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Re: With Apologies To Harlan Ellison [Spoilers, Gore Discret

Posted: Thu May 10, 2012 4:01 pm
by Doomish
CatBountry wrote:Are you just Doomish on Steam? There's like four Doomishes on there and I don't know which one is you. I'm catbountry on there as well.
Well, my name is currently "Mishabro is a squid <コ:彡" on Steam, but yes, my ID is Doomish. I added you! Also, I will give calling a run-through a thought. I can always improve what I've already done, I suppose!

Re: With Apologies To Harlan Ellison [Spoilers, Gore Discret

Posted: Fri May 11, 2012 12:20 am
by The O.H.L.
You sure you want your steam name open to everyone?

Re: With Apologies To Harlan Ellison [Spoilers, Gore Discret

Posted: Fri May 11, 2012 1:37 am
by CatBountry
Doomish wrote:
CatBountry wrote:Are you just Doomish on Steam? There's like four Doomishes on there and I don't know which one is you. I'm catbountry on there as well.
Well, my name is currently "Mishabro is a squid <コ:彡" on Steam, but yes, my ID is Doomish. I added you! Also, I will give calling a run-through a thought. I can always improve what I've already done, I suppose!
Okay!

Uh... just a heads up I'm really bad at initiating conversations on Steam though.

Re: With Apologies To Harlan Ellison [Spoilers, Gore Discret

Posted: Sat Jun 09, 2012 9:31 am
by Revvy
This was just...amazing, brutal, sick, twisted, confusing, but amazing, brilliant!
I loved it, was such an amazing read and I haven't been so drawn into a story In a long time, great work, I intend on re-reading this a few times, was great.

Thanks for putting in the time to write such an awesome fanfic ^_^

Re: With Apologies To Harlan Ellison [Spoilers, Gore Discret

Posted: Sun Jul 01, 2012 6:34 am
by JTC545
I'd like to think it was worth it to potentially ruin any feels i could have with the characters ever again.....I'll have to get back to you on that. Good story nonetheless

Re: With Apologies To Harlan Ellison [Spoilers, Gore Discret

Posted: Mon Jul 02, 2012 3:50 pm
by Helbereth
Was anyone else listening to Silent Hill themes through most of this? For whatever reason, it just seemed to fit.

It makes for an amazingly detailed horror story. I enjoyed it thoroughly. It leaves plenty of unanswered questions, but all good horror stories leave you wondering. I'm also happy it didn't try to concoct a 'real' happy ending. It ends where it begins, and the cycle repeats. Speculation and conjecture about what Miki and the others might do differently aside, it seems like the voice has been at this for some time. Down in the darkest hole, in a hell of its fashioning, it strips young minds of their dignity, morality and sanity, torturing them endlessly, feeding on their despair like a drug, and turning them against one and other until it can claim a new host to begin anew.

*applause*

Re: With Apologies To Harlan Ellison [Spoilers, Gore Discret

Posted: Tue Jul 03, 2012 7:26 am
by guest13
What actually was the voice?

And what was up with the government experiment?

Re: With Apologies To Harlan Ellison [Spoilers, Gore Discret

Posted: Wed Jul 18, 2012 2:05 pm
by LOL WUT
I was talking to one of my IRL friends about these stories at about 1:30 am. (Mind you I don't sleep)
He came across this one and was like
"Dude what about this one?"
And then I was like
"Yeah sure you should totally try that one. Hey I have to go see you tomorrow."
"Alright."

The next 2 weeks was spent with him hating me.
Totally Worth It

Re: With Apologies To Harlan Ellison [Spoilers, Gore Discret

Posted: Thu Jul 19, 2012 10:57 pm
by random
Wow. Just. Wow.

Bravo, good sir, bravo.

Re: With Apologies To Harlan Ellison [Spoilers, Gore Discret

Posted: Sat Dec 08, 2012 8:51 pm
by Ufua
I liked this story. Sure, I can't really play the game without thinking violent images from this story, but I enjoyed this story.
I enjoyed this story very much.
Excuse me, I need to slip into my strait jacket for a few weeks, as this story passes through.
*eye twitch*

Re: With Apologies To Harlan Ellison [Spoilers, Gore Discret

Posted: Sun Dec 09, 2012 2:33 am
by MrDogsniper
My night was just spent downloading and failing on the Nimdok section of the I have no mouth and I must scream game...ill win this game...oh i will.

Re: With Apologies To Harlan Ellison [Spoilers, Gore Discret

Posted: Wed Mar 06, 2013 3:01 am
by BlackWaltzTheThird
So, this is a bit of a necropost, but I just wanted to say I finally got around to reading this. I was not as disturbed as others seemed to be. In fact, I was not phased at all. I sat casually in the library eating my lunch while reading it. I was fascinated by the prospect of enduring so much torture that one is more or less unphased by normally crippling if not fatal injuries. It was a delightful window into the simultaneous frailty and resolve of the human spirit. Also I now have a morbid desire for similar stories. I want to know, like Bane, whether such things would break a person's spirit or body first. Let's say it's curiosity.

Perhaps there's something wrong with me.

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Posted: Sat Aug 30, 2014 12:57 am
by timetravelzero
Doomish, do you have ANY link to this story? Someone I know said it was worth reading, if dark as all hell.

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Posted: Sat Aug 30, 2014 1:36 am
by Mahorfeus
timetravelzero wrote:Doomish, do you have ANY link to this story? Someone I know said it was worth reading, if dark as all hell.
All of Doomish's old shit is available for download from this thread.