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Re-imagining Fanfic: Fideism

Posted: Thu Jun 18, 2015 6:39 pm
by swaggerjohns
(Well shit. I found a massive problem in the plot, and attempting to resolve that just caused more problems, and now the whole thing collapsed in on itself in a massive singularity of bad-writing logic. I can't delete posts, it seems, so I'll just leave this here. Sorry.)

Re: Re-imagining Fanfic: Fideism

Posted: Thu Jun 18, 2015 10:49 pm
by Blank Mage
I'd be more inclined to read this if it wasn't so dauntingly dense. I mean, that is one solid wall of text you have there.

Re: Re-imagining Fanfic: Fideism

Posted: Thu Jun 18, 2015 11:39 pm
by sciasslash
What does any of this have to do with Katawa Shoujo?

Re: Re-imagining Fanfic: Fideism

Posted: Thu Jun 18, 2015 11:42 pm
by dewelar
I have the same problem as Blank Mage, especially when there's dialogue serving as some of the bricks. Also:
swaggerjohns wrote:I'll continue it based on if it gets any interest.
Not a good idea to break forum rules with your first post.

Re: Re-imagining Fanfic: Fideism

Posted: Thu Jun 18, 2015 11:52 pm
by brythain
sciasslash wrote:What does any of this have to do with Katawa Shoujo?
This. At least get into it somewhere in the first post, even if right at the end.
I must confess I was not interested at all, in the context of these forums.