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Re: Sisterhood (Hanako Epilogue) (Completed)

Posted: Sun Apr 20, 2014 12:37 am
by poopooface
Guest Poster wrote:Thanks.

And is the ending really that abrupt? All the running plotlines are pretty much wrapped up and the few teasers near the end were just teasers rather than aborted arcs.
I mean, to be honest, I don't think there should be more. You wrapped it up prefectly, I just wanted more and more of the characters frankly. I do heavily encourag you do something similar to this someday, as it was really great. :D

Re: Sisterhood (Hanako Epilogue) (Completed)

Posted: Sun Apr 20, 2014 4:49 am
by Guest Poster
If it's a consolation: IF I'd write something else, it'd probably be an expansion to this story that would pretty much pick up where things were left off here.

Re: Sisterhood (Hanako Epilogue) (Completed)

Posted: Sun Apr 20, 2014 6:24 pm
by poopooface
What does Hanako mean when she says FIRST time making love at the very end of Chapter 9?

Re: Sisterhood (Hanako Epilogue) (Completed)

Posted: Sun Apr 20, 2014 6:33 pm
by bhtooefr
poopooface wrote:What does Hanako mean when she says FIRST time making love at the very end of Chapter 9?
Their canon first time wasn't exactly making love...

Re: Sisterhood (Hanako Epilogue) (Completed)

Posted: Sun Apr 20, 2014 6:55 pm
by poopooface
bhtooefr wrote:
poopooface wrote:What does Hanako mean when she says FIRST time making love at the very end of Chapter 9?
Their canon first time wasn't exactly making love...
I understand that in the canon, intentions were misguided, it wasn't out of mutual love, and all that, but a dick did go into a vagina, did it not?

Re: Sisterhood (Hanako Epilogue) (Completed)

Posted: Sun Apr 20, 2014 7:01 pm
by poopooface
Guest Poster wrote:If it's a consolation: IF I'd write something else, it'd probably be an expansion to this story that would pretty much pick up where things were left off here.
If was used twice, would is used once, probably used once. :lol: yep, definitely consolation.
Anyway, i did say i was content, thanks again for the amazing fan fic

Re: Sisterhood (Hanako Epilogue) (Completed)

Posted: Sun Apr 20, 2014 7:11 pm
by Guest Poster
I understand that in the canon, intentions were misguided, it wasn't out of mutual love, and all that, but a dick did go into a vagina, did it not?
They had sex that first time. They didn't make love. That was the point behind that remark.

Re: Sisterhood (Hanako Epilogue) (Completed)

Posted: Sun Apr 20, 2014 7:13 pm
by poopooface
Guest Poster wrote:
I understand that in the canon, intentions were misguided, it wasn't out of mutual love, and all that, but a dick did go into a vagina, did it not?
They had sex that first time. They didn't make love. That was the point behind that remark.
Ohhh. Should have been easy to understand. :lol: im an idiot. Forgot the difference.

Re: Sisterhood (Hanako Epilogue) (Completed)

Posted: Mon Apr 21, 2014 5:19 am
by Mirage_GSM
poopooface wrote:
Guest Poster wrote:If it's a consolation: IF I'd write something else, it'd probably be an expansion to this story that would pretty much pick up where things were left off here.
If was used twice, would is used once, probably used once. :lol: yep, definitely consolation.
"Would" was used three times...

Re: Sisterhood (Hanako Epilogue) (Completed)

Posted: Mon Apr 21, 2014 1:23 pm
by poopooface
Mirage_GSM wrote:
poopooface wrote:
Guest Poster wrote:If it's a consolation: IF I'd write something else, it'd probably be an expansion to this story that would pretty much pick up where things were left off here.
If was used twice, would is used once, probably used once. :lol: yep, definitely consolation.
"Would" was used three times...
Like it really made a difference if I included it'd and I'd. He already said if enough. :lol:

Re: Sisterhood (Hanako Epilogue) (Completed)

Posted: Sun Apr 27, 2014 12:23 pm
by Darklord13
Sisterhood is the first fanfiction i've read,and it was astounding! I didn't expect to read more than 1 or 2 chapters,but i ended up reading It in one sitting.Sisterhood feels like the true continuation of Hanako's route,and you can't say the difference between ''your'' version of the characters and 4LS's characters.

Will you write more fanfiction,and if you do,will it be another Hanako's route or will it be about another character?

Re: Sisterhood (Hanako Epilogue) (Completed)

Posted: Sun Apr 27, 2014 12:30 pm
by Blasphemy
Look at the second comment on this page:
If it's a consolation: IF I'd write something else, it'd probably be an expansion to this story that would pretty much pick up where things were left off here.

Re: Sisterhood (Hanako Epilogue) (Completed)

Posted: Sun Apr 27, 2014 12:33 pm
by Darklord13
Look at the second comment on this page:
If it's a consolation: IF I'd write something else, it'd probably be an expansion to this story that would pretty much pick up where things were left off here.
Sry for missing that.
Ty for letting me know about that, but has he decided WHEN he will write the next? :)

Re: Sisterhood (Hanako Epilogue) (Completed)

Posted: Sun Apr 27, 2014 1:31 pm
by Guest Poster
I'm afraid not. Sorry.

Re: Sisterhood (Hanako Epilogue) (Completed)

Posted: Sun Apr 27, 2014 1:36 pm
by Darklord13
I'm afraid not. Sorry.
Well,that answers my question :(
I just hope you don't give up on writing fanfiction and continue this ''epilogue'' in the future. :o