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Hello everyone, I drafted this fiction over the course of a 14 hour period on March 3rd - 4th. It's an epilogue to the Emi route good end. I hope that you enjoy it as much as I did writing it!

I'm just going to leave the pastebin link as the fiction is over 13,000 words long, and I figure that is too big to fit into one post

http://pastebin.com/cGFttahS

EDIT: Minor corrections made, ending adjusted to not be as abrupt and to be more comprehensive, grammatical errors fixed. Please let me know if you spot anything else!

EDIT2: I just got some amazing Emi fan-art made from a scene in the fiction. I am blown away by the quality. I am overly thankful to the two people who made the drawing possible!

http://i.imgur.com/6YE2o.png(Not nude, but possibly NSFW)
http://i.imgur.com/JiP2N.jpg (SFW)

Awesome! Gotta go to work soon so I'll read it in the afternoon when I get home (:

[EDIT] Just read it through...All these feels T_T Thanks for writing this great fan-fic

Read this earlier in /ksg/ and I really enjoyed it, Mountaineer.
You had us going for a while with a possible bad end. I'm glad to see you were gentle with us. All through the reading I kept thinking what could possibly go wrong?
Hisao manning up was inspiring.
Well done, Mountaineer. Well written and very true to the character's personalities.
:writer'shighfive:

I'm not a huge Emi fan, but I really loved this story. Good job sir

You should probably add a warning for sexual content, however. Some people don't like erotica (I was fine with it, added a nice touch to the story).

I gotta say, that was a good fanfic. The caliber of fics in these forums are quite high even if there is a difference of taste sometimes..

misterprinny wrote:I'm not a huge Emi fan, but I really loved this story. Good job sir

You should probably add a warning for sexual content, however. Some people don't like erotica (I was fine with it, added a nice touch to the story).

Thanks for the heads up man. I'll add a tag to the subject now.

Glad everyone enjoyed it! The best part of writing it being able to share your creations with others. I'll be writing again soon but first I going to be spending most of my time playing Mass Effect 3.

Mountaineer wrote:

misterprinny wrote:I'm not a huge Emi fan, but I really loved this story. Good job sir

You should probably add a warning for sexual content, however. Some people don't like erotica (I was fine with it, added a nice touch to the story).

Thanks for the heads up man. I'll add a tag to the subject now.

Glad everyone enjoyed it! The best part of writing it being able to share your creations with others. I'll be writing again soon but first I going to be spending most of my time playing Mass Effect 3.

Take your time sir. No need to keep a man from quality video gaming.

My only complaint is that you don't just go "get" a new pair of legs. I build the things for a living and fit them to people. New legs are usually a MONTHS long process. Fastest I've done it for someone was 4 days but I had all the parts around to do it. Getting something like a Pathfinder foot takes at least 2-4 days shipping and I know my company can't afford to keep them in stock.

Other than that, fun story.

YOTC wrote:My only complaint is that you don't just go "get" a new pair of legs. I build the things for a living and fit them to people. New legs are usually a MONTHS long process. Fastest I've done it for someone was 4 days but I had all the parts around to do it. Getting something like a Pathfinder foot takes at least 2-4 days shipping and I know my company can't afford to keep them in stock.

Other than that, fun story.

Oh! I tried to do some research before writing, including what hiking legs would actually look like. This is actually by no means the final revision of this tale, so I will be sure to edit the content to reflect the time it takes to get such a pair of legs made. Is there any more pertinent information I should know?

Nitpick: The phrase is "That's my cue to begin." Other than that, good story.

Grand Haberdasher wrote:Nitpick: The phrase is "That's my cue to begin." Other than that, good story.

Thanks! I'll be sure to fix it when I go through and do my major proofreading spree. Glad you enjoyed it!

We do need more Emi stories in here she doesn't get enough love so I'm happy to read this also Hisao doing that feat makes me think

Lothbrok wrote:We do need more Emi stories in here she doesn't get enough love so I'm happy to read this also Hisao doing that feat makes me think

Thanks for reading! I agree, we need more Emi she is love, after all!

Quite impressive. Your writing, at first, hooked me more than your plot, but by the end I was hanging on every word. Well done, my friend- your story is part of my headcanon for the Emi route.

RinellaWasHere wrote:Quite impressive. Your writing, at first, hooked me more than your plot, but by the end I was hanging on every word. Well done, my friend- your story is part of my headcanon for the Emi route.

Thanks for the feedback! You'll be pleased to know that I also updated the ending to add more flavor, and the possibility of a sequel. Enjoy, everyone!