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DaMan65 wrote:DAWWWWWWWWW!!!!!

I really liked that props to you good sir

I felt happy when Hiaso confessed but the sad realization that Misha's still like that mad me sad again

But you did say this was a tragedy

Well, I could type an epilogue out...one that would probably make even me tear up writing it out...or I could leave this on a somewhat bittersweet ending. I just thought this was the best way.

There clearly can't be a happy ending, but some finality might help, just thinking of them forever stuck in limbo

This was pretty awesome, your writing style is pretty good, well...actually, so was the whole damn story. well done

Jaden82 wrote:

DaMan65 wrote:DAWWWWWWWWW!!!!!

I really liked that props to you good sir

I felt happy when Hiaso confessed but the sad realization that Misha's still like that mad me sad again

But you did say this was a tragedy

Well, I could type an epilogue out...one that would probably make even me tear up writing it out...or I could leave this on a somewhat bittersweet ending. I just thought this was the best way.

An older, and happily married Hisao and Shizune comming home from the hospital, carrying their first born child, a little girl named Misha.

I've read that somewhere else on the boards. I can't remember which tread though. Don't wanna use that now that it's been thought up by someone else.

I could add my own twist.

An older and recently widowed Shizune leaves the hospital with a baby. She named the boy Hisao after her deceased husband, who died young of a heart attack due to his condition. She thought she would be alone in the world after the deaths of Misha and Hisao, but now a glimmer of hope appeared with her child.

Dammit...I'm such a bastard....and sad.

Jaden82 wrote:I've read that somewhere else on the boards. I can't remember which tread though. Don't wanna use that now that it's been thought up by someone else.

I could add my own twist.

An older and recently widowed Shizune leaves the hospital with a baby. She named the boy Hisao after her deceased husband, who died young of a heart attack due to his condition. She thought she would be alone in the world after the deaths of Misha and Hisao, but now a glimmer of hope appeared with her child.

Dammit...I'm such a bastard....and sad.

You secretly work for Key Visual Arts Don't you

bradpara wrote: You secretly work for Key Visual Arts Don't you

I think I'd come up with some nice ideas for suffering for them.

I enjoyed Clannad and Kanon. Haven't forgiven them for Air though.

Jaden82 wrote:Haven't forgiven them for Air though.

Yes... Seven hours of my life I'll never get back...
On the other hand I was able to trade the box in for Aria - almost the same letters, but so much better...

It's almost like this board pulls decent writers towards it like moths to a flame... ">_> Srsly, the amount of decent to good to simply brilliant fics greatly outnumbers the horrifyingly bad ones O.o

I think we're setting a record here

So yeah, great work right here ^_^ If you like, you could have me proofread as well, I'm usually pretty good at catching typos (usually... ">_>)

Leotrak wrote:It's almost like this board pulls decent writers towards it like moths to a flame... ">_> Srsly, the amount of decent to good to simply brilliant fics greatly outnumbers the horrifyingly bad ones O.o

Thanks for the kind words. I really enjoyed your "Numbered Days" fanfic. Reading that along with a few other stories had me thinking that this board has some good writers and editors and it wouldn't hurt for me to post a few stories I had brewing in my head. I'm glad to see at least quite a few people enjoyed my first attempt.