Re: (Updated 6/14/2021) Pilgrimage - A Subversion of Fate [Divergent Story - No Heart Attack]
Posted: Thu Jun 24, 2021 4:27 pm
aaaAAAAAA this is why i try to avoid unfinished works. couldn't help myself though. great stuff 
I agree, this is a very evil cliffhanger...
It's been a while, but from what I remember those two new chapters are pretty similar to the original version before the rewrite - except for that cliffhanger...