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Just wanted to write some stories.

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5043751/1/What_Came_Before

Figured I'd post my stories on that site -- better than wasting your space here, and if you don't wanna read it you don't has to click.

I'm writing little, I dunno, prequels (for lack of a better term) for characters in the game. Probably just the five love interest characters, but who knows what will happen.

I only have Rin's up right now, but more should follow.

Edit: Hanako, Shizune are up

[20:27] <!Delta_Kurshiva> I think I'm going to cry if I see a Katawa Shoujo category on fanfiction.net

*shrug*

That sounds like the inside of Rin's head, alright. I enjoyed it.

Bump

Hanako's is up.

Loving Hanako's story.

Moar?

Hanako seems very... jolly near the end. Ah, but I understand, haha. It was just a bit unusual for me when all I've seen is a shy, blushing Burn-tan.

Please do keep up the writing! (Pssst! Get Shizune next!)

Wow, someone actually went and made an actual KS category on Fanfiction.net. My condolences to Delta.

Bump

Shizune is up. I don't know how I feel about this one. Comments/criticisms are appreciated.

I really liked Shizune's chapter, maybe because it stretched further back into her childhood, or maybe because I felt there was more...feeling to it. I felt sorry for her throughout the whole thing. Very well done, in my opinion.

Just read the Shizune one. I really quite liked it, it gives a good amount of potential insight into her current character. Her emotions seemed spot on. Only one complaint:

At college, perhaps, she will meet a hard-working, smart young man working towards a law degree. Or a young doctor, fresh out of residency, will take a fancy to her and make her feel warm inside.

What? No love for the Physicists and Engineers? I'm wounded.

This encourages me to start fleshing out the ideas I've been playing around with. Well done!

I quite liked Shizune and Rin's. Felt like Hanako's lacked the sense of urgency that usually permeates her scenes, though. Like she was very content and at ease, even when recalling her time at the hospital post-accident.

intresting i realy like the shizune chapter and i think the hanako matches her perfectly her personality seems to come out in it

Those were awesome!!

Commenting on six-month old posts, lol. But it's only halfway down the first page of the sub-forum, so I think I'm entitled.

Someone said that thought Hanako sounded too jolly; I think Shizune isn't jolly enough. Looking at the game, she's confidant and persistant in engaging with Hisao and seamlessly moves from trying to recruit him into the council to cultivating a friendship. The Shizune in this piece seems damaged and frosty: quite incapable of taking the iniative with Hisao as she does.