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Fixed Shizune Flavor text, here come Emy ... She'll be really poplar nau.

I'm taking that to my red/green eck

Couple pointers for future: There is a comma between a manacost of an ability and the tap-symbol.
You do not capitalize keywords after the first one or in the middle of a sentence.

Also, they only work in monocolored decks or decks with ridiculously heavy mana-fixing which makes me sad and the cards weak.

konflikti wrote:Couple pointers for future: There is a comma between a manacost of an ability and the tap-symbol.

Noted, thank you.

konflikti wrote:You do not capitalize keywords after the first one or in the middle of a sentence.

I know, but I like the Capitalized look more ... and I'm not aiming for 100% accuracy so Wizards can't sue my bouncy bottom.

konflikti wrote:Also, they only work in monocolored decks or decks with ridiculously heavy mana-fixing which makes me sad and the cards weak.

I know, otherwise they should cost much more (generally 1 Color = 2 Colorless).

Also "Healty" typo.

Fixed Emi typo and comma ... some suggestion for Hanako and Rin?

Rin's card is obvious:

Rin:
UU: Sorcery
All players discard their hands

OK, if you meant just a Rin Knight card, change it to:

UUU: Knight of Chaos
Creature - Human Girl Knight
2/2
Protection from Red
T, sac: all players discard their hands

ElisaMasah wrote:Fixed Emi typo and comma ... some suggestion for Hanako and Rin?

For Hanako, how about three mana and tap gives control of an opponent's creature for the turn?

And for Rin, how about something crazy like this: http://gatherer.wizards.com/Pages/Card/ ... rseid=9742

ElisaMasah wrote:Inspired by a pic in "Fun with Photoshop" I'm starting to do a Knight Cycle with the Girls, so if yu know where to find a nice pick of the Girls in Knight/Warrior dress call me.

The Plan
Lilly - White Knight
Hanako - Red Knight
Rin - Blue Knight
Emi - Green Knight
Shizune - Black Knight

I personally think Hanako should be Blue and Rin should be Red. From the MtG website: "Red mages have no patience for talk or subtlety. They act quickly and recklessly. [...] At their best, red mages are dynamic, passionate, and unbound. At their worst, they are shortsighted, temperamental, and destructive." (http://www.wizards.com/Magic/Multiverse ... ?color=red)

Furthermore, "Blue magic is reactive, calculated, and methodical. Its strength lies in patience and intelligence. Blue mages work behind the scenes, scheming and stealing secrets. They control their environments completely before making a move. [...] At their best, blue mages are inventive and progressive. At their worst, they are manipulative and treacherous." (http://www.wizards.com/Magic/Multiverse ... color=blue)

Red seems to more suited to the passionate and whimsical artist. Rin, as others have pointed out before, seems the type to suddenly make a move on Hisao. Whereas, Hanako would be more likely to plan whole scenarios and back up scenarios before a date to avoid rejection and embarrassment.

Well, that's just my opinion. I been enjoying your posts so far and can't wait to see your new cards.

Experimental Red Hanako ... a Blue one is development, I've come back to Magic Set Editor so the crappy expansion symbol and low detail.

Rin as soon as I find a pict of her looking like a knight.

ElisaMasah wrote:Experimental Red Hanako ... a Blue one is development, I've come back to Magic Set Editor so the crappy expansion symbol and low detail.

Rin as soon as I find a pict of her looking like a knight.

KotRS.jpg

"You may cast this spell any time you could cast an instant"? i think you mean can not could since could points towards the past in this sentence.

Darlat wrote:"You may cast this spell any time you could cast an instant"? i think you mean can not could since could points towards the past in this sentence.

The program put this text automatically and yes is the Official Wizards of the Coast remind text for Flash keyword.

http://magiccards.info/ts/en/190.html

Example.

Darlat wrote:

ElisaMasah wrote:Experimental Red Hanako ... a Blue one is development, I've come back to Magic Set Editor so the crappy expansion symbol and low detail.

Rin as soon as I find a pict of her looking like a knight.

KotRS.jpg

"You may cast this spell any time you could cast an instant"? i think you mean can not could since could points towards the past in this sentence.

No, it's correct. "Could" is not only for past tense but also for Subjunctive mood.

For some reason, I was expecting Emi to have Trample.

Maybe look at the first post in this thread?

I was thinking about giving Knight Emi Trample ... but this mean I've to make her at least 3/2 to be useful. This will break the cycle and make her more costly than the other girl ... after all Original Emi had already Trample.