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Re: This is My Fan Art

Posted: Sat Apr 10, 2010 11:08 am
by Bara
The Biologist wrote:That's a fucking praying mantis. I think Emi biting your head off during intercourse would probably qualify as a Bad End.
Only if it was before climax. Once Hisao gets his nut he has served his purpose; Father of the Loli Corps for the Feminine Conspiracy. :mrgreen:

Re: This is My Fan Art

Posted: Thu Apr 15, 2010 4:28 am
by suoan
Thanks everyone, thanks for your encourage. :D You are right, I see there are some balance problem in the face. :oops:

I like Rin Tezuka, she is a eccentric,talk with her is very interesting.This typy of characters is not familiar in this Galgame.

Re: This is My Fan Art

Posted: Thu Apr 15, 2010 4:41 am
by suoan
Hydra wrote:Image
sorry, but its the only thing i can think of
Hahaha,it's also lovely,right? :D Big eyes always means cute, because children's eyes seems much bigger in their faces than when they grow up, and the people are cute when they are young. :mrgreen:

Re: This is My Fan Art

Posted: Thu Apr 15, 2010 4:56 am
by suoan
Now let me try again. :P
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And I want to ask who design Mikado's hair. It's a nightmare when I draw her hair. :cry:

Re: This is My Fan Art

Posted: Thu Apr 15, 2010 12:06 pm
by Xybaro
suoan wrote:Now let me try again. :P
*image cut*

And I want to ask who design Mikado's hair. It's a nightmare when I draw her hair. :cry:
The power of drills, my friend.

The power. Of drills.

Re: This is My Fan Art

Posted: Thu Apr 15, 2010 12:07 pm
by Caesius
You did better on the eyes for Rin, Shizu and Lilly, but Rin/Emi is still kind of awkward.

Re: This is My Fan Art

Posted: Tue Apr 27, 2010 11:52 pm
by Sajomir
I agree with the others, Lilly is the best of the bunch, and is fairly passable on her own.

However, it looks to me like you're using some sort of "template" because each girl is drawn in the exact same pose (well, same posture anyway) from the waist up, and from the exact same angle. Some variation would be nice, and maybe we could figure out how to make the other four reach Lilly's level.

edit:
lol there was a second page I missed >.<

But even on the second page, while the poses are more varied, all I see are the exact same angles again. Rin is simply mirrored from your usual 3/4 angle.

Re: This is My Fan Art

Posted: Wed Apr 28, 2010 3:07 am
by das bruce
Definately improving, but I think Shizune ate her other test paper.

Re: This is My Fan Art

Posted: Thu Apr 29, 2010 7:29 am
by buckbok
I much prefer the Misha pic. She definitely looks the most 'alive' compared to the rest. As in, the others seem very stiff. Everyone's body is straight and not bending how they should in those poses.

Anyways, I did a little sketch of what I mean. The pink lines indicate flow. With these, you can very easily draw the basic structure of the body.

Hope you like it. :D

Re: This is My Fan Art

Posted: Thu Apr 29, 2010 10:44 am
by Panty Supervisor
Holy shit, this is awesome, buckbok. :shock:
Misha could have a little more meat on her bones, but since that's not the point of the picture, nevermind.

Re: This is My Fan Art

Posted: Thu Apr 29, 2010 11:25 am
by GG Crono
That pose puts this song in my mind.

Re: This is My Fan Art

Posted: Thu Apr 29, 2010 12:41 pm
by Smoku
Buckbok, you made my day a lot better for posting this :shock: awesome :o

Re: This is My Fan Art

Posted: Fri Apr 30, 2010 2:57 am
by buckbok
Hey thanks! Just trying to help.

Re: This is My Fan Art

Posted: Mon May 03, 2010 12:07 pm
by suoan
buckbok wrote:I much prefer the Misha pic. She definitely looks the most 'alive' compared to the rest. As in, the others seem very stiff. Everyone's body is straight and not bending how they should in those poses.

Anyways, I did a little sketch of what I mean. The pink lines indicate flow. With these, you can very easily draw the basic structure of the body.

Hope you like it. :D
Thanks.I know I still need to learn more about anatomy.I will do my best. :mrgreen: