Dark Winter Sky (S8)
Posted: Mon Dec 25, 2017 2:56 am
Merry Christmas, everyone! You may or may not have heard about a small festive event known as “S8”, which is basically a ‘secret santa’ where the gifts are short stories, each written by a writer on this forum. I couldn’t possibly turn down such a fun and interesting idea, so I joined in - my story, posted here, is based on the prompt “Emi and her mother host Nurse at their home for Christmas Eve dinner.”, which was submitted for the event by fellow writer and friend EurobeatJester.
At first I was worried that I couldn’t possibly make a good story of decent length out of such a short prompt, but then I remembered that prompts are supposed to be starting points rather than full synopses, and got to work adding my own flavor - in fact, as I learned later, I added so much flavor that my story is one of the longer ones this year! With luck, it’s a story that everyone can have fun reading, but which also fits into the boundaries set forth by the prompt. I hope you enjoy!
Dark Winter Sky
A small car, sounding every minute as old as it was, trundled to a stop up against the curb, its front bumper carving a chunk out of the piles of snow which lined the sides of the road. The engine stopped, the headlights faded, and the driver’s door opened, letting mildly warm air spill into the frigid outdoors. The man inside surveyed the snow for a moment, then carefully pushed both of his feet into it before using the top of the door to pull himself upright.
Small tufts of purple hair poked out from under the blue beanie on his head, seeming out of place above his tired expression. Ordinarily he looked much happier - he was the head nurse at Yamaku Academy, and the patients who knew him as “Nurse” associated him with his characteristic, calming smile - but after a drive like that, he was exhausted. All the better, he thought as he stepped out of the small snow bank, that he had come here to have fun and relax.
Nurse walked up to the house in front of him, grateful that its occupants had taken the time to clear their sidewalk, and knocked on the front door, then listened intently. Surely, any moment now, the sound of rushed steps would get louder and louder, culminating in the door being swung open - and yet, second after second, he heard no such thing. Finally, after what seemed like far too long a wait, a pair of much calmer feet could be heard approaching, and the door opened carefully, revealing a woman with medium-length brown hair in a simple yet colorful dress, who looked quite young given that the man knew she was getting into middle-age.
“Meiko!” he called, a smile appearing on his face for the first time in at least an hour. “It’s great to see you!”
The woman returned his smile. “It’s good to see you too - come on in, it’s way too cold out there.” She beckoned him inside, then closed the door behind him. “The roads weren’t too bad, I hope?”
“Well, they weren’t good, but I managed. My old girl might not be the prettiest, but she handles poor weather pretty well.”
Meiko giggled. “So you’re still driving that old pile of junk, huh?”
Nurse scoffed, faking indignation at her appraisal of his car. “That ‘pile of junk’ works just fine, thank you very much.” He smiled again, then removed his long winter coat and small hat, hanging them both up by the door. After taking a moment to try and straighten his hair, he asked “Anyways, where’s Emi? She’s usually so eager to greet people at the door.”
Meiko’s face clouded over a little, her smile shrinking away into a sigh. “She hasn’t been feeling so well lately... Here, sit down, I’ll get some tea to warm you up, and then we can talk about it.” She disappeared into the kitchen, gesturing at a table with a number of seats around it as she left. Nurse pulled out a chair and sat down, curious about Emi’s condition. He had seen her the day before winter break started, and she had seemed fine, so something must’ve happened since then. Probably just a cold, given the sudden change in weather and her love for the outdoors.
After only a minute Meiko reappeared, carrying a small pot of tea in one hand and a set of cups in the other. She placed one in front of Nurse and filled it, then poured another for herself and sat down. She pursed her lips and blew across the top of her cup, trying her best to cool down the tea inside, which was still steaming.
Nurse, much more interested in the heat of the tea, placed his hands around his cup, letting its warmth soak through the ceramic and into his hands. He felt his fingers return to life after being cold for so long, and took a few seconds to relish the sensation before his curiosity returned. “So Emi hasn’t been well?”
“I mean, she’s healthy, as far as I can tell, but she’s been really down lately.”
Interesting - Nurse had expected some scratches or sickness from Emi, given the winter weather, but not this. “Do you know why?”
Meiko leaned back in her chair. “Well, first off, with all this snow, she can’t really go out running - she can barely walk around the block without slipping, let alone get the kind of exercise she’s used to. That’s certainly not helping her mood.” She tested the tea against her lips, found it a bit too hot, and then continued. “I think the biggest problem, though, is not having Hisao around.”
Nurse smiled. “Ah... They are quite close with each other at school..”
Meiko raised one eyebrow and grinned. “I would hope they’re not too close?”
“Well, since Emi’s over 18, technically she has to give me permission to release that information to you...” Nurse grinned back. “But I can promise you that she isn’t doing anything you weren’t at her age.”
Meiko chuckled. “Somehow, that’s not very comforting."
His hands now much warmer, Nurse took a small sip of his tea, eager to warm the rest of his body up to a comfortable temperature, even if it meant scalding his tongue a little - luckily, it had cooled down to a palatable level. “Truth be told, I expected her to bring Hisao over here for the break. He’s been here before, right?”
“Yes, he was here for the last few vacations, but apparently his parents really wanted to have him home for Christmas. I can’t blame them - I was kind of worried that Emi would want to go with him.” Meiko rested her chin on one hand and sighed. “I’m not even sure what I’d say to that. After all, if that’s what would make her happy, then I can’t just say no, but... It does get lonely around here.”
Nurse had heard the same thing from a number of the parents he’d met over the years - unfortunately, Meiko had it worse, having lost her husband. Trying his best to make light of the situation, he threw her another grin. “You know, maybe you should consider working at Yamaku.”
Meiko, halfway through a sip of tea, had to quickly stop herself from laughing until she finished it. “One kid’s enough of a handful, I can’t even imagine taking care of a hundred.” They both laughed at this - Nurse wouldn’t have traded his job for anything, but he was well-acquainted with boths its peaks and valleys.
After a bit more light conversation, Meiko returned to the kitchen to prepare dinner, though she popped her head out every now and then to exchange quips with Nurse. Despite this, he felt quite lonely - normally, Emi would be here talking with him, but he hadn’t seen any sign of her yet.
Finally, once Meiko had almost finished cooking, she called “Emi! Dinner’s ready!” There was no reply, but after a few seconds Nurse saw Emi appear in the hallway and begin to walk towards him. The first thing he noticed was her hair - it was flowing down her back, instead of being up in her usual pigtails. Furthermore, it seemed strangely unkempt, though still clean. Just like Meiko had said, she looked physically healthy, but... sadder.
“Ah, the younger Ibarazaki!” Nurse said as Emi sat down. “Long time no see.”
This was enough to elicit a giggle from her, given that they had seen each other just a week ago now. “It’s good to see you, Nurse.”
“You too; it wasn’t easy getting here because of the snow, but I’m glad I made it.”
Emi sighed, resting her head on one hand. “Yeah, this snow’s the worst, it’s too slippery to go running. The only exercise I’ve gotten over the past week is shoveling our sidewalk, and even then I ended up falling over a few times.”
“Well, at least it’s only until the break ends, and then you’ll have Yamaku’s track again. Besides, this is a good chance for your body to rest!”
Emi rolled her eyes. “Yeah, I knew you’d say that.” She looked away, seeming very bored, until Meiko began to bring in food.
Plate by plate, a large dinner made its way onto the table. Finally, Meiko sat down and began to take some food for herself. Nurse took that as a go-ahead, and began to move some food onto his own plate - across from him, Emi was doing the same. Once he had a sizeable amount, he began to eat, savoring the flavor of various dishes. He stopped for a moment to praise Meiko’s cooking, then continued, eager to fill his rather empty stomach.
Once he had finished what was on his plate, Nurse went for seconds, only to be surprised when he looked across the table. Emi was still slowly working through a few small portions of rice and meat; for anyone else, he would’ve considered this an acceptable pace, but it was uncharacteristic of the girl he knew. Hoping that she’d get more food eventually, he held his tongue and continued eating, occasionally exchanging a brief story with Meiko.
When Emi finished the food on her plate, however, she got up and began to walk away. Meiko, well aware of her daughter’s usual eating habits, looked worried. “Emi, you’ve barely eaten anything - are you okay?”
Emi turned to look at her mother, then shrugged lazily. “I haven’t been exercising, so...”
Nurse scoffed. “All you’ve eaten is protein and carbs - if you’re not exercising, you should be loading up on vegetables instead.”
Her mouth drawn into a thin line, Emi stared directly into Nurse’s eyes, her expression simultaneously unenthused and annoyed. After a few seconds of deadly silence and unwavering eye contact, she turned around and stormed off to her room.
“Emi...” Meiko called after her, but a moment later the sound of a door slamming shut sounded throughout the house, and Meiko sighed, then turned to Nurse. “I’m really sorry.”
“Don’t worry about it - I remember being that age, and I’m sure you do too.”
Meiko chuckled. “Indeed I do. I just... I just wish I knew how to make her happier.”
Nurse nodded pensively. “Don’t we always.”
At first I was worried that I couldn’t possibly make a good story of decent length out of such a short prompt, but then I remembered that prompts are supposed to be starting points rather than full synopses, and got to work adding my own flavor - in fact, as I learned later, I added so much flavor that my story is one of the longer ones this year! With luck, it’s a story that everyone can have fun reading, but which also fits into the boundaries set forth by the prompt. I hope you enjoy!
Dark Winter Sky
A small car, sounding every minute as old as it was, trundled to a stop up against the curb, its front bumper carving a chunk out of the piles of snow which lined the sides of the road. The engine stopped, the headlights faded, and the driver’s door opened, letting mildly warm air spill into the frigid outdoors. The man inside surveyed the snow for a moment, then carefully pushed both of his feet into it before using the top of the door to pull himself upright.
Small tufts of purple hair poked out from under the blue beanie on his head, seeming out of place above his tired expression. Ordinarily he looked much happier - he was the head nurse at Yamaku Academy, and the patients who knew him as “Nurse” associated him with his characteristic, calming smile - but after a drive like that, he was exhausted. All the better, he thought as he stepped out of the small snow bank, that he had come here to have fun and relax.
Nurse walked up to the house in front of him, grateful that its occupants had taken the time to clear their sidewalk, and knocked on the front door, then listened intently. Surely, any moment now, the sound of rushed steps would get louder and louder, culminating in the door being swung open - and yet, second after second, he heard no such thing. Finally, after what seemed like far too long a wait, a pair of much calmer feet could be heard approaching, and the door opened carefully, revealing a woman with medium-length brown hair in a simple yet colorful dress, who looked quite young given that the man knew she was getting into middle-age.
“Meiko!” he called, a smile appearing on his face for the first time in at least an hour. “It’s great to see you!”
The woman returned his smile. “It’s good to see you too - come on in, it’s way too cold out there.” She beckoned him inside, then closed the door behind him. “The roads weren’t too bad, I hope?”
“Well, they weren’t good, but I managed. My old girl might not be the prettiest, but she handles poor weather pretty well.”
Meiko giggled. “So you’re still driving that old pile of junk, huh?”
Nurse scoffed, faking indignation at her appraisal of his car. “That ‘pile of junk’ works just fine, thank you very much.” He smiled again, then removed his long winter coat and small hat, hanging them both up by the door. After taking a moment to try and straighten his hair, he asked “Anyways, where’s Emi? She’s usually so eager to greet people at the door.”
Meiko’s face clouded over a little, her smile shrinking away into a sigh. “She hasn’t been feeling so well lately... Here, sit down, I’ll get some tea to warm you up, and then we can talk about it.” She disappeared into the kitchen, gesturing at a table with a number of seats around it as she left. Nurse pulled out a chair and sat down, curious about Emi’s condition. He had seen her the day before winter break started, and she had seemed fine, so something must’ve happened since then. Probably just a cold, given the sudden change in weather and her love for the outdoors.
After only a minute Meiko reappeared, carrying a small pot of tea in one hand and a set of cups in the other. She placed one in front of Nurse and filled it, then poured another for herself and sat down. She pursed her lips and blew across the top of her cup, trying her best to cool down the tea inside, which was still steaming.
Nurse, much more interested in the heat of the tea, placed his hands around his cup, letting its warmth soak through the ceramic and into his hands. He felt his fingers return to life after being cold for so long, and took a few seconds to relish the sensation before his curiosity returned. “So Emi hasn’t been well?”
“I mean, she’s healthy, as far as I can tell, but she’s been really down lately.”
Interesting - Nurse had expected some scratches or sickness from Emi, given the winter weather, but not this. “Do you know why?”
Meiko leaned back in her chair. “Well, first off, with all this snow, she can’t really go out running - she can barely walk around the block without slipping, let alone get the kind of exercise she’s used to. That’s certainly not helping her mood.” She tested the tea against her lips, found it a bit too hot, and then continued. “I think the biggest problem, though, is not having Hisao around.”
Nurse smiled. “Ah... They are quite close with each other at school..”
Meiko raised one eyebrow and grinned. “I would hope they’re not too close?”
“Well, since Emi’s over 18, technically she has to give me permission to release that information to you...” Nurse grinned back. “But I can promise you that she isn’t doing anything you weren’t at her age.”
Meiko chuckled. “Somehow, that’s not very comforting."
His hands now much warmer, Nurse took a small sip of his tea, eager to warm the rest of his body up to a comfortable temperature, even if it meant scalding his tongue a little - luckily, it had cooled down to a palatable level. “Truth be told, I expected her to bring Hisao over here for the break. He’s been here before, right?”
“Yes, he was here for the last few vacations, but apparently his parents really wanted to have him home for Christmas. I can’t blame them - I was kind of worried that Emi would want to go with him.” Meiko rested her chin on one hand and sighed. “I’m not even sure what I’d say to that. After all, if that’s what would make her happy, then I can’t just say no, but... It does get lonely around here.”
Nurse had heard the same thing from a number of the parents he’d met over the years - unfortunately, Meiko had it worse, having lost her husband. Trying his best to make light of the situation, he threw her another grin. “You know, maybe you should consider working at Yamaku.”
Meiko, halfway through a sip of tea, had to quickly stop herself from laughing until she finished it. “One kid’s enough of a handful, I can’t even imagine taking care of a hundred.” They both laughed at this - Nurse wouldn’t have traded his job for anything, but he was well-acquainted with boths its peaks and valleys.
After a bit more light conversation, Meiko returned to the kitchen to prepare dinner, though she popped her head out every now and then to exchange quips with Nurse. Despite this, he felt quite lonely - normally, Emi would be here talking with him, but he hadn’t seen any sign of her yet.
Finally, once Meiko had almost finished cooking, she called “Emi! Dinner’s ready!” There was no reply, but after a few seconds Nurse saw Emi appear in the hallway and begin to walk towards him. The first thing he noticed was her hair - it was flowing down her back, instead of being up in her usual pigtails. Furthermore, it seemed strangely unkempt, though still clean. Just like Meiko had said, she looked physically healthy, but... sadder.
“Ah, the younger Ibarazaki!” Nurse said as Emi sat down. “Long time no see.”
This was enough to elicit a giggle from her, given that they had seen each other just a week ago now. “It’s good to see you, Nurse.”
“You too; it wasn’t easy getting here because of the snow, but I’m glad I made it.”
Emi sighed, resting her head on one hand. “Yeah, this snow’s the worst, it’s too slippery to go running. The only exercise I’ve gotten over the past week is shoveling our sidewalk, and even then I ended up falling over a few times.”
“Well, at least it’s only until the break ends, and then you’ll have Yamaku’s track again. Besides, this is a good chance for your body to rest!”
Emi rolled her eyes. “Yeah, I knew you’d say that.” She looked away, seeming very bored, until Meiko began to bring in food.
Plate by plate, a large dinner made its way onto the table. Finally, Meiko sat down and began to take some food for herself. Nurse took that as a go-ahead, and began to move some food onto his own plate - across from him, Emi was doing the same. Once he had a sizeable amount, he began to eat, savoring the flavor of various dishes. He stopped for a moment to praise Meiko’s cooking, then continued, eager to fill his rather empty stomach.
Once he had finished what was on his plate, Nurse went for seconds, only to be surprised when he looked across the table. Emi was still slowly working through a few small portions of rice and meat; for anyone else, he would’ve considered this an acceptable pace, but it was uncharacteristic of the girl he knew. Hoping that she’d get more food eventually, he held his tongue and continued eating, occasionally exchanging a brief story with Meiko.
When Emi finished the food on her plate, however, she got up and began to walk away. Meiko, well aware of her daughter’s usual eating habits, looked worried. “Emi, you’ve barely eaten anything - are you okay?”
Emi turned to look at her mother, then shrugged lazily. “I haven’t been exercising, so...”
Nurse scoffed. “All you’ve eaten is protein and carbs - if you’re not exercising, you should be loading up on vegetables instead.”
Her mouth drawn into a thin line, Emi stared directly into Nurse’s eyes, her expression simultaneously unenthused and annoyed. After a few seconds of deadly silence and unwavering eye contact, she turned around and stormed off to her room.
“Emi...” Meiko called after her, but a moment later the sound of a door slamming shut sounded throughout the house, and Meiko sighed, then turned to Nurse. “I’m really sorry.”
“Don’t worry about it - I remember being that age, and I’m sure you do too.”
Meiko chuckled. “Indeed I do. I just... I just wish I knew how to make her happier.”
Nurse nodded pensively. “Don’t we always.”