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was practically rushing as i draw this
when my school is ending.
forgot the details on her shirt
and her scars were not really done yet.

anyway, open for critics.
be as harsh as you want

carbonartistmonked wrote:note: moderators, please remove this topic if you find it offensive, useless, baseless, stupid or insulting

I find this header useless and annoying.

carbonartistmonked wrote:note: moderators, please remove this topic if you find it offensive, useless, baseless, stupid or insulting

WHY, THANK YOU FOR TELLING US WHAT WE CAN DO ON OUR FORUM

understood
sorry for i typed stupid stuff here

Why do people only ever seem to spend 10 minutes drawing Hanako?

In b4 because there's only half of her to draw.

Mods' patience runs thin sometimes. We're all human.

Juno wrote:Mods' patience runs thin sometimes. We're all human.

Juno wrote:sometimes.

That's generous

Juno wrote:Mods' patience runs thin sometimes. We're all human.

hahahaha

Juno wrote:Mods' patience runs thin sometimes. We're all human.

perhaps they are extensively stressed or some sort

Envy wrote:Why do people only ever seem to spend 10 minutes drawing Hanako?

In b4 because there's only half of her to draw.

jeez, i was rushing my ass off on the art
i'll try not to time myself next time, kay?

carbonartistmonked wrote:jeez, i was rushing my ass off on the art
i'll try not to time myself next time, kay?

Timed art exercises are very useful to a developing artist. Don't apologize for doing (or posting) them.

DuaneMoody wrote:Timed art exercises are very useful to a developing artist. Don't apologize for doing (or posting) them.

cool. will keep that in mind

i tend to fray away while drawing though
so, takes up more time than its supposed to

JamiroquaiAlien wrote:BAWWWWWWWWW, nobody's given me any attention for a full three hours, BAWWWWWWWWW

If you actually read the thread, you'll notice that nobody, in fact, has actually commented on the fanart itself. Almost every post past the first is off topic because Crud derailed any constructive criticism before it could start, so the OP is understandably distressed. There's no cause for you to be snide about that.

Anyway, to bring things on topic...

There's a contradiction in the way you've shaded her. Her eye makes it look as though she's lit from below and off the the right, but her hair looks like she's under a spotlight. Where is the light source supposed to be coming from? If she is spotlit, you might also add a little shading just below her hairline.

I like the way you did the scarring; It adds a sense of texture.

vermithrx wrote:There's a contradiction in the way you've shaded her. Her eye makes it look as though she's lit from below and off the the right, but her hair looks like she's under a spotlight. Where is the light source supposed to be coming from? If she is spotlit, you might also add a little shading just below her hairline.

I like the way you did the scarring; It adds a sense of texture.

woot! thanks mate
you made my day as the first comment

anyways, i always draw the ladies eyes that way
gradient from the top to the bottom
i forgot to do shading on her hair
which will make the spotlight looks like its from the top

i always do the spotlight from the top

the scarring
thanks mate. i thought of drawing the scars
with random lines gradient