Re-imagining Fanfic: Fideism

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Re-imagining Fanfic: Fideism

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(Well shit. I found a massive problem in the plot, and attempting to resolve that just caused more problems, and now the whole thing collapsed in on itself in a massive singularity of bad-writing logic. I can't delete posts, it seems, so I'll just leave this here. Sorry.)
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I'd be more inclined to read this if it wasn't so dauntingly dense. I mean, that is one solid wall of text you have there.
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What does any of this have to do with Katawa Shoujo?
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I have the same problem as Blank Mage, especially when there's dialogue serving as some of the bricks. Also:
swaggerjohns wrote:I'll continue it based on if it gets any interest.
Not a good idea to break forum rules with your first post.
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sciasslash wrote:What does any of this have to do with Katawa Shoujo?
This. At least get into it somewhere in the first post, even if right at the end.
I must confess I was not interested at all, in the context of these forums.
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