Gunslinger Katawas
Posted: Sat Mar 17, 2012 6:34 pm
Okay guys, I had this idea while watching the Gunslinger Girl anime to integrate the KS characters into a similar story - you don't have to have seen GG to read this fic.
So I guess I want some feedback from you guys, what you think of the idea, and then comments/criticism on the writing itself. Anyway, before we go any further, the prologue for the piece, thanks for reading.
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‘Nurse to base, requesting a clean-up crew, over.’
I smile to myself at that. Everybody knows his real name, it’s no great secret, but he still insists on using his Codename at all times, even when not out on a mission. I remember asking him about that codename and how he came by it, to which he smiled, looking pointedly at his white coat and brace of very thin throwing knives. Come to think of it, they did look kinda like scalpels...
Looking over at my handler, I’m only faintly surprised to notice his white coat is in immaculate condition, not a speck of dirt or blood on it, as usual. Looking down at myself I can see my arms up to my elbows are dyed a deep red, and there’s more splashed over my shirt and dripping down off my prosthetics, leaving a small crimson puddle on the floor where I stand.
Nurse halts his study of the bodies, a barely concealed look of disgust on his face, and looks over in my direction. ‘Any of that yours?’ He asks, looking pointedly at the patches of red on my arms and torso.
I give myself a once over – I couldn’t feel any pain anywhere, but that didn’t necessarily mean anything. Satisfied with my findings I look back to Nurse. ‘No, none of mine.’
‘Ah, that’s good; it’s not cheap running maintenance on all those cybernetic implants you know.’ He says, letting some relief slip into his voice. I smile at that. Of course our relationship is strictly professional – I’m a crippled cyborg assassin, and he’s my handler, but we both know that our relationship is deeper than that, like that of a big brother looking after his younger sister, or maybe the other way around.
One of the crumpled bodies on the floor starts groaning, breath rattling out through a mostly crushed throat. Keeping my eyes fixed on Nurse I pull my SIG P239 – my sidearm of choice – from its holster on my hip and hold my arm out to my side. The gunshot echoes through the empty parking lot as, holstering my gun, I turn to my side. The round caught the man just off centre on his chest, a shot clean enough to kill him when added to his previous injuries.
Scanning the rest of the bodies, satisfied that they won’t be moving again, we move back over to Nurse’s pride and joy – his 2002 Mercedes-Benz CLK, which by now I know everything about it that there is to know. Where it was made, how many miles to the gallon it does – this is what I had to put up with every time we go out in the bloody thing. Of course, it wasn’t quite the standard model – as far as I’m aware it didn’t originally come with reinforced steel bodywork, bulletproof glass and various hidden compartments scattered about, lined so the contents wouldn’t show up in any vehicle scan.
After putting down a sheet of plastic to save the precious seats from blood drops (the Agency, apparently, doesn’t pay for THAT. Hah.) I climb into the passenger seat of the car and sit down. The clean-up crew arrives just in time, saving me from a lecture about why the car I was sitting in was better than its more modern counterparts. Nurse rolls down his window as a member of the crew – dressed in standard civilian overalls, no weapons visible on his person, walks over to the car.
‘Yeah, all 7 targets are eliminated over there, have a good night guys.’ With his easy smile and relaxed sense of humour Nurse definitely got on best with all the various branches of the Agency – it was hard not to like him.
Pulling out of the parking lot Nurse glances over at me. ‘So, what do you want for a reward?’ he asks me, grinning as he mimics along to my reply in a high pitched voice. ‘I don’t want anything, it’s my job.’ Am I that predictable?
‘Come on now Emi, there must be something you want. Clothes? A teddy bear? How about we grab something nice to eat for a treat?’
Sighing, I lean back in my chair, shutting my eyes. ‘Well, I am kinda hungry, so I suppose you can take me out for dinner. I’ll need to get changed first though. Oh, and no funny business, I’m not that kind of girl.’
We both laugh at this, knowing full well that if our relationship turned into…that, he’d find himself out on the streets, or at the bottom of a river, and I’d be brainwashed and with a new handler in no time. As I said, our relationship was closer to that of a brother and sister, anyway.
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Yamaku High School.
Officially a school meant to cater to students who suffered from any number of disabilities, from missing limbs through to internal problems, that was, however, all just a front. The reality was slightly different.
They typically took in female orphans with disabilities, people nobody would miss, handpicked from hospitals around the country, papers signed with a promise of full board and hot meals in a caring environment, all paid for by the government. After being transported to the facility, still unconscious, the girls are subject to a very long, complex series of surgeries, designed to strengthen limbs and correct any internal problems, muscle or bone related. Of course, they couldn’t entirely replace missing limbs, but that was mostly unnecessary, they knew what they were doing when they chose the girls after all. The implants also made the girls close to bulletproof – while bullets could certainly shred the implants, an expensive procedure to repeatedly fix, the only sure way to kill one of the girls was a bullet through the eye or the roof of an open mouth.
Finally the girls were subject to ‘Conditioning’. This consisted of, simply put, ‘brainwashing’ the subject (apparently girls were chosen as the Conditioning seemed to work better on them, the effects being more stable than the male test subjects.) They were then retrained to feel the fiercest loyalty to their chosen handler; they would jump in front of a bullet without thinking about it if their handler was in danger.
Once this stage is complete it’s down to the handler to train the girl as they see fit, in everything from firearm and CQC training, through to proper etiquette and how to blend in in everyday situations. Once the handler deems that the girl is sufficiently trained to be able to handle a live fire situation they start getting assigned on missions –grouped with another cyborg and handler first, eventually moving onto solo missions for the most part, rarely two or more groups would join up for a big mission.
Ah, but I’m getting ahead of myself. The organisation here is known simply as the ‘Agency’, a top secret branch of government intelligence which only the senior politicians knew about, and those were all sworn to a vow of silence – of course none of them would talk, knowing full well no amount of bodyguards could protect them if the higher ups decided they needed to be…silenced.
The Agency is an anti-terrorist organisation, primarily set up to combat the Republican Faction (RF, for short), it’s duties also stretch to hostage rescue, providing bodyguards to potential targets and the occasional threat, delivered with a bullet or two to the knees.
The Agency is split into two different parts, Section One being the role outlined before, the cyborg girls, assassinations and brainwashing, all that stuff. Then there was also Section Two, the intelligence side. Most of the people in that section knew about the goings on in Section One, the information critical to them in their job, which is primarily to provide intelligence reports. Using various connections to police stations and RF defectors they would track down targets and deliver up to date intel on enemy movement and plans.
They also handled the public side, providing cover-ups (and ample threats and bribes, used as appropriate) to silence the various media outlets who would have a field day if they were to get the faintest hint of operations at Yamaku.
So this is my life now – my dad’s dead and mum wanted nothing to do with her legless daughter. Being athletic and sporty before the accident, I guess I was a good candidate for the Agency, and I can’t say I don’t entirely enjoy living here. I have friends who I see in my downtime, doing things normal teenage girls do – we have tea parties, manage a garden, listen to music while we relax and work in the gym.
During the days we go to school where top tutors from around the country teach us Maths and the Sciences, History and Geography – we even wear something resembling a school uniform whilst sitting in the lecture hall. After school lessons we typically spend time at the various firing ranges and martial art arenas, although that kind of training is at the individual handler’s discretion.
And then occasionally we would receive a mission – sometimes a simple mission to protect someone in the local area, a mission that can be carried out in the space of a day with not a single shot fired, whilst sometimes work took us halfway across the country for two weeks while we stake out targets, scouring the area for vantage points before carrying out the meticulously planned hit.
That’s the background, and this is our story.
So I guess I want some feedback from you guys, what you think of the idea, and then comments/criticism on the writing itself. Anyway, before we go any further, the prologue for the piece, thanks for reading.
------------------------------------------------------------------------
‘Nurse to base, requesting a clean-up crew, over.’
I smile to myself at that. Everybody knows his real name, it’s no great secret, but he still insists on using his Codename at all times, even when not out on a mission. I remember asking him about that codename and how he came by it, to which he smiled, looking pointedly at his white coat and brace of very thin throwing knives. Come to think of it, they did look kinda like scalpels...
Looking over at my handler, I’m only faintly surprised to notice his white coat is in immaculate condition, not a speck of dirt or blood on it, as usual. Looking down at myself I can see my arms up to my elbows are dyed a deep red, and there’s more splashed over my shirt and dripping down off my prosthetics, leaving a small crimson puddle on the floor where I stand.
Nurse halts his study of the bodies, a barely concealed look of disgust on his face, and looks over in my direction. ‘Any of that yours?’ He asks, looking pointedly at the patches of red on my arms and torso.
I give myself a once over – I couldn’t feel any pain anywhere, but that didn’t necessarily mean anything. Satisfied with my findings I look back to Nurse. ‘No, none of mine.’
‘Ah, that’s good; it’s not cheap running maintenance on all those cybernetic implants you know.’ He says, letting some relief slip into his voice. I smile at that. Of course our relationship is strictly professional – I’m a crippled cyborg assassin, and he’s my handler, but we both know that our relationship is deeper than that, like that of a big brother looking after his younger sister, or maybe the other way around.
One of the crumpled bodies on the floor starts groaning, breath rattling out through a mostly crushed throat. Keeping my eyes fixed on Nurse I pull my SIG P239 – my sidearm of choice – from its holster on my hip and hold my arm out to my side. The gunshot echoes through the empty parking lot as, holstering my gun, I turn to my side. The round caught the man just off centre on his chest, a shot clean enough to kill him when added to his previous injuries.
Scanning the rest of the bodies, satisfied that they won’t be moving again, we move back over to Nurse’s pride and joy – his 2002 Mercedes-Benz CLK, which by now I know everything about it that there is to know. Where it was made, how many miles to the gallon it does – this is what I had to put up with every time we go out in the bloody thing. Of course, it wasn’t quite the standard model – as far as I’m aware it didn’t originally come with reinforced steel bodywork, bulletproof glass and various hidden compartments scattered about, lined so the contents wouldn’t show up in any vehicle scan.
After putting down a sheet of plastic to save the precious seats from blood drops (the Agency, apparently, doesn’t pay for THAT. Hah.) I climb into the passenger seat of the car and sit down. The clean-up crew arrives just in time, saving me from a lecture about why the car I was sitting in was better than its more modern counterparts. Nurse rolls down his window as a member of the crew – dressed in standard civilian overalls, no weapons visible on his person, walks over to the car.
‘Yeah, all 7 targets are eliminated over there, have a good night guys.’ With his easy smile and relaxed sense of humour Nurse definitely got on best with all the various branches of the Agency – it was hard not to like him.
Pulling out of the parking lot Nurse glances over at me. ‘So, what do you want for a reward?’ he asks me, grinning as he mimics along to my reply in a high pitched voice. ‘I don’t want anything, it’s my job.’ Am I that predictable?
‘Come on now Emi, there must be something you want. Clothes? A teddy bear? How about we grab something nice to eat for a treat?’
Sighing, I lean back in my chair, shutting my eyes. ‘Well, I am kinda hungry, so I suppose you can take me out for dinner. I’ll need to get changed first though. Oh, and no funny business, I’m not that kind of girl.’
We both laugh at this, knowing full well that if our relationship turned into…that, he’d find himself out on the streets, or at the bottom of a river, and I’d be brainwashed and with a new handler in no time. As I said, our relationship was closer to that of a brother and sister, anyway.
===================================
Yamaku High School.
Officially a school meant to cater to students who suffered from any number of disabilities, from missing limbs through to internal problems, that was, however, all just a front. The reality was slightly different.
They typically took in female orphans with disabilities, people nobody would miss, handpicked from hospitals around the country, papers signed with a promise of full board and hot meals in a caring environment, all paid for by the government. After being transported to the facility, still unconscious, the girls are subject to a very long, complex series of surgeries, designed to strengthen limbs and correct any internal problems, muscle or bone related. Of course, they couldn’t entirely replace missing limbs, but that was mostly unnecessary, they knew what they were doing when they chose the girls after all. The implants also made the girls close to bulletproof – while bullets could certainly shred the implants, an expensive procedure to repeatedly fix, the only sure way to kill one of the girls was a bullet through the eye or the roof of an open mouth.
Finally the girls were subject to ‘Conditioning’. This consisted of, simply put, ‘brainwashing’ the subject (apparently girls were chosen as the Conditioning seemed to work better on them, the effects being more stable than the male test subjects.) They were then retrained to feel the fiercest loyalty to their chosen handler; they would jump in front of a bullet without thinking about it if their handler was in danger.
Once this stage is complete it’s down to the handler to train the girl as they see fit, in everything from firearm and CQC training, through to proper etiquette and how to blend in in everyday situations. Once the handler deems that the girl is sufficiently trained to be able to handle a live fire situation they start getting assigned on missions –grouped with another cyborg and handler first, eventually moving onto solo missions for the most part, rarely two or more groups would join up for a big mission.
Ah, but I’m getting ahead of myself. The organisation here is known simply as the ‘Agency’, a top secret branch of government intelligence which only the senior politicians knew about, and those were all sworn to a vow of silence – of course none of them would talk, knowing full well no amount of bodyguards could protect them if the higher ups decided they needed to be…silenced.
The Agency is an anti-terrorist organisation, primarily set up to combat the Republican Faction (RF, for short), it’s duties also stretch to hostage rescue, providing bodyguards to potential targets and the occasional threat, delivered with a bullet or two to the knees.
The Agency is split into two different parts, Section One being the role outlined before, the cyborg girls, assassinations and brainwashing, all that stuff. Then there was also Section Two, the intelligence side. Most of the people in that section knew about the goings on in Section One, the information critical to them in their job, which is primarily to provide intelligence reports. Using various connections to police stations and RF defectors they would track down targets and deliver up to date intel on enemy movement and plans.
They also handled the public side, providing cover-ups (and ample threats and bribes, used as appropriate) to silence the various media outlets who would have a field day if they were to get the faintest hint of operations at Yamaku.
So this is my life now – my dad’s dead and mum wanted nothing to do with her legless daughter. Being athletic and sporty before the accident, I guess I was a good candidate for the Agency, and I can’t say I don’t entirely enjoy living here. I have friends who I see in my downtime, doing things normal teenage girls do – we have tea parties, manage a garden, listen to music while we relax and work in the gym.
During the days we go to school where top tutors from around the country teach us Maths and the Sciences, History and Geography – we even wear something resembling a school uniform whilst sitting in the lecture hall. After school lessons we typically spend time at the various firing ranges and martial art arenas, although that kind of training is at the individual handler’s discretion.
And then occasionally we would receive a mission – sometimes a simple mission to protect someone in the local area, a mission that can be carried out in the space of a day with not a single shot fired, whilst sometimes work took us halfway across the country for two weeks while we stake out targets, scouring the area for vantage points before carrying out the meticulously planned hit.
That’s the background, and this is our story.