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[Drabbles] Six Drabbles for Six Women

Posted: Mon Sep 07, 2009 12:30 am
by Tsundere Lightning
Shizune: Exactly As Planned

Hisao is a challenge, my first in a long time.

I look intently at the board, the careful pawn walls. Hisao is good at chess; I can tell. He deliberates.

Then, with a single decisive motion, he takes his queen's knight and places it to thwart my best move.

...Four turns away.

I smile.

With my ring and middle finger, I grasp the king's castle. I leave my index, pinky, and thumb outstreched, signing "I love you" to Hisao as I castle, though he cannot know that.

He looks at the board, and smiles.

I will checkmate him in five moves.

This is from Shizune's POV if you can't tell. And, yes, yes, SHE USES JSL NOT ASL YOU'RE DOIN IT WRONG. I know. Consider it JSL dubbed into ASL.

Re: [Drabble, Shizune] Exactly As Planned

Posted: Mon Sep 07, 2009 12:42 am
by bitpeg
It's a nice little narrative.

Re: [Drabble, Shizune] Exactly As Planned

Posted: Mon Sep 07, 2009 7:17 pm
by Ozymil
One of the few fanworks that managed to make me smile. Short, sweet, and adorable: well played, good sir.

Re: [Drabbles] Six Drabbles for Six Women

Posted: Tue Sep 08, 2009 2:00 pm
by Tsundere Lightning
Misha: Gotcha!

Hiichan is extremely interesting, Shiichan tells me after school.
I grin. "What do you mean, huh Shiichan?"
She kitty smiles. ...he's encouraging me.
I grin more. I point at her - you - I hug myself - like - and I make an H then pump my fist (doki~doki), with a question-mark face - Hiichan?
I can't admit any affection for him, she says, still with the kitty smile, but really wide now.
"D'yu mean you can't? Or you won't?"
She lion-smiles, and folds her arms behind her back.
I laugh.
She knows I got her there.

Author's Notes:
Again with the JSL dubbed into ASL.
Also, OH SHIT IT'S SHIZUNE GET IN THE WHEELCHAIR! >:3


Edited: OH GOD ASTERIXES LEAVE ME ALONE

Re: [Drabbles] Six Drabbles for Six Women

Posted: Sat Sep 12, 2009 10:58 pm
by Nightdragon
Tsundere Lightning wrote:
Also, OH SHIT IT'S SHIZUNE GET IN THE WHEELCHAIR! >:3
Oh god thats hilarious. Still laughing at it. :lol:

Nice little blurbs too (I guess thats what you call them).

Re: [Drabbles] Six Drabbles for Six Women

Posted: Sat Oct 24, 2009 12:29 pm
by Tsundere Lightning
Wow, I had forgotten that people were paying attention to this.

Have yourself the rest, on Fanfiction.net (Delta, please, please stop crying.)