Re: Iwanako: Mean Time to Breakdown {updated 2/23/2014}
Posted: Tue Feb 25, 2014 8:59 am
Eh, I think any potential shock value from it turning into a yuri route would have been minimal anyway. It's not like it actually spoils anything.
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It was a damned shock when I realized I was basically writing a modern version of those sort of books.Leaty wrote:I'm actually really keen on Jane Austen, but fuck the Brontës. Or at least Charlotte and Emily. Screw Colin Firth, too, while I'm at it.Helbereth wrote:I hate Wuthering Heights more than most people hate Hitler.
I don't see why that would be...I never liked the idea of the cameo characters, so in the continuity of this fic they border on nonexistence. They're there, but I won't ever use them, and I won't ever mention their names in my fic. It clashes with the atmosphere of dark realism that I'm trying to create.Helbereth wrote:There are six boys in room 3-3, not counting the missing Hisao: Taro, Akio, Haruhiko, Takashi, Lezard and LeLouch(or whoever that other guy is).
Sounds like Misaki, actually.Iwanako refers to a "mousy girl with shoulder-length brown hair" in Scene 7. Is this one of the cameo characters? Maybe, maybe not.
Takashi has a big bandage on the side of his head, and Haruhiko identifies as unusually effeminate (he has a damned barrette in his hair).Taro is obvious, but why the other two?Helbereth wrote:Even if you eliminate Taro, Takashi, and Haruhiko
Indeed. It's woven subtly underneath her polite exterior, though. It comes out in her monologue when she starts describing the people she encounters, and usually in rather harsh terms.That Iwanako is secretly a bit of a brat is one of my favorite contributions to the character. In her defense, her family obviously doesn't have the best role models.Helbereth wrote:because Iwanako seems to have a superficial outlook (yeah, I went there),
I hadn't even thought of that, but now you've gone and put that idea into the heads of a few dozen adolescent-minded authors. Rule 34 ensues.That said, I wouldn't place bets on Iwanako becoming the blowjob queen of Yamaku Academy.
As an author who has dangled the proverbial carrot on a stick in front of my readers for a year and a half, I commend you on the attempt to maintain an air of mystery, even if that means contradicting your previous statements.That shouldn't be taken as a promise that Iwanako will wind up with a female, only that, at some point, at least one female will have some kind of sexual or romantic relationship with at least one other female. That's all I've told anyone, and it doesn't preclude a heterosexual relationship, either.
Takashi has a big bandage on the side of his head, and Haruhiko identifies as unusually effeminate (he has a damned barrette in his hair).[/quote]Helbereth wrote:Taro is obvious, but why the other two?Helbereth wrote:Even if you eliminate Taro, Takashi, and Haruhiko
Most people in the 3-3 classroom are joke/cameo characters. Ritsu Tainaka, Misaki Kwana, Lelouch Lamperouge(though he was replaced in the full VN), Haruhiko Suzumiya, Ikuno Komaki, and Lezard Valeth to be specific. Molly is ambiguous, since according to the devs she's also a cameo, but appears in the last CG of Hanako's good end soo.... yeah.Mahorfeus wrote:I figured that it was because Haruhiko was in himself a joke/cameo character.
Because it's hard for me to take a story seriously when one of the characters in it is better known for piloting giant mecha. It would be like if Harrison Ford's character in The Fugitive were named Han Solo.Helbereth wrote:I don't see why that would be...Leaty wrote:I never liked the idea of the cameo characters, so in the continuity of this fic they border on nonexistence. They're there, but I won't ever use them, and I won't ever mention their names in my fic. It clashes with the atmosphere of dark realism that I'm trying to create.Helbereth wrote:There are six boys in room 3-3, not counting the missing Hisao: Taro, Akio, Haruhiko, Takashi, Lezard and LeLouch(or whoever that other guy is).
Ah, well that puts me at an advantage. To me, they're just faces in seats with no background information, so I can make up whatever I want if I choose to pluck one of them out and give them a life.Leaty wrote:Because it's hard for me to take a story seriously when one of the characters in it is better known for piloting giant mecha. It would be like if Harrison Ford's character in The Fugitive were named Han Solo.
Emi wrote:„Behind those two are Leon and Ooki, both from 3-3. Ooki is short for Motoki, and before you ask, he picked that nickname himself. Leon is short for... something French no one can pronounce.
Clever.Mirage_GSM wrote:I also didn't want to have a character named "Lelouch" in my story, but I wanted to use the one with aphasia... I went with a compromiseEmi wrote:„Behind those two are Leon and Ooki, both from 3-3. Ooki is short for Motoki, and before you ask, he picked that nickname himself. Leon is short for... something French no one can pronounce.
Since when this is problem for fanfiction world?Guessy wrote:Meanwhile, Iwanako crushes on Lilly rather spectacularly though I believe she's straight if I'm recalling her route correctly...?
Two words: Yuri googles. When you put them on, everything is lesbian, NO EXCEPTIONS.Helbereth wrote:Meanwhile, over here in the apocalyptic wasteland that is my mind, I'm trying to figure out why everyone is predicting a yuri situation with this story.
No offense, but I doubt anyone will believe.Leaty wrote:Actually, virtually everything I said prior to the release of scene five can be safely disregarded. (...) The future is a mysteryyyyyyyyyyyyy~~~~~~griffon8 wrote:Yes, Leaty confirmed this would be a yuri story quite early.
Iwanako X Liara T'Soni CONFIRMEDLeaty wrote:I mean, you may as well go on believing that I'm going to give Iwanako a first-year roommate with blue skin, while you're at it.