The March of The Feminists (Chapter 1 posted)
Posted: Sun Jun 13, 2010 11:45 am
Here's my very first fan fic I decided to post in the KS Forums. I first sent kosherbacon a draft of this to see what he thinks of this and helped me out a bit by pointing out some stuff. You can say that this is the sequel of The Coming Storm by kosherbacon. If there's some typos or anything, please point it out and tell me what you think. (I'm just 13 and a fledgling writer so please don't criticize me too hard.)
The March of the Feminists
Prologue
Pulling the Strings
Somewhere in Japan…
In a room only lit by moonlight coming from the skylight above, a lone figure sits comfortable on her chair, taking sip of her cup of tea while enjoying the pristine view of the sea. Bits of moonlight passed through the window and onto the woman’s face.
Light from lightning from the clouds above lit up the room for a moment, revealing a fully furnished and decorated room. There was a long table in the center of the room. A huge map of the world is spread out on top, with several pieces of Chess, Risk, and Battleship marked several locations on the map. And there’s a statue of a female goddess wielding a spear and shield that oversees the whole room.
The female figure stands up from her seat, as if expecting someone to come. Two great doors slowly open, light pours into the room, a pink haired woman comes in.
“So you have come. It was getting lonesome drinking tea just by myself. Care for some parfait?”
“Oh, no my queen, thank you but I’m already full.” The visitor said as she kneels before her.
“Rise, my faithful subject. You have shown your loyalty enough to please me. I hope you’re still loyal in the future, my confidante.”
“I’m loyal and forever be to you, my lady. I’m sure the Goddess will guide you.”
An antique golden phone on a small coffee table abruptly rings.
“Do you mind, my dear?”
“I’ll be all over it, my queen.”
The queen’s loyal subject picks up the phone with haste and speaks with the caller on the antique telephone.
“My queen, it seems to be urgent that you talk to, the artist from the Yamaku Genetics facility”
The queen came to the phone to communicate with the one called the artist.
“What is so urgent, my subordinate?”
“My apologies for intruding my highness but I have the DNA serum you wish.”
“Is cloning technology now available?”
“Unfortunately my queen, cloning is still has some problems like unexpected mutations.”
“Let it be, keep that serum safe, that genetic piece of material is our key to make the perfect soldier.”
“I shall guard it with my life and may the Goddess watch over you.”
“And may the goddess give you knowledge.”
The queen places the receiver down and turns towards her loyal subject.
“Shall we go?”
“It will be my pleasure if we do.”
The two left the room and were approached by two female guards, equipped with Gauss Rifles and wearing body armor with an emblem of a falcon engraved in the middle. One of them speaks with their benevolent master.
“My lady, sentries have found and captured a group of spies sneaking around in the Goddess’s sanctum and have taken them to the dungeons. What do you to do to them?”
“I want one of them in the Torture room and send the rest to be harvested.”
“As you wish, my lady.”
The two left, bearing the orders of their master.
“Shall we go my queen?”
“Indeed”
The two went to the Torture room where prisoners are to be forced to squeal out interesting information. As the two went through the corridors of the Palace, the followers who encountered their queen kneel at her presence, showing their undying faith to their leader.
As they reached their destination, two fully armored knights opened the door to the condemned room and accompanied them in the dark chamber. One of the knights turns on the lights, revealing a gruesome scene. Traps used for torture are located at different parts of the room; some even has their victims rotting inside them. The walls are stained with the blood of the victims of the room, desperately trying to claw their way out but to no avail. And in the middle of the room is one of the spies from the condemned group. Naked, blindfolded, and tied to a chair. He seems to be uttering a short prayer.
“So, you dare enter the sanctum of the Goddess? I ought to castrate you here and now!”
“You’re a heretic and vile woman! You’ll never get away from this!”
“Oh, I’m not going to because we’re taking over.”
“What are you saying?!”
“How dare you yell at me with such insolence? You’re lucky you’re not sent to be harvested in the Genetics Lab!”
“Harvested, you’re, y-you’re?”
“We’re collecting men’s semen. We’re experimenting with male DNA, developing viruses to make you submit to my rule.”
“But, why are you doing this?!”
“It’s very simple, you see, women are the ones who should be ruling the Human race, not you barbarous curs. Men are filthy, inconsiderate creatures who live just to kill and fuck! Making all kinds of shit just to say that you are the dominate force but the women should be that force. We deserve more than a life of serving men and quenching their thirst for sex. So that’s why we’re developing a virus that will control you savage beasts and bend to our will. It’s the time of women to rise and men to go to their rightful place as our devoted pets!”
“You’re crazy!”
“Knight, give me the experimental S-virus”
“Yes my queen.”
The servant gives a vial filled with a viscous green fluid and removed the blindfold of the victim.
“Hakamichi Shizune! I should’ve known that you’re behind all this. I was right all along. From Yamaku to the throne of the Emperor, you’ve become an empress yourself. Damn you!”
“I’m glad that you remembered. Because of you, Kenji, we managed to continue our operations undisturbed. Now, I’m going to liberate you of your ways.”
“Hey, what are you going to do with that?”
Shizune opens the vial and splashes the contents on Kenji’s face.
“What is this?!”
“You’ll be liberated, one way or another. Hehe.“
“What’s happening to me?!”
Kenji eye’s begins to be bloodshot and his face turns red while the queen and her subordinates merely watched, enjoying the death of a man who was a thorn in Shizune’s side. The queen’s “second-in-command” takes notes of what’s happening to their victim, Kenji Setou, who was being experimented with the experimental S-virus. His blood soon begins to drip out of his nose, his eyes crying blood. His mouth also fills up with the crimson fluid, slowly drowning in the very thing that brought him life. Every orifice in his body soon bleeds and soon enough, he died a gruesome death, either by drowning in his own blood or merely died from massive blood lost.
“Knight, get this corpse incinerated and spread it around my garden. My flowers could use some male fertilizer.”
As the queen declares such a morbid command, the faithful followers dragged the bloody corpse into a chute where corpses are suppose to be thrown in to be incinerated, leaving a trail of blood from a bloody puddle.
“Are my Legions ready Shiina?”
“Of course my queen, your warriors are ready to die for the will of the Goddess and the will of the Hakamichi. Do you want the invasion to be done now my lady?”
“Let’s not be hasty Misha. There is only one more thorn to get rid of… right Satou.”
One of the Knights removes her helmet and turned out to be Satou Lilly, an old enemy of the Feminists years ago.
“Yes milady, the one you seek is Ikezawa Hanako, the last leader of the Enlightened Liberation Front.”
“Will you take care of your old friend?”
“I’ll take care of her, personally.”
“Do not fail me or the wrath of the Goddess will befall on you.”
“Acknowledged my queen, I shall head out to execute Ms. Ikezawa.”
The defected knight left the room to take down Ikezawa Hanako while the Feminists prepare for the coming war.
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A week later…
“Hisao, I’m going out for short walk.”
“Be careful Hanako, and come back soon.”
Leaving the safety of her home, Hanako, is one of the leaders of the Enlightened Liberation Front and heads out to a meeting with the Anti-Feminists but was being watched without her knowledge.
The tracker is observing her via rooftop while relaying information to her would-be assailant information on her whereabouts.
Hanako obliviously walked into an alleyway nearby and the tracker surely follows but to her surprise, she lost her target.
“Madam Satou, the target, she is gone.”
“Find her; I need to know where the meeting will take place.”
“Yes madam”
*Gun cocks*“Looking for me?”
The tracker didn’t move because she knows that there’s a gun aimed at the back of her head.
“Good girl, I thought I have to splatter you brains all over the street below, now what is Lilly up to?”
“I-I don’t know. She only told me to track you down.”
“Lies!”
Hanako smacked her tracker behind the head and grabbed her by the neck while pointing gun at her forehead.
“Now, if you don’t squeal in five seconds, I’ll blow you fucking brains out!”
“Ok, ok, I’ll talk! Madam Lilly wants to take you out with the rest of the E.L.F. but she might do everything just to kill you.”
The tracker’s words sent fear into Hanako’s heart. She let’s down her hostage and walked away in shock.
“Hi-hisao…”
She turns her gun towards the tracker and pulled the trigger. The tracker is shot in the head and sits lifelessly beside a wall sprayed with her blood. Hanako rushes to Hisao to ensure that he’s alive. As she enters her their home, the scene shocks her.
“Welcome home… Hanako.”
In front of her is, Lilly Satou with her sword drawn and nearby is Hisao, lying on the floor, showing no signs of life. Hanako bursts into tears to see Hisao in such a state and rushed towards him.
“Oh don’t worry; he’s still alive, but barely.”
“What did you do to him?!”
“I merely injected him with a serum that sent him into suspended animation for the next hour but he could have some fatal side effects.”
“You bitch!”
Hanako aimed her pistol at Lilly and pulls the trigger but was deflected by her Carbine sword. She jumps at Hanako in retaliation, aiming to cut her head off but was quickly blocked by Hanako’s Katana hidden in her thick clothes.
“I never knew that you were a swordswoman yourself Hanako but unfortunately that won’t save you.”
“I’m going to kill you for what you did to Hisao!”
Hanako gives an uppercut at Lilly’s stomach, stunning her for a moment and was given a kick to the face. Lilly was barely conscious after receiving a well struck blow and backs away from her enemy.
“You have become strong Hanako, I’m impressed. Too bad you weren’t able to save Hisao.”
Hanako merely stood in a defensive stance while hearing Lilly’s words.
“Now, cat got your tongue? You know Hanako, the world is really cruel to women, especially those who are scarred. Hisao merely feels sorry to you and said that he loves you even though it was all a lie. He would have chosen me instead but felt sorry to the scarred little girl reading all by her own.”
“Lilly, why… w-why are you doing this?”
“Oh my poor, little girl. You were given the chance to come back into the Sisterhood of the Goddess but you went on with your resistance with Kenji. You should have joined us Hanako, one way of another.”
“I would never join your cause of world domination. It’s unjust and it would threaten the very existence of the human race.”
“Poor girl, you’ve been brainwashed by the male propaganda. Now, it’s time for you to die.”
Lilly rushed towards Hanako, aiming towards her neck. Hanako couldn’t evade the coming strike because Lilly could stab Hisao with her blade. Hanako uses her Katana to block Lilly’s sword.
“Oh, that won’t work girl.”
Lilly quickly disarms Hanako and thrusts her carbine sword into her chest.
“Lilly, h-how could you?”
“I’m sorry Hanako, I must follow Queen Hakamichi, for the sake of my sister.”
“L-lilly…”
Lilly slowly pulled the sword from Hanako’s dying body and left her beside Hisao, who was unaware of what’s happening. Lilly leaves the two quietly in their home for the authorities to arrive.
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Two days later…
“… now if we send the Falcons to support the Navy invading the Philippines, we may get the rest of the invasion force to attack the rest of South East Asia and China without having to use our-“
The sound of creaking door stops a general explaining her plan to the queen and a tall figure comes in and kneels in front of the queen, slouched on her throne.
“The deed is done, my lady.”
“I’m amazed that you actually did it. I actually thought that you’re going to defect back into Hanako’s side but I see that your sister, or should I say brother have kept you allying with us.”
“What more do you have to take from me?”
“Oh, I didn’t take anything. You killed her by your own will. But because of your service, your brother is one step away from freedom. There’s only one thing you need to do, my mercenary.”
“What do you want?”
“I already have The Genius, The Swift, and The Loyal by my side. All I need is The Blade to complete my circle of elite generals. If you join me and served me well, I’ll reverse the doings that I did to your brother and set him free and you’ll be free as well. If you reject, I’m sure the Fiends will enjoy you for dinner.”
“I have no choice; I shall be a tactician of yours for the sake of Akira.”
“Now, the purging of the world begins.”
(To be continued)
The March of the Feminists
Prologue
Pulling the Strings
Somewhere in Japan…
In a room only lit by moonlight coming from the skylight above, a lone figure sits comfortable on her chair, taking sip of her cup of tea while enjoying the pristine view of the sea. Bits of moonlight passed through the window and onto the woman’s face.
Light from lightning from the clouds above lit up the room for a moment, revealing a fully furnished and decorated room. There was a long table in the center of the room. A huge map of the world is spread out on top, with several pieces of Chess, Risk, and Battleship marked several locations on the map. And there’s a statue of a female goddess wielding a spear and shield that oversees the whole room.
The female figure stands up from her seat, as if expecting someone to come. Two great doors slowly open, light pours into the room, a pink haired woman comes in.
“So you have come. It was getting lonesome drinking tea just by myself. Care for some parfait?”
“Oh, no my queen, thank you but I’m already full.” The visitor said as she kneels before her.
“Rise, my faithful subject. You have shown your loyalty enough to please me. I hope you’re still loyal in the future, my confidante.”
“I’m loyal and forever be to you, my lady. I’m sure the Goddess will guide you.”
An antique golden phone on a small coffee table abruptly rings.
“Do you mind, my dear?”
“I’ll be all over it, my queen.”
The queen’s loyal subject picks up the phone with haste and speaks with the caller on the antique telephone.
“My queen, it seems to be urgent that you talk to, the artist from the Yamaku Genetics facility”
The queen came to the phone to communicate with the one called the artist.
“What is so urgent, my subordinate?”
“My apologies for intruding my highness but I have the DNA serum you wish.”
“Is cloning technology now available?”
“Unfortunately my queen, cloning is still has some problems like unexpected mutations.”
“Let it be, keep that serum safe, that genetic piece of material is our key to make the perfect soldier.”
“I shall guard it with my life and may the Goddess watch over you.”
“And may the goddess give you knowledge.”
The queen places the receiver down and turns towards her loyal subject.
“Shall we go?”
“It will be my pleasure if we do.”
The two left the room and were approached by two female guards, equipped with Gauss Rifles and wearing body armor with an emblem of a falcon engraved in the middle. One of them speaks with their benevolent master.
“My lady, sentries have found and captured a group of spies sneaking around in the Goddess’s sanctum and have taken them to the dungeons. What do you to do to them?”
“I want one of them in the Torture room and send the rest to be harvested.”
“As you wish, my lady.”
The two left, bearing the orders of their master.
“Shall we go my queen?”
“Indeed”
The two went to the Torture room where prisoners are to be forced to squeal out interesting information. As the two went through the corridors of the Palace, the followers who encountered their queen kneel at her presence, showing their undying faith to their leader.
As they reached their destination, two fully armored knights opened the door to the condemned room and accompanied them in the dark chamber. One of the knights turns on the lights, revealing a gruesome scene. Traps used for torture are located at different parts of the room; some even has their victims rotting inside them. The walls are stained with the blood of the victims of the room, desperately trying to claw their way out but to no avail. And in the middle of the room is one of the spies from the condemned group. Naked, blindfolded, and tied to a chair. He seems to be uttering a short prayer.
“So, you dare enter the sanctum of the Goddess? I ought to castrate you here and now!”
“You’re a heretic and vile woman! You’ll never get away from this!”
“Oh, I’m not going to because we’re taking over.”
“What are you saying?!”
“How dare you yell at me with such insolence? You’re lucky you’re not sent to be harvested in the Genetics Lab!”
“Harvested, you’re, y-you’re?”
“We’re collecting men’s semen. We’re experimenting with male DNA, developing viruses to make you submit to my rule.”
“But, why are you doing this?!”
“It’s very simple, you see, women are the ones who should be ruling the Human race, not you barbarous curs. Men are filthy, inconsiderate creatures who live just to kill and fuck! Making all kinds of shit just to say that you are the dominate force but the women should be that force. We deserve more than a life of serving men and quenching their thirst for sex. So that’s why we’re developing a virus that will control you savage beasts and bend to our will. It’s the time of women to rise and men to go to their rightful place as our devoted pets!”
“You’re crazy!”
“Knight, give me the experimental S-virus”
“Yes my queen.”
The servant gives a vial filled with a viscous green fluid and removed the blindfold of the victim.
“Hakamichi Shizune! I should’ve known that you’re behind all this. I was right all along. From Yamaku to the throne of the Emperor, you’ve become an empress yourself. Damn you!”
“I’m glad that you remembered. Because of you, Kenji, we managed to continue our operations undisturbed. Now, I’m going to liberate you of your ways.”
“Hey, what are you going to do with that?”
Shizune opens the vial and splashes the contents on Kenji’s face.
“What is this?!”
“You’ll be liberated, one way or another. Hehe.“
“What’s happening to me?!”
Kenji eye’s begins to be bloodshot and his face turns red while the queen and her subordinates merely watched, enjoying the death of a man who was a thorn in Shizune’s side. The queen’s “second-in-command” takes notes of what’s happening to their victim, Kenji Setou, who was being experimented with the experimental S-virus. His blood soon begins to drip out of his nose, his eyes crying blood. His mouth also fills up with the crimson fluid, slowly drowning in the very thing that brought him life. Every orifice in his body soon bleeds and soon enough, he died a gruesome death, either by drowning in his own blood or merely died from massive blood lost.
“Knight, get this corpse incinerated and spread it around my garden. My flowers could use some male fertilizer.”
As the queen declares such a morbid command, the faithful followers dragged the bloody corpse into a chute where corpses are suppose to be thrown in to be incinerated, leaving a trail of blood from a bloody puddle.
“Are my Legions ready Shiina?”
“Of course my queen, your warriors are ready to die for the will of the Goddess and the will of the Hakamichi. Do you want the invasion to be done now my lady?”
“Let’s not be hasty Misha. There is only one more thorn to get rid of… right Satou.”
One of the Knights removes her helmet and turned out to be Satou Lilly, an old enemy of the Feminists years ago.
“Yes milady, the one you seek is Ikezawa Hanako, the last leader of the Enlightened Liberation Front.”
“Will you take care of your old friend?”
“I’ll take care of her, personally.”
“Do not fail me or the wrath of the Goddess will befall on you.”
“Acknowledged my queen, I shall head out to execute Ms. Ikezawa.”
The defected knight left the room to take down Ikezawa Hanako while the Feminists prepare for the coming war.
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A week later…
“Hisao, I’m going out for short walk.”
“Be careful Hanako, and come back soon.”
Leaving the safety of her home, Hanako, is one of the leaders of the Enlightened Liberation Front and heads out to a meeting with the Anti-Feminists but was being watched without her knowledge.
The tracker is observing her via rooftop while relaying information to her would-be assailant information on her whereabouts.
Hanako obliviously walked into an alleyway nearby and the tracker surely follows but to her surprise, she lost her target.
“Madam Satou, the target, she is gone.”
“Find her; I need to know where the meeting will take place.”
“Yes madam”
*Gun cocks*“Looking for me?”
The tracker didn’t move because she knows that there’s a gun aimed at the back of her head.
“Good girl, I thought I have to splatter you brains all over the street below, now what is Lilly up to?”
“I-I don’t know. She only told me to track you down.”
“Lies!”
Hanako smacked her tracker behind the head and grabbed her by the neck while pointing gun at her forehead.
“Now, if you don’t squeal in five seconds, I’ll blow you fucking brains out!”
“Ok, ok, I’ll talk! Madam Lilly wants to take you out with the rest of the E.L.F. but she might do everything just to kill you.”
The tracker’s words sent fear into Hanako’s heart. She let’s down her hostage and walked away in shock.
“Hi-hisao…”
She turns her gun towards the tracker and pulled the trigger. The tracker is shot in the head and sits lifelessly beside a wall sprayed with her blood. Hanako rushes to Hisao to ensure that he’s alive. As she enters her their home, the scene shocks her.
“Welcome home… Hanako.”
In front of her is, Lilly Satou with her sword drawn and nearby is Hisao, lying on the floor, showing no signs of life. Hanako bursts into tears to see Hisao in such a state and rushed towards him.
“Oh don’t worry; he’s still alive, but barely.”
“What did you do to him?!”
“I merely injected him with a serum that sent him into suspended animation for the next hour but he could have some fatal side effects.”
“You bitch!”
Hanako aimed her pistol at Lilly and pulls the trigger but was deflected by her Carbine sword. She jumps at Hanako in retaliation, aiming to cut her head off but was quickly blocked by Hanako’s Katana hidden in her thick clothes.
“I never knew that you were a swordswoman yourself Hanako but unfortunately that won’t save you.”
“I’m going to kill you for what you did to Hisao!”
Hanako gives an uppercut at Lilly’s stomach, stunning her for a moment and was given a kick to the face. Lilly was barely conscious after receiving a well struck blow and backs away from her enemy.
“You have become strong Hanako, I’m impressed. Too bad you weren’t able to save Hisao.”
Hanako merely stood in a defensive stance while hearing Lilly’s words.
“Now, cat got your tongue? You know Hanako, the world is really cruel to women, especially those who are scarred. Hisao merely feels sorry to you and said that he loves you even though it was all a lie. He would have chosen me instead but felt sorry to the scarred little girl reading all by her own.”
“Lilly, why… w-why are you doing this?”
“Oh my poor, little girl. You were given the chance to come back into the Sisterhood of the Goddess but you went on with your resistance with Kenji. You should have joined us Hanako, one way of another.”
“I would never join your cause of world domination. It’s unjust and it would threaten the very existence of the human race.”
“Poor girl, you’ve been brainwashed by the male propaganda. Now, it’s time for you to die.”
Lilly rushed towards Hanako, aiming towards her neck. Hanako couldn’t evade the coming strike because Lilly could stab Hisao with her blade. Hanako uses her Katana to block Lilly’s sword.
“Oh, that won’t work girl.”
Lilly quickly disarms Hanako and thrusts her carbine sword into her chest.
“Lilly, h-how could you?”
“I’m sorry Hanako, I must follow Queen Hakamichi, for the sake of my sister.”
“L-lilly…”
Lilly slowly pulled the sword from Hanako’s dying body and left her beside Hisao, who was unaware of what’s happening. Lilly leaves the two quietly in their home for the authorities to arrive.
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Two days later…
“… now if we send the Falcons to support the Navy invading the Philippines, we may get the rest of the invasion force to attack the rest of South East Asia and China without having to use our-“
The sound of creaking door stops a general explaining her plan to the queen and a tall figure comes in and kneels in front of the queen, slouched on her throne.
“The deed is done, my lady.”
“I’m amazed that you actually did it. I actually thought that you’re going to defect back into Hanako’s side but I see that your sister, or should I say brother have kept you allying with us.”
“What more do you have to take from me?”
“Oh, I didn’t take anything. You killed her by your own will. But because of your service, your brother is one step away from freedom. There’s only one thing you need to do, my mercenary.”
“What do you want?”
“I already have The Genius, The Swift, and The Loyal by my side. All I need is The Blade to complete my circle of elite generals. If you join me and served me well, I’ll reverse the doings that I did to your brother and set him free and you’ll be free as well. If you reject, I’m sure the Fiends will enjoy you for dinner.”
“I have no choice; I shall be a tactician of yours for the sake of Akira.”
“Now, the purging of the world begins.”
(To be continued)
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