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Upon re-reading my previous post, i feel i should clarify my threats were aimed towards the suggester, not the author. However after the threats was meant for the author. good story

If everything goes right I'll have the next chapter ready by Thursday

Looking forward to it

TacticalBacon wrote:Looking forward to it

Likewise

Comrade wrote:If everything goes right I'll have the next chapter ready by Thursday

*Looks at date*
Looks like everything didn't go right.

Lianam wrote:

Comrade wrote:If everything goes right I'll have the next chapter ready by Thursday

*Looks at date*
Looks like everything didn't go right.

*spams F5*
WHYYYYYYYYY!?!?!?

Sea wrote:*spams F5*
WHYYYYYYYYY!?!?!?

Please don't do this. Or that. ...Either of you.

Yeah this is why there's a "no dangling prospects of future writing in front of the audience" in the infamous sticky. Guess I'll have to tighten the screws one of these days.

I'm not completely happy with the way i ended it, so i might make it a bit longer or something when i get the time. I wanted to update it today, so again no actuall proofreading.
Epidsode 3 - Running around

The bullet goes right through the zombie's eye. I sit down against the wall as my heart rate subsides and I let out a sigh of relief.

"Good shot, right in the brains! I think." Kenji says while examining the zombie. "I'll make sure its dead."

Kenji walks over to the zombie and stabs it in the head with its knife.

"You see, there are two ways to kill a zombie; you can either destroy its brain, or burn it to a crisp." Kenji explains while cleaning his knife with his shirt.

"So, is this one dead?" I ask after I manage to calm down a bit.

"Yes, most definitely dead." Kenji says reassuringly, "Poor guy, looks like he was at the track when he got bit. He still has his gym outfit on."

Kenji holds up his hand to help me up, for some reason, I feel almost safe being here with Kenji. It looks like he has this figured out. I decide to ask him about his plan.

"So, umm where is that stockpile of yours? What kinds of "supplies" are you hiding?"

"The first stockpile is in the library, there are a couple of backpacks with ammunition and a spare gun hidden there."

"Why would you hide it in the library?! How do you know no one already found it and reported it or something?" I ask, bewildered by this flaw in his plan.

"Don't you worry, no one goes to the library here, and I hid it in my special super secret spot!"
I decide against asking what that could mean.

"But what about the zombies? Isn't it dangerous to go into the school building?"

"There shouldn't be too many of those motherfuckers in the school, seeing as the outbreak happened on Sunday when there were no classes." He answers reasonably. "Now let's go, we must not waste any more time in here."

Kenji and I walk across the first floor hallway towards the exit to the school grounds, those two zombies I've seen before seemed to have trotted away.
We might just make it out alive.

***

I almost trip over myself trying to run while carrying this heavy backpack.
I'm actually pretty good at running, even though you would probably couldn't guess it if you met me, it's just that I'm carrying almost all of the medical supplies I could get from the head nurse's office.
I'm quite lucky that the door was unlocked, because I don't know how to pick locks and I would've got to go all the way back to the dorms to get some fist aid kits, and that would've take too long, and I have to get these to the others as soon as possible, Also, going back to the dorms would put me in danger of being caught by them, and if I don't come back, who will get the others the supplies they need?

I go through one of the "secret" hallways that takes you directly to the school building.
It's not actually a secret hallway out of some fantasy book, it's just that almost no one of the students knows about it and its why I liked using it whenever the main entrance was too crowded, or when I just didn't feel like walking outdoors.

The school is completely deserted, the silence is almost serene, but the occasional bloodstain or far away scream makes the whole thing feel very eerie, though I'm not really that easily scared by stuff like that.
it's not like I'm brave or anything, not at all, I'm just really good at detaching myself from reality when I want, so I can sort of just ignore that stuff.
I run up the stairs to the second floor, and almost fall on the last step.I walk to the library door and try to catch my breath while I knock on the door.
A delicate feminine voice calls out from inside

"Who's there?"

"It's me. H..Hanako, I've g..got the supplies h..here with me."

The door opens and I'm greeted by Lilly and Yuuko, both sporting minor injuries from her fall earlier, and it looks like Lilly got a deep cut on her leg.

"Are you OK?" Lilly asks, she seems worried about me. How silly, she shouldn't worry about me, she should worry about herself.

"I'm fine" I answer my default answer to that kind of questions "You should s..sit down so I c..could treat your wounds."

Out of the corner of my eye I can see a somewhat deflated look on Lilly's face as I begin to bandage her leg.

Comrade wrote: Kenji walks over to the zombie and stabs it in the head with its knife.

It's knife, or his knife?

Hmmmmmm, intersting.
You're going with the holdout route.
Obvoiusly a big part of it is missing, what with them suddenly meeting the girls and getting supplies, and Kenji knowing a bout zombies (Flashback go!) and Lily's injuries and where is Kenji, and are you going to introduce the other characters and who's dead and . . . Stuff
But ya' know what's there is illuminating on how you're going a bout this, now keep at it.

Two questions: After which route does this take place, and how long after? Or does this just happen during Act 1? Just curious.

I like it Comrade though. Something a little bizarre such as a Zombie Apocalypse Fan-Fic is nice to have on the forums every now and then.

Just to clarify, episode 3 takes place before the other two, ithink I'll change the way it ends today

motokid108 wrote:
It's knife, or his knife?

Yeah I've noticed that too, whoops.

Lianam wrote:Two questions: After which route does this take place, and how long after? Or does this just happen during Act 1? Just curious.

I like it Comrade though. Something a little bizarre such as a Zombie Apocalypse Fan-Fic is nice to have on the forums every now and then.

Yeah, lets just say it's set in the secret "hisao knows every girl, but isn't in a relationship with any of them" route for now

oh god is Lilly bit or is it just a normal wound

TacticalBacon wrote:oh god is Lilly bit or is it just a normal wound

I predict that she is in fact bitten, and that Hanako will have to bash her head in with a lead pipe at some point

LorSquirrel wrote:

TacticalBacon wrote:oh god is Lilly bit or is it just a normal wound

I predict that she is in fact bitten, and that Hanako will have to bash her head in with a lead pipe at some point

Maybe some other time. She's fine, hanako read enough zombie horror stories to know that there's no point in treating zombie bites