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This was my first time drawing KS characters, I thought I did a pretty decent job. I didn't like how Hanako's eye turned out, that bugged me.
7/8 stood for the day when I drew this, which was July 8, 2009... almost a year ago.
I know, shame on me for drawing on line paper.
http://img412.imageshack.us/img412/3785 ... hizune.png

It looks good, very close to the original. I like it.
Although, it was a pretty bad idea to write the date of the drawing directly into the picture.

I say you did a pretty good job. the proportions look fine to my amateur eye.

Awww, they're good!

I think you should have made a little bit of Hanako's scars visible, though.

Thank you! I left out the scars because I didn't know how to draw it.

Hanako's eye looks perfectly fine to me. I think that you captured their characters perfectly.

You could perhaps improve them by adding more detail to the hair and by shading a little, but then again, that may over-do them and ruin the style.

No, they're good. Me likey.

Great job on those drawings. Hanako looks just fine, at least when comparing that drawing to the Hanako in the upper-right corner of my screen. I can see why the eye bugs you, but it doesn't make the drawing look any worse. And Shizune looks like herself.

I want to learn to draw, too :/