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A Canvas of Stars - a flash fiction story about Rin in space
Posted: Fri May 01, 2015 3:56 am
by Winterspring
Re: A Canvas of Stars - a flash fiction story about Rin in s
Posted: Fri May 01, 2015 4:42 am
by brythain
It's not a very Rin piece, somehow, although it has space in it somewhere.
Why not give her a bit more character, then transfer the text into the Fan Fiction sub-forum?
Re: A Canvas of Stars - a flash fiction story about Rin in s
Posted: Sun May 10, 2015 9:28 am
by brythain
ACTUALLY, you know what the idea reminds me of? It reminds me of 'Palinurus', the short VN from Watercress Studios that just came out for NaNoReNo.
Re: A Canvas of Stars - a flash fiction story about Rin in s
Posted: Mon May 11, 2015 12:50 pm
by Oddball
It really doesn't feel like Rin in the story, just a different woman that has the same disability.