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some fanart :v

Posted: Tue May 05, 2009 4:27 pm
by mallory
I don't usually go around wantonly drawing fanart of anything, but I couldn't resist...
orz

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Re: some fanart :v

Posted: Tue May 05, 2009 9:24 pm
by Pimmy
I like it! Very cool style. Her expression strikes me a bit strange, but the overall smoothness is very nice! I like the thick outlines with the finer inner details.

Re: some fanart :v

Posted: Tue May 05, 2009 10:01 pm
by EnigmaticThief
Nice work, Mallory. There's a strange dichotomy to the way her posture suggests shying away, but her expression is very forward.

Re: some fanart :v

Posted: Thu May 07, 2009 9:28 am
by Envy
If her shoulders went any further back I reckon they'd fall off but I do like it the style, colours and contrast of line work.

Re: some fanart :v

Posted: Thu May 07, 2009 11:00 am
by mallory
Hmm~ thanks for the feedback guys, I only recently got into drawing with any seriousness so I'm trying to identify a style to develop...
Still needs lots of work in my eyes... -_-

Re: some fanart :v

Posted: Thu May 07, 2009 10:56 pm
by Vertical
Lovely. Her proportions look great. Agree with Envy on the soulders. Her facial details are simple yet convey her timidity well. Gotta say the lips are my favorite part of this.

Re: some fanart :v

Posted: Sat May 09, 2009 2:04 am
by mallory
I tried out more of an anime style~
It came out quite nice, I think I'm making progress~

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Re: some fanart :v

Posted: Sat May 09, 2009 3:19 am
by PCJedi
Looking even better now! I like Rin's face. Oh, and by the way, looking at Hanako's pose in your earlier picture reminded me of this image...
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Oh Ryukishi07 and his art, his stories and characters are top-notch, but his art is something else.

Re: some fanart :v

Posted: Sat May 09, 2009 7:45 am
by DeliciouslyAtrocious
Your lineart is just beautiful! You have a very awesome style.
The textured look on Hanako makes it seem like she's from a cel-shaded video game, haha!



RIN, THOSE HIPS ♥

Re: some fanart :v

Posted: Sat May 09, 2009 8:04 am
by Envy
Rin sure has some crotch and thigh hugging trousers there. Her pupils are also dilated and HUEG.

None of these comments are complaints though. I want to sex up your art style.

Re: some fanart :v

Posted: Sat May 09, 2009 10:38 pm
by Xevo
Only thing I see wrong with this is her mouth... Is she about to give a bj? :shock:

Other than that, she looks good. :)