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Winter bells

Posted: Fri Oct 30, 2009 8:13 pm
by Folves

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Re: Winter bells

Posted: Fri Oct 30, 2009 9:28 pm
by techk8
[X] pretended to be tree
Other then that, you should proofread your story. It's okay for me, I guess.

Re: Winter bells

Posted: Fri Oct 30, 2009 9:56 pm
by SirMax
awww, there's no reason to be so scared, we don't bite. It could some proofreading/editing, and Emi seems a bit fiercer than normal, but it seems promising.

Re: Winter bells

Posted: Fri Oct 30, 2009 10:26 pm
by EternalLurker
*pre-emptively stabs, in the brain, with a blunt object, anyone who dares headlock Emi*

Assuming Hisao doesn't have any lunch of his own and was relying on Emi bringing some, run for it! Otherwise, sit down beside Rin and eat calmly.

Re: Winter bells

Posted: Fri Oct 30, 2009 11:00 pm
by Folves
SirMax wrote:awww, there's no reason to be so scared, we don't bite. It could some proofreading/editing, and Emi seems a bit fiercer than normal, but it seems promising.
Yeah, I decided after Emi got used to Hisao she'd be a lot more open and joking with him, just some self-styled character development.

Anyway, I guess majority vote wins for which route you take, I'll check back on sunday to see what's up with that.

Re: Winter bells

Posted: Sat Oct 31, 2009 12:37 am
by vermithrx
Hmm, fun.

[x] Pretended to be a tree.

Alternatively, if you're accepting write in responses:

[x] Preemtively apologised.

He's already lost, so he might as well be gracious about it, especially with Rin right there. Who knows, it may even mollify her somewhat.

Re: Winter bells

Posted: Sat Oct 31, 2009 6:03 am
by Deimos
[X] sat down beside Rin and politely waited for her to finish

Commence operation Human Shield!
vermithrx wrote:Who knows, it may even mollify her somewhat.
Should I link to a certain Molly picture? ... ... nawww, too easy! :twisted:

Re: Winter bells

Posted: Sat Oct 31, 2009 9:46 am
by vermithrx
Deimos wrote:
vermithrx wrote:Who knows, it may even mollify her somewhat.
Should I link to a certain Molly picture? ... ... nawww, too easy! :twisted:
Now now, there's no need to get meretricious. :roll: Then again, she doesn't seem to be as procrustean as Shuzune. Lets hope Emi isn't either. 8)

Re: Winter bells

Posted: Sat Oct 31, 2009 1:22 pm
by Folves
vermithrx wrote:
Deimos wrote:
vermithrx wrote:Who knows, it may even mollify her somewhat.
Should I link to a certain Molly picture? ... ... nawww, too easy! :twisted:
Now now, there's no need to get meretricious. :roll: Then again, she doesn't seem to be as procrustean as Shuzune. Lets hope Emi isn't either. 8)
Emi goes by the barter system.