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Is this payback for the Emi stuff? Because now you're making me feel ashamed of posting two status updates myself over the past couple of weeks...

But, seriously, it's always good to hear that progress is being made on this story .

Looking forward to it. This might be my favorite story on the site.

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Leaty wrote:

AntonSlavik020 wrote:Looking forward to it. This might be my favorite story on the site.

That always amazes me. I hope it continues to be after the next update.

Well I'm a sucker for stories that aren't from Hisao's perspective(and bonus points if it's a girl), as well as AU stories, and this is a well written story that does both those things. Not to mention I like gxg(as long as it's a well written romance, which I'm sure this will be), so you basically combined a bunch of stuff I like into one story.

Even despite AntonSlavic's listed preferences, Mean Time to Breakdown is my favorite. It was one of the things that convinced me to get into a writing habit after a long time of hesitation, and I've enjoyed every moment of it since. It challenged me as a reader and presented a standard as a writer.

So, thank you, Leaty.

While other fics had me reaching for a metaphorical box of tissues or popcorn, MttB had me reaching for a real copy of The Little, Brown Handbook and a dictionary. As an aspiring pseudo-route writer myself, I find these far sweeter confections. (Sable has since become one of my favorite words, and I sneak it in where I can.)

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Leaty wrote:You should probably reread the last chapter before looking at this. Yes, even if you just checked it yesterday. Browse through it.

The previous chapter link goes... to the start of the story. I was meaning to reread it all anyway, but is this really only chapter two?

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That was some update! It made my emotions go all over the place. At first I was laughing(literally) at the hair styling scene, than I was intrigued by the Shizune and Misha conversations(it seems like Misha has a crush on Iwanako ), then I was annoyed at her during her argument with Nurse(I was completely on his side, and cynicism annoys me even when it makes sense), and then I was back to having fun during her conversation with Momomi(I actually laughed again). Overall really enjoyed it. I just hope Iwanako's cynicism lessens, because like I said, cynicism annoys me. Always has.

Edit: Can't believe I forgot to mention the Rin encounter. That was hilarious! Also, you wrote Rin very well I thought.

Leaty

I don't really know how much you check your Fanfaction.net messages so I though I would mention it here.

Extraordinary Rendition, Blood Pressure and 2 Become 1 have some pretty big formatting problems on the fanfiction site. I don't really know how to explain it but it's pretty strange.

Anyways, great update. I was worth the wait! Hope you are recovering well from the surgery!