"Can You Open Your Heart?" - a Rika pseudo-route
Re: Rika Story - updated 3/23/2012
I'm really enjoying this story. The way Rika gets described, I keep thinking she's albino, even though she walks around in the sunlight.
Hanako > Lilly = Emi > Shizune > Rin
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Re: Rika Story - updated 3/23/2012
Great new scenes you've got here, Rikabro. You actually had me going backwards through the pages to find out what words Hisao meant when referring to those that could have been Rika's last. "I'm so sorry", as it turns out. I'm also very impressed by your Rin. Absolutely nailed it, I'm sure Aura would be proud. Rika's perspective on death makes for interesting reading.
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Re: Rika Story - updated 3/23/2012
Loving the Rika appearance, made me D'AWWW until my heart melted and the Rika scene in general was nice as more of Rika's past is revealed. Rin was interesting too, I guess Hisao and Rika appear outwardly as people fed up with life. Yet they find happiness in each others company.
Can't wait for more!
Can't wait for more!
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Re: Rika Story - updated 3/23/2012
You and themocaw are really giving me a run for my money... but when I throw it at the screen, nothing happens.
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Re: Rika Story - updated 3/23/2012
Perhaps you should try inserting it into the cd drive.Mahorfeus wrote:You and themocaw are really giving me a run for my money... but when I throw it at the screen, nothing happens.
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Re: Rika Story - updated 3/23/2012
Damn it, you... you keep bein' awesome, Rikabro. I can't say anything past that; it's fantastic.
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Re: Rika Story - updated 3/23/2012
Excellent!
The best chapter so far, and that's saying something.
The best chapter so far, and that's saying something.
Emi > Misha > Hanako > Lilly > Rin > Shizune
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Re: Rika Story - updated 3/23/2012
Yeah, if you put the money in the Cash Deposit drive it should take. While on the subject does anyone know how to dislodge a credit card from a floppy drive?BlackWaltzTheThird wrote:Perhaps you should try inserting it into the cd drive.Mahorfeus wrote:You and themocaw are really giving me a run for my money... but when I throw it at the screen, nothing happens.
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Re: Rika Story - updated 3/23/2012
It's pretty easy, just hit the 'Return' key, you should find it near the 'Any' key.DelusionsOfGrandeur wrote:Yeah, if you put the money in the Cash Deposit drive it should take. While on the subject does anyone know how to dislodge a credit card from a floppy drive?BlackWaltzTheThird wrote:Perhaps you should try inserting it into the cd drive.Mahorfeus wrote:You and themocaw are really giving me a run for my money... but when I throw it at the screen, nothing happens.
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BlackWaltz's Pastebin - for those who prefer to read things with no formatting and stuff. It's mostly the same as in my thread. Also contains assorted other writing!
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Re: Rika Story - updated 3/23/2012
Cool, why did I hear "Breathlessly" when I was reading the scene wth Rika.
Again you are awesome
Again you are awesome
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Re: Rika Story - updated 3/23/2012
I can't stop reading this. It's 2:40 in the morning and I can't stop. But I guess I have to for now, but please continue, it makes for an incredible read.
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Re: Rika Story - updated 3/23/2012
This, my dear friend, this is great.
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Re: Rika Story - updated 3/23/2012
I've gone through this, reread it over and over again, and I can easily say that you're a master at this.
Also, I hate fanfiction. But this made me ignore that fact so quickly, that I relinquished that hate very quickly. Still hate crossfics though.
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Also, I hate fanfiction. But this made me ignore that fact so quickly, that I relinquished that hate very quickly. Still hate crossfics though.
EDIT: Being the jolly good newbie I am, I don't know how to subscribe to excellence. Would someone please direct my in the location of the nearest subscription button?
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Re: Rika Story - updated 3/23/2012
Under the board index section of the toolbar thingy, it says view your posts, and it show all your posts, and put the most recently updated thread at the top of the list. Closest thing to a subscription as far as I know.Triscuitable wrote:I've gone through this, reread it over and over again, and I can easily say that you're a master at this.
Also, I hate fanfiction. But this made me ignore that fact so quickly, that I relinquished that hate very quickly. Still hate crossfics though.
EDIT: Being the jolly good newbie I am, I don't know how to subscribe to excellence. Would someone please direct my in the location of the nearest subscription button?
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Not that I ever made any great contributions, but oh well, too bad.
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Re: Rika Story - updated 3/23/2012
Fantasmical. Thank you!The O.H.L. wrote:Under the board index section of the toolbar thingy, it says view your posts, and it show all your posts, and put the most recently updated thread at the top of the list. Closest thing to a subscription as far as I know.Triscuitable wrote:I've gone through this, reread it over and over again, and I can easily say that you're a master at this.
Also, I hate fanfiction. But this made me ignore that fact so quickly, that I relinquished that hate very quickly. Still hate crossfics though.
EDIT: Being the jolly good newbie I am, I don't know how to subscribe to excellence. Would someone please direct my in the location of the nearest subscription button?