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Winter bells
Posted: Fri Oct 30, 2009 8:13 pm
by Folves
Re: Winter bells
Posted: Fri Oct 30, 2009 9:28 pm
by techk8
[X] pretended to be tree
Other then that, you should proofread your story. It's okay for me, I guess.
Re: Winter bells
Posted: Fri Oct 30, 2009 9:56 pm
by SirMax
awww, there's no reason to be so scared, we don't bite. It could some proofreading/editing, and Emi seems a bit fiercer than normal, but it seems promising.
Re: Winter bells
Posted: Fri Oct 30, 2009 10:26 pm
by EternalLurker
*pre-emptively stabs, in the brain, with a blunt object, anyone who dares headlock Emi*
Assuming Hisao doesn't have any lunch of his own and was relying on Emi bringing some, run for it! Otherwise, sit down beside Rin and eat calmly.
Re: Winter bells
Posted: Fri Oct 30, 2009 11:00 pm
by Folves
SirMax wrote:awww, there's no reason to be so scared, we don't bite. It could some proofreading/editing, and Emi seems a bit fiercer than normal, but it seems promising.
Yeah, I decided after Emi got used to Hisao she'd be a lot more open and joking with him, just some self-styled character development.
Anyway, I guess majority vote wins for which route you take, I'll check back on sunday to see what's up with that.
Re: Winter bells
Posted: Sat Oct 31, 2009 12:37 am
by vermithrx
Hmm, fun.
[x] Pretended to be a tree.
Alternatively, if you're accepting write in responses:
[x] Preemtively apologised.
He's already lost, so he might as well be gracious about it, especially with Rin right there. Who knows, it may even mollify her somewhat.
Re: Winter bells
Posted: Sat Oct 31, 2009 6:03 am
by Deimos
[X] sat down beside Rin and politely waited for her to finish
Commence operation Human Shield!
vermithrx wrote:Who knows, it may even mollify her somewhat.
Should I link to a certain Molly picture? ... ... nawww, too easy!
Re: Winter bells
Posted: Sat Oct 31, 2009 9:46 am
by vermithrx
Deimos wrote:vermithrx wrote:Who knows, it may even mollify her somewhat.
Should I link to a certain Molly picture? ... ... nawww, too easy!
Now now, there's no need to get meretricious.
Then again, she doesn't seem to be as procrustean as Shuzune. Lets hope Emi isn't either.
Re: Winter bells
Posted: Sat Oct 31, 2009 1:22 pm
by Folves
vermithrx wrote:Deimos wrote:vermithrx wrote:Who knows, it may even mollify her somewhat.
Should I link to a certain Molly picture? ... ... nawww, too easy!
Now now, there's no need to get meretricious.
Then again, she doesn't seem to be as procrustean as Shuzune. Lets hope Emi isn't either.
Emi goes by the barter system.