place

Torn from those I thought I knew
A sincere teardrop hangs low
My lonely heart's cry is far from new
Since that day ten years ago

Locked away from outstretched hands
Although I've never smiled
I'm certain no-one understands
The world of an ember's child

A dream to be more than the scorch
Where associations draw
The light of my secrets' torch
Removes where I am sore

I wait for one to come and see
Who lies beneath violet skin
But until then I'll lay awake
Letting sadness trickle in

Hey, I actually liked this! Hope you continue on; I hate when people give up on their poetry because they don't think it's good enough!

Hey, that's really good! Why not post it in the fan fiction section, it will get more reads there!

That's good touching poem dude. Just post that on Fan Fic section like Kielox say..

Thanks for the responses. :3

I rather like Hanako... she's rather akin to myself if I may say...

...So just repost this exact work into that sub-forum? Or can someone round here move threads?

I think that I shall never see

Okay, yes, this is the same thread as in the general Fan Works area.

I'm posting future works here (regardless of frequency), so I hope you enjoy.

This first piece was written whilst listening to Painful History... and realising something.

Affection Reflection

When you realise just where your heart lies
Hearing yourself say its true location
You don't know how to react
Crazy things leap from your mouth
And you can't deny them - it's true
Never before have I wanted to admit it, but...
Truth is too precious to hide
You can say whatever you want
Others may care, but how am I to know?
Under all this is a message
Believing in love... that's only in dreams
Emanating from my heart is fear
Remembering that one I grow attached to
Even if I wish otherwise, is just an image
And nothing can change that... unfortunately
Laying here listening to her tearful song
Heavily breathing to try to mask it
Any way that I can... no luck
No-one to tell, nowhere to run
And nothing to be proud about
Kicking myself in the land of the dreams
Over the mountains and back
Into an accursed reality without her
Kissing in my sleep, a want to release it all
Especially weary and especially lovestruck
Zipping between reality and wishes
Actions to hang my head down with
Waiting for the day I won't be alone
And can finally share my affection

128-Up wrote:Okay, yes, this is the same thread as in the general Fan Works area.

Not fanfiction, so back to general fan works it goes. Also threads merged.