Re-imagining Fanfic: Fideism

[swaggerjohns]

(Well shit. I found a massive problem in the plot, and attempting to resolve that just caused more problems, and now the whole thing collapsed in on itself in a massive singularity of bad-writing logic. I can't delete posts, it seems, so I'll just leave this here. Sorry.)

[Blank Mage]

I'd be more inclined to read this if it wasn't so dauntingly dense. I mean, that is one solid wall of text you have there.

[sciasslash]

What does any of this have to do with Katawa Shoujo?

[dewelar]

I have the same problem as Blank Mage, especially when there's dialogue serving as some of the bricks. Also:

I'll continue it based on if it gets any interest.

Not a good idea to break forum rules with your first post.

[brythain]

What does any of this have to do with Katawa Shoujo?

This. At least get into it somewhere in the first post, even if right at the end.
I must confess I was not interested at all, in the context of these forums.