Butterflies (Was Rinicisms) (Erotic bits)Feedback welcome

[Ilithandie]

Thank your for the wonderful story. Just finished Rin's arc and then I find this a lovly continuation. Take your time writing I for one would rather wait for the amazing story than get smaller "rushed" peices. If that makes sence.

[dewelar]

Just discovered this and found it...very intriguing . I see it's been a long time since it's been updated, and hope it hasn't been altogether abandoned.

[Wookie]

Just discovered this and found it...very intriguing . I see it's been a long time since it's been updated, and hope it hasn't been altogether abandoned.

The OP hasn't logged back in since almost a year ago, so its probably safe to say this is dead fic

[dewelar]

Just discovered this and found it...very intriguing . I see it's been a long time since it's been updated, and hope it hasn't been altogether abandoned.

The OP hasn't logged back in since almost a year ago, so its probably safe to say this is dead fic

Oh, sure, but you never know. Perhaps someday they'll wander their way back here and see that someone's still interested. There's so few works of quality about Rin as it is .

[Hoitash]

Just discovered this and found it...very intriguing . I see it's been a long time since it's been updated, and hope it hasn't been altogether abandoned.

The OP hasn't logged back in since almost a year ago, so its probably safe to say this is dead fic

Oh, sure, but you never know. Perhaps someday they'll wander their way back here and see that someone's still interested. There's so few works of quality about Rin as it is .

I've noticed that, too. She is pretty hard to write well, and I imagine a lot of people are intimidated by that, and have a hard time understanding her.

[forgetmenot]

The OP hasn't logged back in since almost a year ago, so its probably safe to say this is dead fic

Oh, sure, but you never know. Perhaps someday they'll wander their way back here and see that someone's still interested. There's so few works of quality about Rin as it is .

I've noticed that, too. She is pretty hard to write well, and I imagine a lot of people are intimidated by that, and have a hard time understanding her.

I've come to the conclusion that Rin is difficult to write mostly because in her route Hisao is pretty oblivious. There are so many times when I nearly screamed at the screen (which I guess is a credit to the writing) because of Hisao's unfathomable thickheadedness. I just recently incorporated Rin into my fic, and while her dialog certainly took the bulk of the effort, I was surprised at how difficult it was to write Hisao in a way that wouldn't paint him as a complete moron for not understanding some of the things Rin says.

[dewelar]

There's so few works of quality about Rin as it is .

I've noticed that, too. She is pretty hard to write well, and I imagine a lot of people are intimidated by that, and have a hard time understanding her.

I've come to the conclusion that Rin is difficult to write mostly because in her route Hisao is pretty oblivious. There are so many times when I nearly screamed at the screen (which I guess is a credit to the writing) because of Hisao's unfathomable thickheadedness. I just recently incorporated Rin into my fic, and while her dialog certainly took the bulk of the effort, I was surprised at how difficult it was to write Hisao in a way that wouldn't paint him as a complete moron for not understanding some of the things Rin says.

Somehow, this feels like a challenge.

Will think harder.

[Sea]

I've noticed that, too. She is pretty hard to write well, and I imagine a lot of people are intimidated by that, and have a hard time understanding her.

I've come to the conclusion that Rin is difficult to write mostly because in her route Hisao is pretty oblivious. There are so many times when I nearly screamed at the screen (which I guess is a credit to the writing) because of Hisao's unfathomable thickheadedness. I just recently incorporated Rin into my fic, and while her dialog certainly took the bulk of the effort, I was surprised at how difficult it was to write Hisao in a way that wouldn't paint him as a complete moron for not understanding some of the things Rin says.

Somehow, this feels like a challenge.

Will think harder.

Maybe the goal is to think less.

[dewelar]

I just recently incorporated Rin into my fic, and while her dialog certainly took the bulk of the effort, I was surprised at how difficult it was to write Hisao in a way that wouldn't paint him as a complete moron for not understanding some of the things Rin says.

Somehow, this feels like a challenge.

Will think harder.

Maybe the goal is to think less.

*nods* That's how my (now pretty clearly one-shot) Diary came to me. Problem now is where to go with it.

[Sea]

*sigh*
Just read through this again and marveled in the rininess, and sad that this one died. You wrote some of the best Rin on this site Homeless, I hope you come back!

[monkeywitha6pack]

The last day at hisaos parents house made me tear up, great story