Speaking of party poopers...Interesting birthday celebration, eh?
Hi, I'm appalled. Nice to meet you.
"The way I see it, every life is a pile of good things and bad things. The good things don't always soften the bad things. But vice versa, the bad things don't necessarily spoil the good things or make them unimportant." ~ The Doctor.
Xanatos wrote:
Speaking of party poopers...Interesting birthday celebration, eh?
At first I thought party poopers were people that crashed a party and then pooped all of the sudden.
Oh, smexy pic. Bonerrific.
I should note I was initially searching for this pic I had seen of Rin shitting on the American flag. I was gonna GIMP a party hat onto her head. But I couldn't find it. XD
<KeiichiO>: "I wonder what Misha's WAHAHA's sound like with a cock stuffed down her throat..." <Ascension>: "I laughed, cried, vomited in my mouth a little, and even had time for marshmallows afterwards. Well played, Xanatos. Well played." <KeiichiO>: "That's a beautiful response to chocolate."
Rin´s, (second one), and Shizune´s, (first one), are the most intimate and character focused. Hanakos was meant, (as far as I know), to feel weird and it served to make the ending better :3. Lilly´s and Emi´s was well handled but was more about sex than the characters.
A good writer knows his limits. A great writer finds ways around them.
ArcCain wrote:Rin´s, (second one), and Shizune´s, (first one), are the most intimate and character focused. Hanakos was meant, (as far as I know), to feel weird and it served to make the ending better :3. Lilly´s and Emi´s was well handled but was more about sex than the characters.
How is fucking a tied-up guy then getting wrecked in the student council room "character focused"?
<KeiichiO>: "I wonder what Misha's WAHAHA's sound like with a cock stuffed down her throat..." <Ascension>: "I laughed, cried, vomited in my mouth a little, and even had time for marshmallows afterwards. Well played, Xanatos. Well played." <KeiichiO>: "That's a beautiful response to chocolate."
ArcCain wrote:Rin´s, (second one), and Shizune´s, (first one), are the most intimate and character focused. Hanakos was meant, (as far as I know), to feel weird and it served to make the ending better :3. Lilly´s and Emi´s was well handled but was more about sex than the characters.
How is fucking a tied-up guy then getting wrecked in the student council room "character focused"?
It shows her dominance? Maybe?
Things happen. For the best or for the worst we do not know.
ArcCain wrote:Rin´s, (second one), and Shizune´s, (first one), are the most intimate and character focused. Hanakos was meant, (as far as I know), to feel weird and it served to make the ending better :3. Lilly´s and Emi´s was well handled but was more about sex than the characters.
How is fucking a tied-up guy then getting wrecked in the student council room "character focused"?
She ties Hisao´s hands not just to be in a dominant position but so that he can´t "talk" when they do it. And I only said that the first was character focused, not the second time.
A good writer knows his limits. A great writer finds ways around them.
ArcCain wrote:Rin´s, (second one), and Shizune´s, (first one), are the most intimate and character focused. Hanakos was meant, (as far as I know), to feel weird and it served to make the ending better :3. Lilly´s and Emi´s was well handled but was more about sex than the characters.
Hanako's one felt a bit too weird. It was quite uncomfortable and I sort of got the impression that Hisao wasn't a very nice person (in that path).
I think Rin's one was the best out of all of them in terms of actual writing.
ApocalypseAli wrote:
Hanako's one felt a bit too weird. It was quite uncomfortable and I sort of got the impression that Hisao wasn't a very nice person (in that path).
This. I know, she wanted it to, and in the end it lead to both of them growing as individuals. But it still bugs the hell out of me.
"The way I see it, every life is a pile of good things and bad things. The good things don't always soften the bad things. But vice versa, the bad things don't necessarily spoil the good things or make them unimportant." ~ The Doctor.
He did actually slow down when he noticed her discomfort but given the situation breaking it off altogether didn't seem like a smart option either...given the fact communication between them was still extremely stunted.
ArcCain wrote:Rin´s, (second one), and Shizune´s, (first one), are the most intimate and character focused. Hanakos was meant, (as far as I know), to feel weird and it served to make the ending better :3. Lilly´s and Emi´s was well handled but was more about sex than the characters.
Hanako's one felt a bit too weird. It was quite uncomfortable and I sort of got the impression that Hisao wasn't a very nice person (in that path).
In what way was Hisao not nice?
<KeiichiO>: "I wonder what Misha's WAHAHA's sound like with a cock stuffed down her throat..." <Ascension>: "I laughed, cried, vomited in my mouth a little, and even had time for marshmallows afterwards. Well played, Xanatos. Well played." <KeiichiO>: "That's a beautiful response to chocolate."
To switch subjects for a sec, just saw this on my KS Facebook page. Thought it was cute.
"The way I see it, every life is a pile of good things and bad things. The good things don't always soften the bad things. But vice versa, the bad things don't necessarily spoil the good things or make them unimportant." ~ The Doctor.
<KeiichiO>: "I wonder what Misha's WAHAHA's sound like with a cock stuffed down her throat..." <Ascension>: "I laughed, cried, vomited in my mouth a little, and even had time for marshmallows afterwards. Well played, Xanatos. Well played." <KeiichiO>: "That's a beautiful response to chocolate."
