Page 3 of 3
Re: Steel [We're on the third chapter now!]
Posted: Wed May 28, 2014 10:58 am
by brythain
Silentcook wrote:If you have to ask whether someone understood something in your writing, then you should not leave that something in, ever.
I have to admit I don't understand most of this piece, so I've refrained from making substantive comments of any kind.
Re: Steel [We're on the third chapter now!]
Posted: Wed May 28, 2014 1:40 pm
by GodlyVirus
Ahhh man... now I have to take out the Mahou Shoujo scence... now I'm all kinds of depressed... no... I'll leave it in... it doesn't make sense even if you know what he's saying. *Accomplished Fan Fiction Writer*
Re: Steel [We're on the third chapter now!]
Posted: Wed May 28, 2014 3:26 pm
by Mirage_GSM
The only reference I thought I got was the one to drug abuse, but that was apparently not intentional.
I know nothing about Dora the Explorer, except that people are paid to impersonate her in amusement parks.
Re: Steel [We're on the third chapter now!]
Posted: Wed May 28, 2014 5:31 pm
by GodlyVirus
Drug Abuse, what???
Re: Steel [We're on the third chapter now!]
Posted: Sat Jun 07, 2014 3:42 am
by GodlyVirus
Hey hey! I'm back after speaking French. though to be fair I was never gone because I was using a differ... I mean, I was a lurker. Yes... A lurker... A lurker who put up with Creepypasta's editing format for a grand total of 2 minutes to write his story... So what was the lesson or even basic importance to this thread? All future parts of Steel will now be in French.
"Je plaisante,"
Also my signature has been changed to relect the new character development, take it as you wish.
"Je suis en train banni pour cela, Ne suis-je?"
Translation (Provided for Moderator's lesiure):
"I'm kidding,"
" I'm getting banned for this, aren't I?"
(USER WAS PERMABANNED FOR THIS POST: BAN EVASION)