"Can You Open Your Heart?" - a Rika pseudo-route

[Exbando]

I'm really enjoying this story. The way Rika gets described, I keep thinking she's albino, even though she walks around in the sunlight.

[BlackWaltzTheThird]

Great new scenes you've got here, Rikabro. You actually had me going backwards through the pages to find out what words Hisao meant when referring to those that could have been Rika's last. "I'm so sorry", as it turns out. I'm also very impressed by your Rin. Absolutely nailed it, I'm sure Aura would be proud. Rika's perspective on death makes for interesting reading.

[Titus]

Loving the Rika appearance, made me D'AWWW until my heart melted and the Rika scene in general was nice as more of Rika's past is revealed. Rin was interesting too, I guess Hisao and Rika appear outwardly as people fed up with life. Yet they find happiness in each others company.

Can't wait for more!

[Mahorfeus]

You and themocaw are really giving me a run for my money... but when I throw it at the screen, nothing happens.

[BlackWaltzTheThird]

You and themocaw are really giving me a run for my money... but when I throw it at the screen, nothing happens.

Perhaps you should try inserting it into the cd drive.

[Vekter]

Damn it, you... you keep bein' awesome, Rikabro. I can't say anything past that; it's fantastic.

[Mirage_GSM]

Excellent!
The best chapter so far, and that's saying something.

[DelusionsOfGrandeur]

You and themocaw are really giving me a run for my money... but when I throw it at the screen, nothing happens.

Perhaps you should try inserting it into the cd drive.

Yeah, if you put the money in the Cash Deposit drive it should take. While on the subject does anyone know how to dislodge a credit card from a floppy drive?

[BlackWaltzTheThird]

You and themocaw are really giving me a run for my money... but when I throw it at the screen, nothing happens.

Perhaps you should try inserting it into the cd drive.

Yeah, if you put the money in the Cash Deposit drive it should take. While on the subject does anyone know how to dislodge a credit card from a floppy drive?

It's pretty easy, just hit the 'Return' key, you should find it near the 'Any' key.

[bradpara]

Cool, why did I hear "Breathlessly" when I was reading the scene wth Rika.

Again you are awesome

[The O.H.L.]

I can't stop reading this. It's 2:40 in the morning and I can't stop. But I guess I have to for now, but please continue, it makes for an incredible read.

[Mealforthree]

This, my dear friend, this is great.

[Triscuitable]

I've gone through this, reread it over and over again, and I can easily say that you're a master at this.

Also, I hate fanfiction. But this made me ignore that fact so quickly, that I relinquished that hate very quickly. Still hate crossfics though.

EDIT: Being the jolly good newbie I am, I don't know how to subscribe to excellence. Would someone please direct my in the location of the nearest subscription button?

[The O.H.L.]

I've gone through this, reread it over and over again, and I can easily say that you're a master at this.

Also, I hate fanfiction. But this made me ignore that fact so quickly, that I relinquished that hate very quickly. Still hate crossfics though.

EDIT: Being the jolly good newbie I am, I don't know how to subscribe to excellence. Would someone please direct my in the location of the nearest subscription button?

Under the board index section of the toolbar thingy, it says view your posts, and it show all your posts, and put the most recently updated thread at the top of the list. Closest thing to a subscription as far as I know.

[Triscuitable]

I've gone through this, reread it over and over again, and I can easily say that you're a master at this.

Also, I hate fanfiction. But this made me ignore that fact so quickly, that I relinquished that hate very quickly. Still hate crossfics though.

EDIT: Being the jolly good newbie I am, I don't know how to subscribe to excellence. Would someone please direct my in the location of the nearest subscription button?

Under the board index section of the toolbar thingy, it says view your posts, and it show all your posts, and put the most recently updated thread at the top of the list. Closest thing to a subscription as far as I know.

Fantasmical. Thank you!